issue107马上就考了，有改必回改

泽西木子嘻嘻UID: 2728627

TOPIC: ISSUE107 - "Instant communication systems encourage people to form hasty opinions and give quick replies rather than take the time to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned points of view."

The temp of current society is faster and faster. It is true that technology brings us convenience and makes instant communication possible for human daily life, but do the instant communication systems encourage people to form hasty opinions and give quick replies? From my observation, instant communication just decrease the time needed for communication, not force people make hasty and quick replies.

Technology brings us comfortable in life, help us unload our burden and rise the efficiency of our work and life. For instance, in the past clothes, shoes, other products are produced by a group of workers gossiping together and sewing or doing work. After Fort company initiate use the assembly line to produce cars, its efficiency are increased largely, and less workers are needed help save the cost, then the assembly line is welcomed in many fields for productivity. And the quantity of products in market become large, the prices are cheaper. The communication develop in the same way, many people can get access to more efficiency and cheap communicational way such as e-mail, telephone, video-phone and so on.

Technology brings the efficiency to communication, less time is needed to have a discussion or gossip. The less time means nothing with making hasty opinions and quick replies. It diminishes the time required to get communication. In the past, businessman traveled a lot to have meetings and discussions, doctors need use complex ways to exam patients include many chemical reactions causing a large number of time. Current technology just help diminish time waste in the past, the time communication acquired is the same as before.

However, the speaker's claims lack carefully observance and thorough analyze of the empirical life, he or she has no evidence to support his claims that with the efficiency of today people are encouraged to form quick replies. Today, with
the help of modern communication, people can get useful information, view issues from
multi-dimensional angles, and attain advise from many people including expertise and layman, all of which can help they form a deep, profound decisions. What's more, technology increase the efficiency of people's work. People can use the time saved by current communication to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned points of view.

To sum up, with the advancement of technology, people get advanced communication methods, which save time for people. In this case, the saved time can be used to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned opinions for solving problems account in the daily life.我马上就要考试了，谢谢大家

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wdx19861106UID: 2821198

The temp of current society is faster and faster. It is true that technology brings us convenience and makes instant communication possible for human daily life, but do the instant communication systems encourage people to form hasty opinions and give quick replies?(感觉这一句可以删除) From my observation, instant communication just decrease the time needed for communication, not force people make hasty and quick replies.

Technology brings us comfortable in life, helps us unload our burden and rise(raises, 用enhances？) the efficiency of our work and life.（好像听前辈们说直接上例子不好，要先解释一下） For instance, in the past（，） clothes, shoes, other products are produced by a group of workers gossiping（Clipping） together and sewing or doing work(这部分说的不太清楚). After Fort company initiate use the assembly line to produce cars, its efficiency are increased largely, and less workers are needed help save the cost, then the assembly line is welcomed in many fields for productivity. And the quantity of products in market become large, the prices are cheaper. （感觉例子举得不太好，和前面的论点不匹配）The communication develop in the same way, many people can get access to more efficiency and cheap communicational way such as e-mail, telephone, video-phone and so on.

Technology brings the efficiency to communication; less time is needed to have a discussion or gossip. The less time means nothing with making hasty opinions and quick replies. It diminishes the time required to get communication. In the past, businessman traveled a lot to have meetings and discussions, doctors need use complex ways to exam patients include many chemical reactions causing a large number of time. Current technology just help diminish time waste in the past, the time communication acquired is the same as before.（再多展开一点好些）

However（？？）, the speaker's claims lack carefully observance and thorough analyze of the empirical life, he or she has no evidence to support his claims that with the efficiency of today people are encouraged to form quick replies. Today, with the help of modern communication, people can get useful information, view issues from multi-dimensional angles, and attain advise from many people including expertise and layman, all of which can help they form a deep, profound decisions. What's more, technology increases the efficiency of people's work（和第一段重复）. People can use the time saved by current communication to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned points of view. （感觉写的有点乱）

To sum up, with the advancement of technology, people get advanced communication methods, which save time for people. In this case, the saved time can be used to develop thoughtful, well-reasoned opinions for solving problems account in the daily life.

(感觉写的太松散了， 逻辑性不太强， 兄弟多请教各位斑竹前辈吧~~)
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