是否应该取消成绩...

jasonwei2008UID: 2593889

小女子今日刚考完AW，issue碰到individuality vs. conformity.当时心慌错把individuality理解成了individualism(泪奔~~~~求拍求砸),写成了coorperation serves better than being self-oriented(内牛满面)。请教各路大仙，ETS判我跑题的概率有多大？都快大四了。。。。感觉ARGUE还写得蛮好的....我是否应该取消成绩？

草木也知愁UID: 2487572

是ISSUE142么

Most people recognize the benefits of individuality, but the fact is that personal economic success requires conformity.

你描述的很混乱 不知道“coorperation serves better than being self-oriented”是要说什么

P.S. 下回记着贴上原题，要不看你这个还得自己翻原题，回的人更少了

jasonwei2008UID: 2593889

2# 草木也知愁

多谢斑竹提醒哈！对的，就是那一题（好像是issue141吧？）。我就是理解成了个人主义和集体主义的矛盾，虽然也写了循规蹈矩的优劣，但完全忘记写个性对于个人经济利益的价值（其实也不是忘记，是把individuality搞成individualism了，杯具！），于是举的例子也不恰当（金融危机中团结协作，形成统一战线好，独立自主不好）。

草木也知愁UID: 2487572

立一下提纲吧 这样更清楚 要不看那些其实挺糊涂的

比如 ：
主题句
论点一 例子
论点二 例子
论点三 例子

P.S. 补充一下，咱们现在也只能猜，具体ETS怎么判跑题只有他们知道

jasonwei2008UID: 2593889

4# 草木也知愁
Theme: Although in certain circumstances being self-centered does bring about short-term interests, only  by means of conforming to a larger group and observing certain rules and regulations can economically benefit individuals in the long run.
point 1: humans are born to be aggressive due to their inherent egoism. Thus existing the possibility to maximize personal interests in foreseeable furture by performing individualism.
point2: Today's world stresses coorperation over competition, thereby better financial reward can be achieved by way of taking responsibility and uniting as a whole.
point3: as the world has grown to become more and more complex and interdependent, basic rules and policies may help ensure stable as well as sustainable economic growth not only for individuals but also for groups.