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The Benefit of Bicycle

Bicycles, machines drived by manpower, are more environmental-protected than other vehicles such as automobiles and motorcycles. Riding bicycles is becoming a popular and fashionable athletic item gradually these years. Thus people can get enough exercise to make up the lack of daily movement.

  People nowadays enjoy the convenient of various vehicles because cars and motorcycle can economize strength for them. As time passes, they get lazier than before that have no automobile or airplanes to take. According to a research in China,5.3people died because of cardioparthy and hypertension. This number added 2.2 compared to the average percent in the past 20 years. This is striking information---thousands of human beings died because of the development of the social and the progress of live standard! This also proves a viewpoint: We still need exercise even if we have a great many of machines to replace our work.

Riding bicycles has advantages in economy as well. Considerable though the advantages of automobile, they cannot compete with the benefits of bicycles bringing about, when economical factor is taken into consideration. As we all know, the automobile use gasoline to maintain it’s operate. In recent years, the addition of the gasoline price makes many people unable to afford of the huge cost of buying gasoline. Considering about thus, many family give up the project of having a car and choose bicycles as their vehicles of going out to take place of the cars in their dreams.


The advantages of bicycles are so much that I cannot narrate them one by one.Therefore, for a strong body and nice tomorrow, let’s ride bicycle!

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