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题目：ISSUE48 - "The study of history places too much emphasis on individuals. The most significant events and trends in history were made possible not by the famous few, but by groups of people whose identities have long been forgotten."
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日期：2010-8-2 下午 07:39:35

【i原文】"John Boselong, is the hero in G island,who kill thousands of Japanese soldiers", "Balack Obama, who is honored the Nobel pease przie,will lead we American to the dream age of freedom and domacracy".
People,live half centuries ago,must be familiar with J.Boselong, while current people treat Obama as their living ideal.
Human's history is always full of heroes.If we compare human history to the dark sky, then the heroes must be the briliant stars sparking through the night.Some people, who have read the books of history, may complain the history of human are similiarly the biolography of our heroes.Is it fair for others, who contribute their sweat and blood, even life, but forgot in a unknown corner by their decendent? The speaker may have the same worry.
According to me, I agree with the speaker's assertion in some extent. In the history of fields which require the power of whole people, such as the society,we truly place too much emphasis on famous individuals in the past; while in the history of fields which regard individual intelligence, it is needed to emphasis individual ability.
In the river of
history of the development of society,we have drive our boat for thousands of years.The individuals well-known by us is the arhcor,who decide the direction, while contemporary groups of people, give the boat more speed to overcome the impede of the water ^.Without the lead of the famous few, people have no idea to unit to a positive direction continuously, which leave the boat circling in origin.Without the support of people, the famous few cannot carry the whole boat advancing, under the impede of the past water.
However,in the field of science, things are totally different.In the development of science, the inspire of some geniue may equal to, even excess the effort of million of others.(Newton .Enitean.)However,we should not .jue ren.
In retrospect of the human history, it seems the human nature to find the hero,but not the people who study history.Just like God,the meaning of hero is suppress the power they can do, but a symble.The human's history is full of traps and difficuties, we need the lead of hero to go in the right direction; we need the legency of hero to prove human are capable to achieve the goal only with the help of god .
In sum, the


【i修改】
"John Basilone, is the hero in Guadalcanal island in Pacific War, who kill thousands of Japanese soldiers", "Barack Obama, who is named 2009 Noble Peace Prize laureate ,will lead we American, even the world to the dream age of freedom and democracy".
People, live half centuries ago, must be familiar with J.Basilone, while current people treat B.Obama as their living ideal.
Human's history is always full of heroes. If we compare human history to the dark sky, then the heroes must be the brilliant stars sparking through the night. Some people, who have read the books of history, may complain the history of human are similarly the biography of our heroes. Is it fair for others, who contribute their sweat and blood, even life, but forgot in a unknown corner by their descendent? The speaker may have the same worry.
According to me, I agree with the speaker's assertion in some extent. In the history of fields which require the power of whole people, such as the society, we truly place too much emphasis on famous individuals in the past; while in the history of fields which regard individual intelligence, it is needed to emphasis individual ability.
In the river of history of the development of society, we have driven our boat for thousands of years. The individuals well-known by us is the rudder of human boat, who decide the direction, while contemporary groups of people, give the boat more speed to overcome the impede of the water ^.Without the lead of the famous few, people have no idea to unit to a positive direction continuously, which leave the boat circling in the same area[原地打转]. Without the support of people, the famous few cannot carry the whole boat advancing, under the hinder of the past water, the obsolete force.
However, in the field of science, things are totally different. In the development of science, the inspiration of some genius may equal to, even excess the effort of millions of others. It is unwilling to imagine without the Newton’s Laws, we may still wrangle for the theory both applied to the earth and in and out of the sky, needless to talk about the Industrial Revolution. Even if we succeed to figure out the Newton’s laws gradually for hundreds years, perhaps, without the insight of Einstein we are still complain for the two dark clouds, the tiny but deadly flaw of Newton’s Theory. In such field, emphasizing more importance on individual intelligence, the history is mainly built by the few giant.

In retrospect of the human history, it seems the human nature to find the hero, but not the people who study history. Just like God, the meaning of hero overruns the power they can do, but a symbol. The human's history is full of traps and difficulties, we need the lead of hero to go in the right direction; we need the legend of hero to prove human are capable to achieve the goal.（其实还想让步的说下，现在历史的研究，已经不仅仅局限于个人，而是研究社会层面，经济，文化的原因。）
In sum, in several, field we do place too much emphasis on individuals. And we should show more respect to the groups of people. On the contrary, in some other fields, events and trends are made most by the famous genius, it is reasonable to remember their outstanding identities.



总结，英语语言表达能力明显限制我的发挥（打字）。准备背范文来解决。

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千万不能背范文啊， 会被判抄袭的。。。。。God bless you

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但 没有 其他。提高 语言的方法来 2# charleqin

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谢谢 求PP