Argument201 提纲及名词区别问题求助~附习作

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TOPIC: ARGUMENT201 --The citizens of Forsyhe have adopted a healthier lifestyle. Their responses to a recent survey show that in their eating habits they conform more closely to government nutritional recommendations than they did ten years ago. Furthermore, there has been a fourfold increase in sales of food products containing kiran, a substance that a scientific study has shown reduces cholesterol. This trend is also evident in reduced sales of sulia, a food that few of the healthiest citizens regularly eat.

DATE: 2010/8/7 9:19:58

提纲如下：
1。合理饮食包括均衡营养和良好的习惯（按时吃饭，吃早餐，细嚼慢咽等）。文章只提了第一个方面不足以说明人们good eating habit
2。即使合理饮食，healthy lifestyle也还包括其他方面，如规律锻炼，合理作息等


问题是：
1。提纲合适吗？不确定证据说的是他们合理膳食这个大范围还是饮食营养这个小范畴？如此就假定人家是说合理膳食来批，可以吗？？
2。如果可以，这三个名词怎么区别呢？合理膳食，均衡营养，饮食规律
用有道查，balance diet , dietary，rational diet,healthy eating habit



The author concludes that citizens of Forsythe have adopted a healthier lifestyle, merely based on a survey of citizens’ eating habits. However,a healthy lifestyle has a broader connotations other than healthy eating habit, let alone the evidence provided is not enough to indicate citizen of Forythe do have a healthier balance diet.

To begin with, the author fails to provide information about other aspects about the citizens' lifestyle such as their exercise habits, sleeping habits, and so forth. With the increasing development of economy, it's entirely possible that citizens can afford healthier but expensive food. On the contrary, to catch the rapid step of life, they may often have to stay up till night to tackle the heavier pressure of work, and meanwhile less time on a regular exercise .And also it's likely that they drink and smoke more frequently to manage business or relax themselves. It's a common phenomenon in modern society. If citizens in Forsythe just have adopted a healthier eating habits while ignores other aspects of a healthy lifestyle, it's unconvincing to claim they have a healthier lifestyle than before.

Not to mention, the evidences provided is not enough to demonstrate they do have a rational diet which requires both balance diet and good dietary habit. First of all, there is no information about citizens’ eating habit, such as whether they eat regularly, insist eating breakfast, chew fully and maintain good eating mood. In addition, government nutritional recommendation is not necessary a scientific criterion of healthy diet. Yet people may just afford more healthy food as life standard has improved greatly than 10 year ago. (10years如何攻击？？)Furthermore, a fourfold increase in sales of healthy food products containing kiran may be very expensive and all sold outsides or just largely purchased by those wealthy people, while most middle and lower class of people still cannot afford them. As for the reduced sales of sulia, food that few of the healthiest citizens regularly eat, this can not indicate most citizens do not eat them. It's probably that only the few amounts of the healthiest people know their bad effects. And also maybe sulia is cheaper and tastes good which leads to a mass consumption among most people without knowledge of its bad effects on health. Yet there is no evidence to demonstrate sulia has a detrimental effect on health.

In sum, to strengthen the argument that citizens of Forsyhe have adopted healthier lifestyle, it's necessary to ensure that most citizens have met the criterion of a healthier lifestyle including not only a healthier eating habit but also other facets like regular exercise, reasonable work and rest and so on..