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fd笑笑UID: 2791669

15# 懒人一枚
你能把你7.17的作文帖子地址给我吗？我在写作小组帖子里找不到。。。。。我也还没给你改呢。。。。

懒人一枚UID: 2838780

16# fd笑笑

我的才写了一半，今天晚上传上来吧。你的改好了，写得很好啊，学习了。

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7.20.
ABusinessmen are only motivated by desire of money
Nowadays, our media place much emphasis on inferior quality of products that we assume that businessmen are only motivated by desire of money letting their conscience alone. According to a bit of news merely, we can not assert that they only concerned about money. As far as I am concerned, a majority of businessmen are motivated by their dreams, social obligation and noble qualities.
First of all, everyone has his/her own dream, so do businessmen. On the one hand, they are motivated by money, on the other hand, the most important aspect, they are runing their business for pursuing dreams. For example, as the most successful businessman in the world, Bill Gates left college and stared his business with friends for his interest and simple dream that he wanted to improve computer operating system. So, desire of dream is the primary motivation for running a business.
The second motivation is as equal important as the first one. As one of the members in the highest class and obsessing the most social wealth, businessmen should have shouldered the obligation and responsibility for improving the development of the whole society. They do charity for social obligation. More important is that they might be the first one donating money for the victims when a disaster is happening not for money but for conscience. Besides money, there is social obligation being the motivation of businessmen.
Last but not least, honesty and faith are most significant virtue of human beings. I believe that businessmen have the same qualities as well. It is faith and honesty that are major parts of reputation for their corporation. From my point of view, in some extent, the event that Toyota recalled its products showed the faith and honesty to customer instead of harm for reputation. From this point of view , we could state that honesty and faith are factors of businessmen's motivation that are deserved to be concerned.
All in all, a businessman should regard pursuit of dream, social obligation and noble qualities as the standard of his motivation as well as wealth. In other word, without those factors, a man don't have the qualification to be a businessman.

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7.22
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Students who keep their rooms neat and organized will be more likely to succeed than students who do not.
Some people say that we could tell from the organization of one's room what the person is like. It means that if a person have a neat and organized room, he might be more likely to succeed than those who do not. I bet you probably have seen this situation before. It 's not an information without any foundation instead of following reasons.
Obviously, students who keep their rooms neat and organized have the ability of organization and coordination. They may organized their schedule or study as well. Take my roommate as an example. Her bed is always tidy with folded quilt on. Her floor is so clean that I can sit on the floor whenever I want and of course her books are lying quietly in good order on the shelf. Also, she is one of the best students in our school. Her life is well-organized too. She weak up at half past six very morning and start reading English essay no matter summer and winter and spend very night in library reading something interested for her. Form her experience, a neat and organized room and succeed must have some connection.
In addition, works could be done more efficiency in a well- organized room than in a disordered room. Since the books are put in good order, students can find the right book in seconds and leave more time for other more important things. However, in a disordered room, books are thrown in every where, which acquires much time to find a right book and leave few time for further study.
Finally, a neat and tidy room is more than a efficient helper. In a disordered room,students may stumbled over a little toy on the floor,then, the arms are broken, which may delay the process of study. Maybe sometimes students can be distracted by stink form the old trash. In a word,a neat and tidy room is significant for students ' studying atmosphere.
All in all, students who keep room neat and organized have the faculty of organization and coordination which is the most significant quality for a successful person. Also, a neat room can bring them efficiency and cozy atmosphere.

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7.27
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits
We may gradually acknowledged that an increasing number of people are eating hamburgers on the way to the office and stay up late at night and get up late in the morning. Most people ascribe this to the rising of advertising, however, I prefer to agree with that the unhealthy eating habits mainly result from the modern life style and lack of cognition of healthy eating habits.
The most significant reason as I mentioned before is the modern life style. The modern world requires efficiency and quantity so that individuals have to experience the 8 hours that is full of pressure and tension. Then, they couldn't have a very relaxing meal with colleagues under the consideration of endless task. Whereas, the traditional eating habit is that several people sit around table, ordering some dishes,and have a pleasant conversation, finishing the meal. However, under modern situation, a hamburger and a cup of coke are the most efficient eating way. People could get their orders as soon as possible because of the prepared food and the food is easy to take away in case of an emergency. In a word, the unhealthy eating habit is the product of modern life.
On the other hand, lacking of cognition of healthy eating habits is as equal important as modern life. A mount of people don't have the knowledge that humen could be lazy and in low spirits without breakfast. For instance, a person may get up at seven thirty in the morning and have to reach office at eight. So , what happen? So he starts the laborious work without eating breakfast. Then, he may feel exhausted and be worn out. What cause this to happen? His contempt of breakfast. He could actually get up at seven and finish breakfast and then got to office. The cognition of healthy eating habit is neccessary for everyone.
At last, we can't deny the side contribution of advertising on unhealthy eating habit. The advertising make the unhealthy foods so adorable to appeal customes, in some extent, they really are. Some people can't resist the temptation to get more and more unhealthy food.
All in all, the unhealthy eating habits result from not only adverting but also the modern life style and lack of cognition of healthy eating habits. As far as I am concerned, the modern life style is the main factor lead to this.

