ISSUE 11

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ISSUE 11  
All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.

立场：反对

开头：作者观点——反对——原因：太过理想化，缺乏可行性，忽略很多问题。

第二段：作者观点理想主义：1）富裕国家和平穷国家虽然有共同问题，但主次不同
2）理想地认为依靠办一所大学就能解决问题

第三段：作者观点缺乏可行性：1）文化上：宗教信仰的冲突，上课语言的选择
2）办学经费，办学的地点等

第四段：承认想法的建设性，提出用互联网的方式

第五段：概述不同意建全球大学的理由，和建虚拟大学的提议。

The speaker recommended that all nations should help establish a global university aimed to solve the world's most persistent social problems.  Kind as he is, his suggestion is indeed idealistic, and lack of practicablity in my view, because the speaker failed to take the details into consideration.

A global university, designed to solve the world's most persistent social problems, resembles the "Utopia" described by Thomos More. For reasons, initially, it is the true nations share multiples social problems: take ethic depravity, unemployment, drug abuse, hunger, and theft for instance.  However, what must be pointed out is the different priority among these common problems between the poor and the rich nations.  In Africa, for example, it is quite natural for the leaders there to set perishing the hunger as their first priority, while unemployment and drug abuse might catch more attention in those developed western countries.  Furthermore, I really doubt the necessity for those African nations to support such a program instead of dealing with the famine and health issues on their lands.  Secondly, holding the belief that a global university can solve those tough social problems is no more than a daydream.  Admittedly, university is a good place for persons to have brain storms, change their views, and spread their theory.  Nevertheless, we should keep in mind: theories alone cannot deal with any practical problems, especially those social persistent problems. They actually require lots of practical training. Therefore, I really doubt whether those well-trained graduates of global university can contribute to solving these social problems.   

Besides, lots of practicable problems float when we further consider establishing such a university.  Culture indifference came as the first problem.  Since it is a global university, students with various backgrounds and regions will study and live together.  It is quite easy for them to conflict with each other on those sensible issues: homosexuality, nationalism and so forth.  Besides, which language should be used in the classroom and also the textbook?  Will it cause paronomasia? Also, where should the global university be build, and who gives the money?  All of these problems should be considered carefully, or it might lead to an international dispute.

Although the suggestion--all nations should support the development of a global university solving the world's most persistent social problems—is not that mature, the idea it carries should be encouraged.  That is all nations should make a joint venture on common social issues.  Thanks to the rapid developing IT technology, internet has made the cross-national talks and online education possible.  Hence, a virtual global university might be a good choice in the future.

To sum up, owing to the unreality and unpracticability mentioned above, it is unwise to establish a global university targeting to solve the world's most persistent social problems in current situation. However, a campaign of building a digital global university supported by those affluent nations might be a good alternative.

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All nations should help support the development of a global university designed to engage students in the process of solving the world's most persistent social problems.
立场：反对
开头：作者观点——反对——原因：太过理想化，缺乏可行性，忽略很多问题。
第二段：作者观点理想主义：1）富裕国家和平穷国家虽然有共同问题，但主次不同
2）理想地认为依靠办一所大学就能解决问题
第三段：作者观点缺乏可行性：1）文化上：宗教信仰的冲突，上课语言的选择
2）办学经费，办学的地点等

第四段：承认想法的建设性，提出用互联网的方式
第五段：概述不同意建全球大学的理由，和建虚拟大学的提议。
The speaker recommended that all nations should help establish a global university aimed to solve the world's most persistent social problems.【改写的不错】  Kind as he is,【独立主格】 his suggestion is indeed idealistic, and lack of practicablity 【practicability】in my view, because the speaker failed to take the details into consideration.
【大众开头，简明】
A global university, designed to solve the world's most persistent social problems, resembles the "Utopia" described by Thomos 【Thomas】More. For reasons, initially, it is the true nations share multiples social problems: take ethic depravity, unemployment, drug abuse, hunger, and theft for【觉得as好，还有，可以点例其中一点】 instance.  However, what must be pointed out is the different priority among these common problems between the poor and the rich nations.【SE】  In Africa, for example, it is quite natural for the leaders there to set perishing the hunger as their first priority, while unemployment and drug abuse might catch more attention in those developed western countries.  Furthermore, I really doubt the necessity for those African nations to support such a program instead of dealing with the famine and health issues on their lands. 【没懂】 Secondly, holding the belief that a global university can solve those tough social problems is no more than a daydream.  Admittedly, university is a good place for persons to have brain storms, change their views, and spread their theory.  Nevertheless, we should keep in mind: theories alone cannot deal with any practical problems, especially those social persistent problems. They actually require lots of practical training. 【可能世界大学就是，这样的。不过，没关系，世界大学的定义是writer自己顶顶】Therefore, I really doubt whether those well-trained graduates of global university can contribute to solving these social problems.   
Besides, lots of practicable problems float【觉得remain好，或者动态感的haunt】 when we further consider establishing such a university.  Culture indifference came as the first problem.  Since it is a global university, students with various backgrounds and regions will study and live together.  It is quite easy for them to conflict with each other on those sensible issues: homosexuality, nationalism and so forth.  Besides, which language should be used in the classroom and also the textbook?  Will it cause paronomasia? Also, where should the global university be build, and who gives the money?  All of these problems should be considered carefully, or it might lead to an international dispute.【建议，别放那么多
并列的可以回答的问句。一般
放问句
不是设问就是不能回答的反问。。我可以以一个UN的模式回答你的所有问题。当然个人建议】
Although the suggestion--all nations should support the development of a global university solving the world's most persistent social problems—is not that mature, the idea it carries should be encouraged.  That is all nations should make a joint venture on common social issues.  Thanks to the rapid developing IT technology, internet has made the cross-national talks and online education possible.  Hence, a virtual global university might be a good choice in the future.
To sum up, owing to the unreality and unpracticability【impracticability】 mentioned above, it is unwise to establish a global university targeting to solve the world's most persistent social problems in current situation. However, a campaign of building a digital global university supported by those affluent nations might be a good alternative.

LZ 45min 写完的吗？这个字数 不错了。。
其实呢， issue我一直有一个疑问，需不需要写 改进方案？【请教版主了】
paronomasia

lz的文章是至今我见过的，逻辑最清楚的。语言也蛮多变的。
Lz坚决的反对的反对态度也很值得肯定
不过 ，不够insightful。基本是就是，打在表面，缺乏实例。要是我写的话，举个例子，
B1 全球大学的建立，由于各国地位不均等，反而仅仅解决大国利益，使全球化的问题转嫁到小国。例子：二战年前，国际联盟，死活不管日本侵略中国。

总结：主要问题在于好的例子。

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谢谢你的建议：） 修改去了，嘿嘿