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dy008UID: 2284812

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zinccopperUID: 2403125

不好意思，最近太忙，现在才改好

fannie227UID: 2732547

改的不对的请见谅

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fanfan1247UID: 2591669

修改好啦~~
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0814 fanfan1247修改chen.doc (24 KB, 下载次数: 9)

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alex0795UID: 2704914

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Parents should allow children to make their own choices rather than determine their children’s future for them.

Why the parents like to allow children to make their own choices? I think the parents want their sons to have a dependent future for themselves. In my opinion, I have two reasons to support my viewpoint.

First of all, parents will become older while their children grow up. So, children need to determine their future, nobody can help them, especially on the money issue. For example, in America, numerous of 好词 children should take a part-time though they are very young. In their mind, they do not very care about the money but want to have some experience about the working career. Those experiences tell them that earning the money is very difficult; they should save the money when parents give them. 这个例子很好啊！！！As a result, when the children grow up, they know how to save the money so they can spend that money on other places they need. So, in this case, we can understand that the children should economize the money before they choose to do something.

Basically, having their own choices can practice children’s psychology bearing capacity 好词 ！！ to be strong. Because when they grow up, they will have to make choices on various things just by themselves, such as making a choice about the work when they grow up. Parents should let children to have their own choices when they are young; when they grow up, they can easily select what the way is the best in their future. For instance, when the children grow up, they should have some chances to choices which the work they like, if they do not have any stronger psychology, they will be afraid about it because they cannot bear any mistakes. In this example, it is indispensable 好词 that children should need a stronger psychology bearing capacity. How to practice it? Only the parents allow to them to make their own choices.

However, the children sometimes make a mistake after they choose, if they have a wrong answer, abundant of parents will never give them another chance to choice. In fact, I think parents do not be afraid about the children when they choose the wrong answer. Although they 前句的主句是parents  这句的they 指代children  这样不好吧  select were wrong this time, they already have an experience about it. So, next time they understand they should not have a same mistake.

alex0795UID: 2704914

不知道为什么穿不了附件    只能贴上来了

jeanne_zjUID: 2733238

改好了~
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jeanne_zjUID: 2733238

你文章传错了。。。给我的是另一个组员的。。。