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6 Z4 s2 z7 l4 B; RThe mostsignificant reason as I mentioned before is the modern life style. The modernworld requires efficiency and quantity so that individuals have to experiencethe 8 hours that is full of pressure and tension. Then, they couldn't have avery relaxing meal with colleagues under the consideration of endless task.Whereas, the traditional eating habit is that several people sit around table,ordering some dishes, and have a pleasant conversation, (这里要加一个连词？) finishing the meal. However, undermodern situation, a hamburger and a cup of coke are the most efficient eatingway. People could get their orders as soon as possible because of the preparedfood and thefood(which) is easy to take away in case of an emergency(inhurry就可以了这个词好严重啊). In a word, the unhealthy eatinghabit is the product of modern life.

On the other hand, lacking ofcognition of healthy eating habits is as equal important as modern life. A mount of(错了，a great amountof)people don't have the knowledge that humen(human) could be lazy and in low spiritswithout breakfast(不吃早餐导致lazy？). For instance, a person may get upat seven thirty in the morning and have to reach office at eight. So, whathappen? So he starts the laborious work without eating breakfast. Then, he mayfeel exhausted and be(being) worn out. What cause this tohappen? Hiscontempt of breakfast(这是一个短语不能单独做句子). He could actually get up at sevenand finish breakfast and then got(go) to office. The cognition of healthyeating habit is necessary for(to) everyone.

At last, we can't deny the sidecontribution of advertising on unhealthy eating habit. The advertising make theunhealthy foods so adorable to appeal customes(customers), in some extent, theyreally are. Some people can't resist the temptation to get more and moreunhealthy food.

All in all, the unhealthy eatinghabits result from not only adverting but also the modern life style and lackof cognition of healthy eating habits. As far as I am concerned, the modern lifestyle is the main factor lead to this.

论点、论据、论证过程都不错。美中不足就是语法有点问题。从第三段开始滑坡，表述不够准确。加油哦！

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21# canoe03
谢谢修改！

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7月31日交

(09.02.21 NA) Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign

In the time of quickened globlization, our earth which seems extremly huge are becoming a small village. people get exotic imformation though all kinds of medium,such as internet,televisions, newspapers and magazines. However, people may be confused which is the best way to acquir foreign imformation. Personally speaking, internet is the best way for three following reasons.First of all, it can't be denied that internet is a giant store system for all kinds of information. It is a wonderful access of all aspects of foreign,like education,culture,custom,diet habit and so on. For instance,resently, I've known that Yale University put several videos of opening classes on the internet aiming that the classed will be accessed by people frome different countries as worthful resoures. By watching these classes, I am so greatful for these course that I 've learned a lot about foreign education and ,as well as ,confirmed my determine that I should do further study abroad. So, the quantity of information on the newspaper or magazine can't compare with these on the internet.
Secondly, internet provide the latest news of foreign ,wich means with the supporting of high technology, the internet alwasy get the latest news of wherever in the world.  For example, during the World Cup, people who are not in South Africa could watch games at midnight on the internet at the same time with South Africa and they know the latest score of the game as well.Whereas, the newspapers and magzines merely can pubish the sores on the second day, which is too late for football fans.
Last but not least, the diverse form of program allows information more vividly than that on the newspapers and magzines. Internet privides not only words and pictures, but also videos and sounds. Never can a person learn foreign language well without listening and speaking. People could watch series of American show to practice listening and talk with American friends through the internet to know the coutry well.
All in all, newspapers and magazine are the most ancient way learn about foreign rather than the best way. I agree with the idea that internet is the best way for more information , latest news and more vivid.

nunulongUID: 2172898

您好，文章已修改，请查收。水平有限，请包涵！

NO.xiaoyuyuUID: 2842596

31 作文已改好！加油！

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

24# nunulong [/b多谢你的建议，我写到一半的时候也意识到了这个问题。

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25# NO.xiaoyuyu
谢谢修改，第一次用写字板打文章，所以拼写单复数很多错误，以前用的是word，不在意。还要努力改正!

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

8.5日作文
见附件，是在写字板里写的。

jilinlinUID: 2396929

改好了，麻烦也帮我看看，谢谢
https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1131066-1-2.html
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fd笑笑UID: 2791669

8月17日作文辛苦同组的同学了！