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风起云落UID: 2833888

囧 为什么变色了……

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9.4

lizhengjiangUID: 2619543

已改，欢迎回批。。
哈哈，这篇确实有点。。。

47# fd笑笑

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OK了

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支持你，加油

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

50# 单钓妖鸡
谢谢你，好心人！

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9.7
考试倒计时4天
2009.8.7 NA  是否同意 parents help determined the future of their children or children allow to make their own choices.

Nowadays a mount of children, especially some adolescent whoes ages are around sixteen to twenty-five, prefer to make their own decisions rather than allowing parents do it for them. On the contrary, majorty parents tend to help determine the futrue of their children, because they do not want their children walk down the wrong way in their life time. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the parents for their abundant life experience and the love.

The first reason to support my view is that older people have more life experience which could tell chilren which is wrong or which is right. There is an old saying gose in China , the salt eaten by parents is far more than the rice eaten by children. That is to say, parents undergo much more things in life than children's do and they know the best the solution. For instance, if the children are undergoning the same situation as their parents did, the parents can help their children choose the best solution based on their own experience and the children may have a bright furture. In contrast, youngsters may have no ideas about the situation without the help of parents' opinions. Therefore,it is sagacious that parents help children to make decisions.

The second reason worth mentioning is that
parents are the people who love us most in the word. They would do everything that can benefit us even if that require their lives. It is no exaggeration that a person is not able to have a bright future without the help of parents. When we are kids or infanit with two selection, we tend to parents’ help to offer some virtues and vices about the decision. Then we can put our feet on one of them. All that parents considered are by no means bad for us, but sometimes we can not tell it from surface.

While analyzing the advantages of making decision with the help of parents, I am not saying that parents decision are always right. To some extent, the decision they make is too stable, stable and rigid. They do not see that youngsters should have some challenge to improve their ability. With the protect of parents, a person can hardly be successful in the future.

To sum up, concerning of the life experience and love, it is faily clear that children can benefit in their life development from the helping of parents.

xiaotuffUID: 2685811

我感觉文章大体思路还是比较清晰的，句式上没有改动，因为看你马上就要考试了，希望还是注意拼写错误吧，写完自己留个一两分钟把小错误改下，可以短时间有所提高。祝你成功~~~还有，有空也赶紧帮我改改吧
Nowadays amount of children, especially some adolescent whose ages are around sixteen to twenty-five, prefer to make their own decisions rather than allow parents do it for them. On the contrary, the majority of parents tend to help determine the future of their children, because they do not want their children walk down the wrong way in their life time. As far as I am concerned, I vote for the parents for their abundant life experience and the （加sincere与abundant呼应） love.% G$ a$ ?. J  I5 r
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The first reason to support my view is that older people have more life experience which could tell children which is wrong or which is right. There is an old saying (goes删掉)in China , the salt eaten by parents is far more than the rice eaten by children. That is to say, parents undergo much more things in life than children's do and they know the best the solution. For instance, if the children are undergoing the same situation as their parents do, the parents can help their children choose the best solution based on their own experience and the children may have a bright future. In contrast, youngsters may have no ideas about the situation without the help of parents' opinions. Therefore, it is sagacious that parents help children to make decisions.
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The second reason worth mentioning is  that parents are the people who love us most in the word. They would do everything that can benefit us even if that require their lives. It is no exaggeration that a person is not able to have a bright future without the help of parents. When we are kids or infant with two selections, we tend to parents’ help to offer some virtues and vices about the decision. Then we can put our feet on one of them. All that parents considered are by no means bad for us, but sometimes we can not tell it from surface.

While analyzing the advantages of making decision with the help of parents, I am not saying that parents decision are always right. To some extent, the decision they make is too stable, stable and rigid. They do not see that youngsters should have some challenge to improve their ability. With the protection of parents, a person can hardly be successful in the future.
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To sum up, concerning of the life experience and love, it is fairly clear that children can benefit in their life development from the helping of parents.

