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As the rapid development of transport veichle in current day（好像没有见过类似表述，不知是合适啊）, we all cheer the convenience of planes, trains and web of bus stations all over the world. To this case, people became more prone to travel on purpose of relaxing and extending horizons, either domestic or abroad.（这句表达不错） Some people hold the point that if there is a chance to travel, one should better travel abroad due to(改为for是不是好一些) exotic experiences. However, others hold the contrary opinion（view） that we should only have a journey not so far. As far as I concerned,
I prefer the later opinion that domestic journey is better one result from its effect on ourselves and our cities. I will give concrete discussion as follows.

Apparently, no one cannot admits the point(advantage) that traveling abroad is very attractive result from(可以用because of避免重复) not only our fantastic imaginations of other counties but also different cultures of these countries. For example, Greek, one of the famous countries, has a very long history, be (is)considered as origin of our human-beings civilization. When I dream to come to it(go there), white-- temp and(删掉and) come to my mind. Furthermore, to travel abroad can provide numerous knowledge and experiences which are useful for one’s life. Also, to go abroad during vacation promote our understanding of other countries, it can provoke(provoke是挑起，激发的意思，使用不恰当) communication among nations. That are benefits that people can obtain by having a foreign jouney.

Even though there are considerable advantages to go abroad, advantages of enjoying domestic scenes is more obvious. Firstly, comparing with foreign language, people can have fluent communications with each other. One has little chance to be lost on street just because of lacking of knowledge about foreign language. Also, it’s much safer to stay in motherland than traveling abroad.(这点举些例子会更好) To these extents, not going abroad（having a domestic trip） seems can bring more benefits for people than gong abroad.

What’s more, encouraging people having journey in their own nation can enhance the country’s economic development. Lots of money has been spent on traveling, contributing to build more highways and flight stations. The more the travelers are, the more tax the country has. Moreover, how many people are really aware of(know deeply about) their mother land completely? The answer must be few. Therefore, traveling domestic is equal to(means that people may have more chance to take deep(make further) understanding of their hometown. For example, fifty-six nationalities exist in China, every Chinese just belongs to one of them, isn’t(正式的一般用is it) necessary to every Chinese that give some explorations and care to their brother nationalities? Absolutely, yes.(民族和国内旅游有关么？)

In conclusion, though traveling abroad seems appealing for some people, not going abroad has more obvious merits, when enhancing financial support to hometown and depth our own understanding of motherland at the same time are taken to be deliberation（高级词汇，用的不错）. I prefer stay in my own country to have an easier journey than going abroad.

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