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116. "With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences.

Since the origination of human beings, the trend of trying to promote the communication develops increasingly. Globalization is the final result this trend evolves into which build a bridge between various people and various mind. Thus, the speaker asserts that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from such influence. As we know, people are enjoying the convenience and comfort brought by globalization, however, I can’t agree with the opinion entirely.

Firstly, globalization means make full use of natural resources and work force in the cheapest way. Therefore, many businessmen move their industry into the place they can find cheaper work force and natural resources. With capitalists’ profits maximized, many workers are facing losing jobs and resources basement will use up. Before long, many western countries burst waves of unemployment, the main cause is just the business movement resulted from the globalization. In addition, Hollywood improves a new technology which attaches regional code into DVD discs to reduce the loss of sales volume originated from globalization. That is to say, globalization can’t ensure every aspect of society can get benefit.

Secondly, when it comes to the area of politics, though global networks of economy and communication improved the coordination all around the world greatly, it also aggravates the unhealthily competition between some groups of benefits. For example, the problem of nuclear should have been discussed among a small number of countries, which would be solved soon. However, the problem has been discussed nearly in the whole range of the world, which made the negotiation fallen into a deadlock.

Undeniable, globalization brings a great quantity of benefits to us. In the field of art, the widely communication of artists all over the world gives birth to a huge number of new works of music or drawing, in the opening ceremony of Beijing Olympic games, the famous singers from china and UK cooperated to perform a perfect song, which would be a legacy for all the humans.

To draw a conclusion, there is no doubt that many aspects of society will benefit greatly from international influences, however, there still be some fields affected by globalization, which even impede the development in the future.

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116. "With the growth of global networks in such areas as economics and communication, there is no doubt that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from international influences. Since the origination of human beings, the trend of trying to promote （the developing of ）the communication develops increasingly. Globalization is the final result this trend evolves（invloves） into which build a bridge between various people and various mind. Thus, the speaker asserts that every aspect of society—including education, politics, the arts, and the sciences—will benefit greatly from such influence. As we know, people are enjoying the convenience and comfort brought by globalization, however, I can’t agree with the opinion entirely. Firstly, globalization means make full use of natural resources and work force in the cheapest way. Therefore, many businessmen move their industry into the place they can find cheaper work force and natural resources. With capitalists’ profits maximized, many workers are facing losing jobs and resources basement will use up. Before long, many western countries burst waves of unemployment, the main cause is just the business movement resulted from the globalization. In addition, Hollywood improves a new technology which attaches regional code into DVD discs to reduce the loss of sales volume originated from globalization. That is to say, globalization can’t ensure every aspect of society can get benefit.建议把这一段的第二句放到第一句的位置上，还有就是老美就是做这种坏事的人，他们会不会反对大家这么说呀 Secondly, when it comes to the area of politics, though global networks of economy and communication improved the coordination all around the world greatly, it also aggravates the unhealthily competition between some groups of benefits. For example, the problem of nuclear should have been discussed among a small number of countries, which would be solved soon. However, the problem has been discussed nearly in the whole range of the world, which made the negotiation fallen into a deadlock.总感觉这一段还有话没有说完 Undeniable, globalization brings a great quantity of benefits to us. In the field of art, the widely communication of artists all over the world gives birth to a huge number of new works of music or drawing, in the opening ceremony of Beijing Olympic games, the famous singers from china and UK cooperated to perform a perfect song, which would be a legacy for all the humans. To draw a conclusion, there is no doubt that many aspects of society will benefit greatly from international influences, however, there still be some fields affected by globalization, which even impede the development in the future. 既然你选择这两方面，为什么不把education也加进来呢？ 还有就是你的讨论不够深入，加油