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yangduotongUID: 2793236

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life5 N$ F) \2 r1 c* |



Depending on personal experience, personal type and emotional concern, we find that some people at the present society hold the idea that unless exhibit individual’s strengths and accomplishments, people would never be success in the future. From my personal perspective, nevertheless, I disagree with this assertion, and my point would be illustrated expressly through the following aspects.

Originally, I would concede that insuring people known one’s strengths would enhance one’s career in some measures, while it might knowledge the opponents also. Furthermore, the opponents would avoid confront with one’s strengths straightly, but focus on one’s weakness. Especially when rivaling with enemies in the war, the power of the weapons and the number of armies would be regarded as the top confidential projects. Providing that the enemies found these statists, they might acknowledge the real capability of their opponents and made the efficient strategies which might finally determine the war.  Therefore, it would be unreasonable and unwarranted to show out the personal strengths and accomplishments.

Simultaneously, making other people acknowledge one’s advantages and glorious experience was not the only way to lead people toward success, since the personalities as honest, devoted, and generous are serving indispensible roles. For instance, plagiarism, one of the most shame behaviors, has been becoming common in the field of academic. When professors in some certain realms have obtained enough experience, achievement, and prizes, they might become arrogant and arbitrary. What is worse, these disadvantages might nourish corruption and plagiarism that they would no longer write the essays or finish the experiments by themselves. Without the honest, and spirit of purity in academic, some of the professors could hardly achieve higher after series honors they have got. Accordingly, merely magnifying one’s individual experience and strengths would scarcely reach the goal, albeit it had captured numerous people’s attentions. The personalities are much more important.

Finally, keeping modest is playing a vital role in human personality. Naturally, people with great talents or glorious experience might suffer the jealousy. For example, there is no doubt that most people would not feel comfortable and relax when sitting with anyone who is boasting his conquest or achievement. Consequently, people might inevitably lose their chances for promotion and big raise because of the self-conceit, arrogance or even being hindered by people who envy them. In a word, keeping modest, and prevent the achievement or ambition being known would be an effective way for people to head to the final success.  


To sum up, as the evidences above demonstrated, it would be unacceptable and inconvincible to make sure other people to acknowledge one’s personal achievement. Moreover, amplifying one’s experience and honor would create some counterproductive that might restrain personal careers. Hence, retaining modest and keeping humble enough would be thorough and warranted.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? If you do not make sure other people (especially influential people or your employers) know about your strengths and accomplishments, you will never get successful in life5 N$ F) \2 r1 c* |! |' W  J; l& n: J6 x. d6 U
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Depending on personal experience, personal type and emotional concern, we find that some people at the present society hold the idea that unless exhibit individual’s strengths and accomplishments, people would never be successful in the future. From my personal perspective, nevertheless, I disagree with this assertion, and my point would be illustrated expressly through the following aspects.

Originally, I would concede that insuring people known one’s strengths would enhance one’s career in some measures, while it might knowledge(?注意語法) the opponents also. Furthermore, the opponents would avoid confront with one’s strengths straightly, but focus on one’s weakness. Especially when rivaling with enemies in the war, the power of the weapons and the number of armies would be regarded as the top confidential projects. Providing that the enemies found these statists, they might acknowledge the real capability of their opponents and made the efficient strategies which might finally determine the war.  Therefore, it would be unreasonable and unwarranted to show out the personal strengths and accomplishments.

Simultaneously, making other people acknowledge one’s advantages and glorious experience was not the only way to lead people toward success, since the personalities as honest, devoted, and generous （honesty,devotion and generosity）are serving indispensible roles. For instance, plagiarism, one of the most shame behaviors, has been becoming common in the field of academic. When professors in some certain realms have obtained enough experience, achievements, and prizes, they might become arrogant and arbitrary. What is worse, these disadvantages might nourish corruption and plagiarism that they would no longer write the essays(用articles 或dissertation) or finish the experiments by themselves. Without the honesty, and spirit of purity in academic, some of the professors could hardly achieve higher after series honors they have got. Accordingly, merely magnifying one’s individual experience and strengths would scarcely reach the goal, albeit it had captured numerous people’s attentions. The personalities are much more important. % f! ^) S9 z! a8 q% m: `6 [

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Finally, keeping modest is playing a vital role in human personality. Naturally, people with great talents or glorious experience might suffer the jealousy. For example, there is no doubt that most people would not feel comfortable and relaxed when sitting(用sit 或去掉when) with anyone who is boasting his conquest or achievement. Consequently, people might inevitably lose their chances for promotion and big raise because of the self-conceit, arrogance or even being hindered by people who envy them. In a word, keeping modest, and prevent the achievement or ambition being known would be an effective way for people to head to the final success.  
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To sum up, as the evidences above demonstrated, it would be unacceptable and inconvincible to make sure other people to acknowledge one’s personal achievement. Moreover, amplifying one’s experience and honor would create some counterproductive that might restrain personal careers. Hence, retaining modest and keeping humble enough would be thorough and warranted.

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lynn27UID: 2774627

改好了放文档里哈。
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