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Sports teaches us lessons about life' I7 ~0 r: c! W4 |, K
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Well, to this statement I can’t be more agree with it. Sports, developing with the social progress, have (has,用单数,如sports is good for health)been the spirit of the world. Of course, its specific properties, such as persistence, never giving up when confront with difficulties and how to treat the relationship in reputation,money and daily life are (are 去掉)always give us vivid lessons about our modern life.& `" @/ o% |, h0 G
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When coming to persistence, someone would treat it with contempt and holds the idea that it’s not a big deal. Yes, maybe we all have something been doing day after day, such as housework, and so we take this kind of repeating such matter as persistence for grounded. However, we may ignore a key point that the athletes exercise most of a day with highly-concentrated and highly-tensed(with 后面加名词,不能直接加形容词). They repeat this unbelievable process day after day and can not stop even they get the gold medal of Olympic Games. In our daily life, if we make our mind and concentrate in an important thing, I think we would be successful in the end.5 W3 U! o3 x- ~+ _
Also, I think in any Championship or any other kind of sports game, making mistakes is unavoidable. However, how to tackle with this problem seems to be crucial for their future performance. There are many instances about some athletes who had a fault in the competition or perform not that well as usual, they choose a negative way to handle these problems. Some of them quit the sportsdom, and the others would do worse than before. We must draw a lesson from those important aspects and put them into practice in our daily life. No matter what difficulties we will face and no matter how tough they may be, we could not lose our hearts and give up our dreams, we should adjust our attitude and continuously conclude the reason why we have made this mistake and how we avoid it in the future.
我觉得蓝色标记的那段话,和上一段的坚持不懈倒是一致的。
In addition, how the athletes deal with their reputation and money after they are famous has alerted us. Tiger Woods, has earned more headlines in newspapers about his dishonesty in his marriage and sexual scandals than his excellent golf skills and numerous prizes. What he has done challenged the social moral, and people seem change their solid mind about Tiger. I think it’s the so-called: .
这个论点我没有想到,很新颖
In conclusion, sports does a good teacher for our life, we must realize it, draw lessons from it and keep them in mind.
最后一段如果能总结一下前文,就更好了,有点短。 |
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