Argument238 思路贴

zhangxiaohang1UID: 2705669

238, （就业/提议/对比）

The following appeared in a memorandum from the president of Mira Vista College to the college's board of trustees.

"At nearby Green Mountain College, which has more business courses and more(1) job counselors than does Mira Vista College, 90 percent of last year's graduating seniors had job offers(4) from prospective employers(5). But at Mira Vista College last year, only 70 percent of the seniors who informed the placement office that they would be seeking employment(2) had found full-time jobs(4) within three months after graduation, and only half of these graduates were employed in their major field of study(3). To help Mira Vista's graduates find employment(8), we must offer more courses in business and computer technology(6) and hire additional job counselors(7) to help students with their resumés and interviewing skills."

★★9,211





1.FA GMC-MVC: reputation, alumni/alumnae, location, different orientaion of subjects or maybe GMC has some subjects of inerviewing

2.不完全比较：MVC有找到full-time job, in three months 的要求而GMC没有

3其他因素导致就业不好，并不是business courses and more job counselors

  example:  MVC's student resource are worse than GMC's 

4草率推广：computer technology.

PS:3、Green整体有更多商业课程和就业顾问不代表人均资源更多，也许Green学生人数远多于Mira，学生平均在商业课程和就业顾问上资源比Mira更少

 https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1125505-1-1.html

huashiyiqikeUID: 2674177

邻近的Green Mountain学院拥有比Mira Vista学院更多的商业课程和就业顾问，去年其毕业生有90％得到了公司的工作机会。但去年在Mira Vista，所有通知了就业办公室说他们要就业的毕业生中只有70％的人在毕业后三个月内找到全职工作，而且这些毕业生只有一半在本专业就业。为帮助Mira Vista的毕业生找到工作，我们必须提供更多的商业和计算机技术课程，并雇佣更多的就业顾问来帮助学生提高准备简历和面试的技巧。
1、错误类比 Green也许是学生素质更高，老师更好，地理条件更好；
2、调查数据有选择性 只有通知了就业办公室的学生被调查
3、Green整体有更多商业课程和就业顾问不代表人均资源更多，也许Green学生人数远多于Mira，学生平均在商业课程和就业顾问上资源比Mira更少
4、增加商业课程和计算机技术课程并不一定能帮助不同专业的学生就业