9.18作文练习，playing sports teach more life lessons 求拍，谢谢啦

loli小桐桐UID: 2759896

In recent years, the merit of playing sports is tough to a point where people cannot comprehend with ease, which makes an epidemic discussion concerned with whether the more significant effect of sports is teaching life lessons. Some people, who do not advocate this statement, assert that the most obvious benefit that sports bring to human beings is enhancing physical development. In weighing up both the prespective benefits and the potential risks, I site the opposite and reckon that sport games also can train people’s spirit of cooperation and persistence.

First of all, to many extent, doing sports excises is a chief measure by we human to satisfy our insatiable appetite on keeping our health, making us increasing strong on muscles and metabolic system. Our metabolic rates may be increased when we are doing sport excises, therefore it can keep the fuctions of heart, lung and other abodominal organs from exhaustion. Especially for children, it serves as a catalyst to boost their growth, which makes them grow faster and stronger than before. According a recent survey, relating on children’s physical development, by our state’s Children Development Apartment,
it shows that teenages, particularly from 10 to 16 years old, that do exercises regularly grow 36 percent fasters than those people who have no habit to play sports.

Significant though merits of sports for physical development, it cannot overshadow its benefits for other aspects, particular with the respect to enhance our abilities of cooperation and persistence. Football, basketball and volleyball, as the mainstream of sports games, are fulfill with team work, from passing to defending. People, who participate in these games, must rely on each other and try their best to collarborate best for obtain a goal. By the reason, this kind of sports are considered as an effective approach to enhace cooperation skills. Moreover, the chief reason why we should emphasis cooperation, especially in nurturing young people, is that we will face pressing societal problems, such as global warming, nuclear problems and cross-boundary air and water pollution, that simply cannot be solved apart from cooperative international efforts.

In additional, playing sports is accepted as a vivid teacher to instill a precis virtue into us, which is we should never give up before termination. All of sport games aim at to acheive a common goal, in this case, winning through all teammates work together. In order to win the victory, we would cheer each other up and try our best to do everything but never give up. One of illustraions is Kimi Raikkonen, who is a famous diver in FIA Foumular 1 World Championship. In 2007, before the Bazil Championship, Kimi has falled 10 points behind the top one, Leius Hamiton. And everyone, including me, reckon that he has no chance to gain the world champion in this year. However, Kimi and his teammates have never give up, and do their best in the Bazil Championship. Finally, to everyone superised, he won in the Bazil, and at the same time, he became the world champion in the 2007 because of just one-point leading to Leius.

Sports may bring much more significant benefits to human beings, besides physical development. Only when we comprehend the aspect that playing sport also teach our life courses can we be confidently to say we gain all essences of sport and its spirits. It is essential for us to reevaluate the value of sport games.

心是自由的翅膀UID: 2596257

请问你的文章你么体现more lessons?
你论述的keep health 我觉得不像是playing sports交给我们的lessons,而到是playing sports带给我们的好处（不是lesson）
后面论述了合作和坚持（这个是lesson)
我想问的是 你怎么体现 一个 more lessons?

yueruyingUID: 2782680

同问~

loli小桐桐UID: 2759896

这个是个2-1的模式，我说的是虽然playing sports带给我们physical development，但它带给我们更多的是life lesson

心是自由的翅膀UID: 2596257

4# loli小桐桐
我觉得more lessons应该是lesson和lesson的比较
感觉keep health不属于lesson
感觉你是说，相比keep health，lessons如竞争和坚持更为重要，表达出的是后两者are more important than 前者
并没有more lessons的意思

loli小桐桐UID: 2759896

5# 心是自由的翅膀
额，我觉得他这个题的意思是说playing sports 的作用是交给人们more life lessons, 而不是其他方面，
其实我可以把第一段改成使人们养成良好的运动习惯
这个就是体育运动交给我们另一个方面的lesson了，是吧