ruiquan2003的作文帖-8月24日作业

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8月24日作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: young people should try several different jobs before they take a long term career.

Jobs experience benefits



In such a  modern industrial society, changing a job is quite common among employees. Although the reasons for changing a job is various and sometimes may be critical, the tendency of trying new jobs even in different aspects seem to be obvious. To the young people who just stepped into the society, both challenge and chances are waiting for them. In my view, trying several different jobs before  taking a long term career could benefit young people.



As we know, everyone expects his career proper to him. However, we would not know what is proper unless we try it all by ourself. In this way, trying different jobs could help us to identify the most proper job for us. What is more, having experience in different position is always helpful. For instance, once being a tutor in the past, the ability of expressing would be increased, then the job of sale or tour guide would benefit from it.



Another important advantage of trying different jobs is about building a relationship net . The relationship resource might be one of the most valuable resource in almost any position.  Having experience in different jobs, especially in different aspects could help to build a widely-spread relationship net in the society, which means many potential opportunities. The career in the future could have such a strong propulsor. Anyway, the skill of communicating with different in different intercourse and business condition could be improved.



Besides, in this wonderful world, none of us might be unwilling to face up tools and process all the same during whole life. Trying new could add fantastic taste and bitter-sweet memory in our life. Striving in different positions at a young age is the legend of every successful man, from which may they learn the most in their life.

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8月26日作文作业：

26日作业：Do you agree or disagree with the following statement : newspapers and magazines are the best ways to learn about a foreign country


As the communication on economy, culture and society of people living in the earth village getting more and more frequently, many ways to learn about the foreign counties are introduced to us. Among these methods of learning a different culture and nation, newspapers and magazines are in an important position. However, if we have to select a best way to learn a foreign country, newspapers and magazines may not be our best choice.

One obviously character of newspapers and magazines is they are flat published in regular by certain editors and journalists. This character given newspapers and magazines a great disadvantage,that is the information brought by newspapers and magazines are limited in both quality and quantity. For instance, during the age of cold war, news media in the USSR are limited strictly. In this way, information about the western world that the readers could get from the newspapers and magazines of Russia could not be enough to study the western countries for the Russian public. What is more , the information about western often remained to be negative ,which means readers could not get an entire sight . Such phenomenon exist today as well, even in some countries of best  freedom .

A newly developed media named internet could be a way better than newspapers and magazines. As the internet is an ocean of information without an edge, both quality and quantity could not be matched. Through the internet, we could easily search different ideas, sights and opinions ,which is critical helpful for us to learn the aspects which seldom mentioned in newspapers and magazines. The disadvantage of newspaper and magazines could be reduced. What is more, the internet could help people to make friends with others of foreign countries, which remains to be a even better way.

Anyway, having a life experience in a foreign country and contact with its people ought to be the best way to comprehend a foreign country and culture. Only by experiencing all by oneself could he have a deep impression and understanding. Newspaper and magazines are important assistant ways to learn the world outside in a certain degree, however, could not be the best.   

求答疑：开篇时一些背景说明有无必要，可以一开始就摆明“...is not good”吗？
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独立作文8月28日作业求狠批
09.02.27NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: a job with more vacation time but a low salary is better than a job with a high salary but less vacation time




As various attitudes towards working and living are held by the people in modern society , traditional ideas on the work has been impacted seriously. Besides income, more and more emotional factors such as free , independent or relax feeling might be considered when the people are choosing jobs for themselves. On the other hand , some people are still holding the practical idea that the job must support the life of one or one family, especially on material aspect.  In my view , it is not easy to say if a job with low salary and more vacation is better than a job with high salary and less vacation. It depends.



To begin with, the attitudes and goals of different people could be of great difference. Usually, jobs with high salary and less vacation are more difficult and require more skills and sacrifice for the people. Some people may have an ambition to build a great career, while others may just want to have a peaceful and convinent family life. For instance, one guy in our room is always busy in study, he went out early in the morning and came back at almost eleven o'clock in the night everyday. He believes he should make a big difference in the field of electrical engineering and tried best to reach this goal. While another one was not so eager to grab the first place. Though go to study room regularly and had a score without any failed, he thought his future would be at his hometown, in a power plant which has long holiday in a small city. The life there would be easy and relaxed, he emphasized that's what he wants.



