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发表于 2010-9-16 23:03:25 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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发表于 2010-9-17 01:42:14 |只看该作者

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?


Movies and televisions should always show audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished.



Nowadays, with the decrease demands of movies and televisions, it almost has the new programs and movies everyday. Movies and televisions have increasing influence on our lives. So, the issue that should movies and televisions always show viewer good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished is often discusses. Some people may embrace such a chance to disagree with it because it is a little unpractical. Personally speaking, However, I agree with this statement for the following reasons.



On the one hand, that kind of televisions and movies serve us a model to following. The people who will be influenced easily most is the juvenile or the children, they are not have enough ability to identify good or bad. If the movies and televisions always show them good guys are being punished and bad people are being rewarded, they will accept this idea and try to be a bad people for the rewards. On the contrary, if television programs and films always show them the right thing, they will understand what the correct way to do in the future is. For example, in the movie "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory", Willy Wonka invited five children to visit his chocolate factory, the children who is selfish, arrogant, greedy are all be punished by Wonka, at last, Charlie, the one who is filial pietysensible and good get the reward--the chocolate factory. I believe that after watching the movies, viewers will be encouraged to be a good person.



On the other hand, the movies and televisions which express the bad people are finally being punished will warn the people who
is going to do bad things. Through those programs, they will know the consequence. Even though we now live in a stable era, it is no doubt that it still have some crimes like injury people, embezzle public money, rob innocent people and so on, those criminal psychology brings a great loss and bad influence for our country. However, if the offenders see the severe punishment from movies and televisions, they may come into shrinking.
Only when they realize the stern consequence, do they truly know what they should do.



After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say; movies and televisions should always shoe audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished as it can lead people to go the right path in their life.

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发表于 2010-9-17 13:33:53 |只看该作者
2# enyadido

Nowadays, with the decrease demands of movies andtelevisions, it almost has the new programs and movies everyday(逻辑有点不明白). Movies and televisions have increasing influence on ourlives. So, the issue that should movies and televisions always show viewer goodpeople are being rewarded and bad people are being punished is been often discussed

. Some people may (embrace such a chance to disagree withit 到底是agree 还是disagree)because it is a little unpractical. Personally speaking,However, I agree with this statement for the following reasons.

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On the one hand, that kind of televisions and moviesserve us a model to following. The people who will be influenced easily most isthe juvenile or the children, they are not have enough ability to identify goodor bad. If the movies and televisions always show them good guys are beingpunished and bad people are being rewarded, they will accept this idea and tryto be a bad people for the rewards. On the contrary, if television programs andfilms always show them the right thing, they will understand what the correctway to do in the future is. For example, in the movie "Charlie and theChocolate Factory", Willy Wonka invited five children to visit hischocolate factory, the children who is selfish, arrogant, greedy are all bepunished by Wonka, at last, Charlie, the one who is filial pietysensible andgood get the reward--the chocolate factory. (例子赞一个)I believe that after watching the movies, viewers will beencouraged to be a good person

On the other hand, the movies and televisions whichexpress the bad people are finally being punished will warn the people who isgoing to do bad things. Through those programs, they will know the consequence.Even though we now live in a stable era, there is no doubt that it still havesome crimes like injuring people, embezzling public money, robbing innocentpeople and so on, those criminal psychology brings a great loss and badinfluence for our country. However, if the offenders see the severe punishmentfrom movies and televisions, they may come into shrinking. Only when theyrealize the stern seriousconsequence, do they truly know what they should do.


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After considering the reasons above, it is quite safe nowto say; movies and televisions should always show audience good people arebeing rewarded and bad people are being punished as it can lead people to gothe right path in their life.

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发表于 2010-9-18 23:34:32 |只看该作者

Nowadays, with the decrease demands of movies and televisions, it almost has the new programs and movies everyday. (没明白。。decrease??)Movies and televisions have increasing influence on our lives. So, the issue that should movies and televisions (改成whether movies and televisions should)always show viewer good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished is often discusses. Some people may embrace such a chance to disagree with it because it is a little unpractical. Personally speaking, However,(however没必要) I agree with this statement for the following reasons.


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On the one hand, that kind of televisions and movies serve us a model to following. The people who will be influenced easily most is the juvenile or the children, they don't have enough ability to identify good or bad. If the movies and televisions always show them good guys are being punished and bad people are being rewarded, they will accept this idea and try to be a bad people for the rewards. On the contrary, if television programs and films always show them the right thing, they will understand what the correct way to do in the future is. For example, in the movie "Charlie and the Chocolate Factory", Willy Wonka invited five children to visit his chocolate factory, the children who is selfish, arrogant, greedy are all be punished by Wonka, at last, Charlie, the one who is filial pietysensible and good get the reward--the chocolate factory. I believe that after watching the movies, viewers will be encouraged to be a good person.

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On the other hand, the movies and televisions which express the bad people are finally being punished will warn the people who
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After understanding the reasoning above, it is quite safe now to say; movies and televisions should always shoe audience good people are being rewarded and bad people are being punished as it can lead people to go the right path in their life.       总的来说还不错

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发表于 2010-10-10 12:09:43 |只看该作者
本帖最后由 enyadido 于 2010-10-10 12:48 编辑

09.03.07NA    Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers should not show their social or political views in the classroom.

The issue that should teachers shows their social or political views in the classroom are a question that is often discussed and there differing opinions about it. Some people may embrace such a chance to teachers should not show their arguments about social or political in the class. While some people maintain that teachers should show their own opinions about current news or political during the class. In my opinion, whether teachers should show their social or political views in the classroom depends on the different types of students.

For the elementary students and junior middle school students, teachers should not talk about their own view about social or political during the class. For the primary students and junior middle school students, they have not enough ability to disguise whether the teachers idea about social or political is correct or not. Because of that, they are always just fellow their teacher's arguments, think that opinion is correct. For instance, my little brother, a ten years old child, who study in grade five. One day, his teacher talked about the important to protect our environment, and said, factories with heavy pollution should not build any more. At that time, my uncle was the boss of an aluminum factory. Aluminum factory always have heavy pollution. And when my little brother came home, he asked my uncle to close the factory because of the pollution. Those young children can't think individual, in their opinion, teachers are always right. As the thing in the example, my brother just saw the factory's pollution, and did not realized the purification towers the factory have, did not realized the profit the factory bring.

For the senior school students and university students, it is reasonable to show teachers view on social or political. For that group of students, they already possess their own standpoints, they can recognize whether the teacher's viewpoints are fit for them or not. If the teacher's outlook is different from student's, teacher and students can discuss about the social event or political. From the discussion, students can get more information and have a chance to explain their standpoint. Through the argument, people in the class can know which part they supported. In addition, in the senior middle school and university, it is crucial to learn put forward own opinion about surrounding things for students, so teachers express their social view in the classroom is a good opportunity to students to have a brain storm, it can help them form a habit of thinking individually.  

From what has been discussed above, whether teachers should show their standpoint about social and political in the classroom depends on the students. It is better to talk about social and political things only for the students whose studied over senior middle school.

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发表于 2010-10-10 13:06:24 |只看该作者
应该是在同一组吧~~~
改好了。 enyadido.doc (27.5 KB, 下载次数: 48)

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发表于 2010-10-10 22:02:43 |只看该作者
改好了哈~

correted by cathyxin.doc

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发表于 2010-10-11 02:12:10 |只看该作者
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THX a lot~我明天呃……不,是今天中午给你改完哈~

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THX~~~~~我中午给你改完哈~~

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