ISSUE56

短发mmUID: 2840480

TOPIC: ISSUE56 - "Governments should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today rather than trying to solve the anticipated problems of the future."
WORDS: 346
TIME: 00:45:00
DATE: 2010/7/22 20:45:00

Government should focus more on solving the immediate problems of today instead of future, as the speaker contends? As to me, which item is more important depends on the meaning of problems. So I can not easily agree with this topic.
To begin with, a well-known saying is 'Yesterday is the history of today! ' and in other words, is to tell us that today will become the history of tomorrow. And if we leave our immediate problems to tomorrow, as an snowball becoming bigger and bigger, will put us into trouble. Consider as an illustration, poverty, slavery and confliction become the worldwide immediate problems of today for governments to solve, if now governments tell us they want to make arts which may become the anticipated problems of the future prosper with ignoring the presented problems of today will be ridiculous. And to this extent, it seems to choose solving the immediate problems as the important role focused by governments.
Although the immediate problems of today is important, too underlining is unnecessary. When it comes to the problems about our education of our children who will be the future, then this kind of anticipated problems of the future is urgent for governments to focus. As we all know, the harmony of our society which can save this world depends on education, especially education of ethics. Nowadays, to develop financial programs and intents of interests, governments almost put their eyes little on the education of morality. Then, many bad conditions occurred to our society. To some angle, the problems of moral education is a perpetual problem links yesterday and tomorrow, even become the lasting problems of future. If government do not inform the importance of this kind of the anticipated problems will lead to the other turns of disaster.
In sum, different meanings of the 'problems' decide the necessity of governments eyesight. Whether the problems present in today or tomorrow, it should be taken into account. As the leader of our nation, the governments should pay more attention on this view: In some conditions, problems will interchange.

zhangjunzjUID: 2658970

台湾同胞要支持。我写简体看得懂么？
但你们英文水平应该很高，怎么才这些字？
虽然字数不多，但还是可以看出楼主的流畅的写作能力，可见台湾的英语教育确实很好。
楼主的基础不是问题，关键是怎么应付考试。考试毕竟是考试，要按照考试的要求去写，但字数始终还是硬伤啊。
建议楼主多看看北美范文，学习如何把字数写多。

短发mmUID: 2840480

2# zhangjunzj
俄，我一直在大陆受教育很多年了，能说一口流利的北京话。字数是因为我来不及了，而且这篇文章缺陷很多，您肯定没有仔细看。逻辑论证上有缺陷，应该正说反说，文字表达Chinese English虽然比刚开始好很多了。有的时候能力的提高不一定要单纯靠写作，修改别人的文能更好的提高。

zhangjunzjUID: 2658970

楼主谦虚了，我看了下，你的基础还是可以的，应该是口语比较好的类型。可能写作还是练得少了