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TOPIC: ISSUE17 - "There are two types of laws: just and unjust. Every individual in a society has a responsibility to obey just laws and, even more importantly, to disobey and resist unjust laws."


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DATE: 2010-7-15 1:22:12



The speaker asserts that it's our duty to disobey and resist unjust laws. It is even more important than obey just laws. It might be tempting to agree with the speaker in the basis that incomplete laws exist. Nevertheless, the speaker overlooks the definition of unjust and the possible negative effect of disobeying laws for one's own perspective.


Laws are set up by the government, serving as a mean to keep the country safe and the economy steady. Admittedly laws can not cover all cases, even though it is established in order to bound what one can do. Therefore omits in laws is hard to avoid, which may affect daily lives of people and even the social security.


However, we need to analyze the proposition comprehensively and systematically. In the first place, the meaning of unjust differs from each person. As people's goals vary, laws aim at garantee the majority's benefits, which inevitably weakening others. So the word unjust is a relative conception which is hard to take everyone's benefits into concern.


Considered that to judge whether a law is just or unjust is almost impossible, the idea to disobey and resist unjust laws is related to selfishness. For instance, a thief may insist that he thieves cause he can't afford his mother's high medical care expenses, unwared that his behavior brings others into troubles. For interests of the majority, the law will punish him, though we have mercy on him. To keep people’s life stable, we are required to obey the laws, no matter whether it is just or not for personal points of view.


To obey the laws under whatever conditions doesn’t mean that some changes is not allowed. When a person feels that his or her interest is harmed by laws, certain disadvantages of the law is revealed. Obeying these laws with all subjection can only lead to accumulations of even more problems and ultimately the decay of the society. To solve the conflicts between individuals and so-called unjust laws, we needn’t to resist it violently, but to report the situation to legislations, which is the most proper way to clean up hidden dangers and maintain sustainable development.


In addition, special laws have been set up for the disabled and handicapped, which makes special group’s living more easier. Such laws cannot be connected with unjust out of our conscience.


To sum up, the assertion which classifies laws into two categories-just ones and unjust ones-is not feasible, yet we can improve it through peaceful ways, not simply obeying it or insisting it.


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The speaker asserts that it's our duty to disobey and resist unjust laws. It is even more important than obey just laws. [简单重复] It might be tempting to agree with the speaker in the basis that incomplete laws exist. Nevertheless, the speaker overlooks the definition of unjust and the possible negative effect of disobeying laws for one's own perspective.
[下文要讨论不公正法律的定义和可能的负面效果]

Laws are set up by the government, serving as a mean to keep the country safe and the economy steady[还有人民的权益怎么不说啦]. Admittedly[没有论证就随便admittedly了] laws can not cover all cases,[前后不搭] even though it is established in order to bound[这个词觉得有问题,又想不到用什么搭配] what one can do. Therefore omits in laws is hard to avoid[为什么呢?], which may affect daily lives of people and even the social security.
[TS是哪句?要写出来]

However, we need to analyze the proposition comprehensively and systematically. In the first place, the meaning of unjust differs from each person. [理由呢,虽然不是主要段落但是也要讲清楚的]As people's goals vary, laws aim at guarantee[ing] the majority's benefits, which inevitably weakening others.[why??] So the word unjust is a relative conception which is hard to take everyone's benefits into concern.

Considered that to judge whether a law is just or unjust is almost impossible, [直接impossible了!那不乱了套啦]the idea to disobey and resist unjust laws is related to selfishness. For instance, a thief may insist that he thieves [be]cause he can't afford his mother's high medical care expenses, [unaware] that his behavior brings others into troubles. For interests of the majority, the law will punish him, though we have mercy on him. To keep people’s life stable, we are required to obey the laws, no matter whether it is just or not for personal points of view.[感觉这段逻辑开始混乱了…先说判断法律公正不公正不太可能,最后又说不管公正不公正都要遵守,就是是个法就要遵守,别的不要管了。。。?]

To obey the laws under whatever conditions doesn’t mean that some changes is[are] not allowed. When a person feels that his or her interest is harmed by laws, certain disadvantages of the law is revealed. Obeying these laws with all subjection can only lead to accumulations of even more problems and ultimately the decay of the society. To solve the conflicts between individuals and so-called unjust laws, we needn’t to resist it violently, but to report the situation to legislations, which is the most proper way to clean up hidden dangers and maintain sustainable development.


In addition, special laws have been set up for the disabled and handicapped, which makes special group’s living more easier. Such laws cannot be connected with unjust out of our conscience.
[这个哪是哪。。]

To sum up, the assertion which classifies laws into two categories-just ones and unjust ones-is not feasible, yet we can improve it through peaceful ways, not simply obeying it or insisting it.

[写的有点散。看开头thesis文章应该顺着不公正法律的定义和违法法律的负面后果来展开。然后写法律却在缺陷没问题,然后说不公正法律是因为没办法把所有人利益考虑进去,这是你的定义么?不太合理吧。说法律公正与否不能判断。。。彻底乱了哈。这个题确实不好写的,自己实在想不出先参考下别人的文章吧]

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发表于 2010-7-15 21:24:56 |只看该作者
前两天每日一题有这个,去里面看看啊,有问题自己发上去。活动主动参加~~

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