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9-13 independant by Yanxin19.doc (28.5 KB, 下载次数: 20) yanxin19的作文贴
9-13综合写作TPO7

9-13独立写作

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发表于 2010-9-15 00:56:56 |只看该作者

9-14综合 TPO8

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双非DIY美硕申请总结

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发表于 2010-9-16 22:10:25 |只看该作者

4# makeithappen

这篇不是我原来贴的吗？
改了的话帮忙贴一下改了以后的吧

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发表于 2010-9-16 22:38:23 |只看该作者

9.14综合作文
（终于灌满够50分了！(TAT)）

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发表于 2010-9-20 22:48:37 |只看该作者

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9月20综合写作TPO13

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发表于 2010-9-20 23:36:25 |只看该作者

9-20独立作文

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发表于 2010-9-21 13:32:25 |只看该作者

7# yanxin19

下了，我的在这里。。。先占个位置，倒时候好找！
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1129902&pid=1774373911&page=2&extra=#pid1774373911

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发表于 2010-9-21 23:46:46 |只看该作者

9-21综合作文

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发表于 2010-9-21 23:47:36 |只看该作者

9-21独立作文

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发表于 2010-9-23 02:34:21 |只看该作者

9月22日综合作文
独立作文呢怎么也写不起来请你改楼上那篇就是9月21日独立作文吧，我觉得题材是和22号儿童做决策很类似的。

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发表于 2010-9-23 04:07:23 |只看该作者

Thanks a lot/ ML

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发表于 2010-9-23 17:19:12 |只看该作者

没找到你说的独立作文。
但综合作文写的比我强多了呵呵，遣词造句都挺有水平。

The reading material and lecture discuss the efficiency of stopping spread of cane toad in Australia. The reading material presents three measures to attain the goal of preventing, however the lecturer except all these measures as follows:

First of all, if setting fence in order to block cane toad from moving to non- colonized area (as argued in the reading material), the lecturer thinks that young toads and some eggs can easily go through the fences. After all there are rivers and streams on which fences cannot be set. In this scenario, young toads can easily pass the fence so that a great number of cane toads will inhabit there.

Secondly, the lecturer disagrees with the efficiency of capturing toads by hand or using traps, which is suggested in the reading material. Untrained volunteers probably do not know the differences between native frogs and cane toads, and likely catch and destroy native frogs instead of toads. In particular, during the stage at on ? 没看懂which native frogs and cane toads are young, they are of very similar appearance.

Lastly, virus, as suggested in the reading material as a good strategy to destroy cane toads without effort is dangerous to global eco-circle. The lecturer strengthens this. Export exists from Australia to Central and South America, where cane toads is-are native spicy-species. Considering the indispensable role of cane toads in those areas, the professor consists that virus leads to great crisis.
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