In addition, the situation of a person at a certain age could also tell what kind of work and life is proper. To the young people who are just to step in to the society, the jobs for they should be helpful for them to learn and gain experience. If the job is filled up with holidays and simple tasks, it will not be worth for young people to realize the fact of society. In this way, jobs with challenge and exciting missions may inspire the intelligence and bravery of young people, which is beneficial for them to build a strong personality. A job with more tasks and high salary does good for them in both personality and economy. However,for other people, for instance, middle-aged female with children and old to look after, the duty of family might be more important than gaining income from the job. Then , a job with longer holiday and lower paid might be a good choice.

In conclusion, there's no meaning to discuss whether a job with low salary and long vacation or a job with high salary and short vacation is better without the certain condition being taken into consideration. To any jobs, better or worse could just be identified by the real need of a person in a certain time.

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31日的作业
8月31日 09.05.30NA  do you agree or disagree with the following statement: younger school children (ages five to ten) should be required to study art and music in addition to math, science,history and language



As the opinion referring " never let the children fall behind the starting line " becomes more and more popular among parents, the  education of younger children aged 5 to 10 is a critical task for young parents. Math, science, history and  language are required to learn at school, the necessity of these objects is agreed by the public. Besides, in my view, the study ion art and music comprehensively is also in need for younger children.



According to the study of scientists, learning art and music could help to develop a person's right part brain. For the younger children, attending art and music class is a very good way to explore the potential capacity of right part brain, which is of greatt meaning to develop children's intelligence. Even in their adult age, the education of art and music at the early age could still benefit them.  For instance, a Chinese scientist named Qian Xueseng was good as violin. In the book, he emphasized the importance of music and art on the inspiration to him on science during the tough time.

Another point of learning art and music remains to be the building of personality. Art and music could make a person elegant and trace.  gentlemen and fair ladies should be able to have an understanding on classical music and painting in our impression , instead of all rock music and cartoon all the day round. This is a matter of personality, not wealth or fame. A person with a good taste of art and music could always bring an atmosphere of being well-educated. On the contrary,  we can see often see some successful businessmen acting rude in public, this may just illuminate the lack of education.



Besides , children with great intelligence on art and music could also find a stage by parents and teachers. The success of Merzart was not independent from his music education. Some parents even believe learning instruments or painting is a gift for the children, which could become a skill. In all, learning music and art should be required for all the younger children.

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9月2日作业
09.06.12NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?  Students should not take part-time jobs while they are studying in universities
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There are various activities in the campus life , among which is taking a part-time job.As more and more students realize the importance to be independent, taking a part-time job might be a good stage for them to test and show themselves. Taking account for every aspects, the part-time jobs would benefit the students in university.

To students who left home and started to be independent for the first time, taking a part-time job could be helpful to achieve social experience. Positions such as selling or teaching younger students could teach students to increase skills in contact with others. Through the part-time job, students would learn the meaning of responsibility and better understanding to their parents. For instance, I have a good friend in high school who used to be playing around everyday and didn't help to do any housework. However ,after entering the university and taking a job as a worker in a supermarket, he became much more responsible and reliable. When he told me his experience and storys in the supermarket, he felt it was one of the greatest lesson ever attended.

Taking part-time job could also help the students on economy. Our university offers positions in library and some office for students who are tight in economy. The work there is not very hard and usually do not require too much time.  Study and daily life of those who take them would not be influenced too much.  Some students may go out to be a tutor and gain more. There used to be a girl in our university who took six positions as a tutor at one period, in this way she afford all the fees for her study and life. Her strong spirit was admired by everyone in our campus.

Besides, taking a part-time job is a preparation for students before entering society to face up to real competation. To some majors like software engineering, students could even practise programming in a part-time job. Anyway, part-time job worths trying for students.

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