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53# xiaotuff
谢谢！

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9.9
agree or disagree it is only worth watching movies that can teach us something about real life

Nowadays an increasing number of all kinds of people, such as senior citizens, white-collar workers and students are fond of watching movies. It is fairly clear that moive do teach us something a bout real life. However, in my point of view, we can learn something about real life in many worthing ways besides watching movies.
Admittedly, some high quality moives teach us much lessons about real life. We all acknowledge that movie is a knd of art and it probably the best way to express one’s feeling about the world. Some famous directors show their unique thinking about culture, personality and human nature. They express their feeling about the real life in a vivid way, the sounds, the pictures and the words. It can easily catch our attention and cause resonance. For instance, I have learned America history from Forest Gump, I have learned love from Titanic, I have learned the cruelty of war from Pearl Harbor. On the contrary, some bad movie can not educate us instead of wasting our times. Also, some movies are made up by directors that are far away from our real life.
There are many other ways to learn about real life. The first one is sports. Sports bring us more than keeping health and fit. I believe that we can compare sports to the real life. Cooperation, competetion and perseverance are needed when we palying sports. Real life does so. In real life, we need to cooperate with others to finish a job. We have to improve ourselves to be more competitive. Also, we can not easily say “I quit”.
Another way, I think, is reading books. Everyone begins reading in their early times and ends reading till they die. We probably learn the first thing about real life from books. For example, many Chinese people do not have chance to go aboard, however, they have books that introduce culture, policy and economy about foreign countries. They recognize the real world is not like they thought that the word is only as big as China.
To sum up, watching moive is one of the best way to learn about the real life, but not the only approach. We can learn it from sports, books and other ways that I did not mention above.

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樓主好好考哈 祝你順利！

zjlkg2005UID: 2825578

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Nowadays an increasing number of all kinds of people, such as senior citizens, white-collar workers and students are fond of watching movies. It is fairly clear that moive does teach us something about real life. However, in my point of view, we can learn something about real life in many worthing(worth) ways besides watching movies.. Z* D3 x' k

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Admittedly, some high quality moives teach us much lessons about real life. We all acknowledge that movie is a kind of art and it probably the best way to express one’s feeling about the world. Some famous directors show their unique thinking about culture, personality and human nature. They express their feeling about the real life in a vivid way, the sounds, the pictures and the words. It can easily catch our attention and cause resonance. For instance, I have learned America history from Forest Gump, I have learned love from Titanic, I have learned the cruelty of war from Pearl Harbor. On the contrary, some bad movies can not educate us instead of(but just) wasting(waste) our times. Also, some movies are made up by directors that are far away from our real life.
$ O2 E7 W3 _& e! U5 ^There are many other ways to learn about real life. The first one is sports. Sports bring us more than keeping health and fit. I believe that we can compare sports to the real life. Cooperation, competetion and perseverance are needed when we palying sports. Real life does so. In real life, we need to cooperate with others to finish a job. We have to improve ourselves to be more competitive. Also, we can not easily say “I quit”.
. G8 j9 G( m* a& lAnother way, I think, is reading books. Everyone begins reading in their early times and ends reading till they die. We probably learn the first thing about real life from books. For example, many Chinese people do not have chance to go aboard, however, they have books that introduce culture, policy and economy about foreign countries. They recognize the real world is not like they thought that the word is only as big as China.
& l" K, Z& y: s1 CTo sum up, watching moive is one of the best way to learn about the real life, but not the only approach. We can learn it from sports, books and other ways that I did not mention above.


只看了两端，因为后来发现楼主审题错误  题目是问是不是只有教会人现实生活的电影才值得看……
一定要注意审题 。  
不过这种情况不太会出现的  祝楼主明日考试顺顺利利！

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

57# zjlkg2005 哎呀，我太粗心了，考试一定要看清题目！谢谢提醒！

fd笑笑UID: 2791669

9.29 独立写作 还有两周就考试了，居然才开始搞作文，头大~~上次考试是两年前了，现在水平完全屎了~~谢谢 帮我改作文的同学~~ 多提意见~~

ps：红色的词是自己拼错了，之后改正的。此篇作文很超时。。。。。。

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