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08.08.08NA  Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? All university students should take basic science courses, regardless of their field of concentration.

What should be learned in the university arouse big concern recent years. Should the basic science be taught though they are unnecessary to the students major？ Personal perspective, the students should study basic science for the reason that such classes play no less or even greater role in the people's future life.

In our country, most of universities have history class for senior students, even though the students are not major in history. In the history class, we can get familiar with our past, it will encourage us to work hard to make more contribution to our society . For example, People's Republic of China has been established in October 1st,1949. Before that, the Chinese fight with the Japanese in order to get back our lands. In the process, many people lost their lives, like Qiu Shaoyun, Dong Cunrui and so on. Besides, some history people give us good examples. Take Lei Feng for example, he did a large number of things to help others without leaving his name. Until today, we have Lei Feng's Day in March 15th. This important day remind us that we should try our best to help people who is in need.

Besides, art class is also essential to the students. In art class, we can learn some poems. I like poem the first time I read poem called Augury of Innocence. It is read like "to see a world in the grand of sand and heaven in a wild flower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand and eternity in an hour" .I can learn a lot in such class. First of all, it tells us a profound meaning within such a few words, which teaches me how to write concisely. Further more, every poem has its rhyme inside of it, learning about rhyme teaches me how to see the beauty. Further more, poem is one form of arts and I can learn how to appreciate arts.

Last, as we are biotechnical students, we also have some political classes. In the class, we are informed what policy in our country now, so that we can keep pace with the society and get a correct guide to do the things.

Due to the above statement, the basic science is indispensable. With the development of our country, all-rounded students are playing more and more important role in keeping our society strong and health.

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2008.10.17NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People benefit more from traveling in their own country than traveling in a foreign country.

Traveling plays a tremendous role in our life. Most people do some traveling when they are in vocation. Some people claim that we should only travel in our own country so that we can know much about our country, for the reason that we live in a country with a long history. While others hold the opinion that it is better to get familiar with the foreign country, in other words, traveling other country is necessary and benefit more. Personal perspective, we can benefit equally from traveling either in our country or in foreign country.

There is no denying that we can benefit from traveling in our country, because China has a history more than 5000 years, which is the longest in the world. Although we lived in China many years, there is always something we don't know. And
the best way to get better understanding of our country is to visit some places of interest, which record the Chinese history. Like the Forbidden City in Beijing, the capital of China. Its construction in 1406, and was completed 14 years later, having history so far of some 600 years. About 24 emperors from Ming and Qing dynasty lived and ruled China from there. This ancient building help us get familiar with our past, meanwhile, it is also a symbol of Chinese traditional and rich culture.

However, the merit of traveling in foreign country can not be neglect. First of all, we can better grasp a foreign language. For instance, a person, who is preparing for the IBT, has difficulty in speaking or listening part. If he had a chance to travel in the foreign country, like States, he would make a greater progress than studying in his country, because he has to use English every time and everywhere. Further more, we can also get familiar with other countries. The last summer, my parents and I went to the Greece and acknowledged that when they nod head, it means they don't agree with you. This custom is different from ours. What is more, we can also make some foreign friends when we traveling, so that we can know much about their country and their culture.

Due to the above statement, our knowledge of every country is limited while the story of every country is boundless. Hence, we can benefit both from visiting our country or foreign country. It is advised that people should travel around world when alive, in order to get more knowledge to enjoy a better life.

chxh2020UID: 2587109

楼主作文不错。

robertxjUID: 2645881

总体思路很清楚 分论点也很明确 有一些语言的修改在附件中 不知道改得对不对 有则改之无则加勉 呵呵~

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08.12.07NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: Spending time alone is the best way to relieve stress

As we all know, an increasing number of people, under so much pressure at work, have been deeply depressed recent year, so people should find a appropriate way to relieve stress. Some people prefer staying alone to relax, but others are not. I concede that spending time alone is one of the ways to relieve stress, while talking with family and friends is also a wise choice when we relax ourselves.

There is no denying that spending time alone can help us relax. For the reason that it provides us a quite environment and help us hide from outside world and think freely. I can back up this point by myself. When feeling tired about the heavy work at school, I often go to the coffee bar alone, listening to light music, relaxing my mind and forgetting the complex work.After that, I also have a greater efficiency on study and make the job better.

However, saying that spending time by oneself is the best way to relieve stress is an overstatement, because other ways play no less or even greater role in relaxing ourselves. For instance, we can speak pressure out to our friends instead of keeping the things in our minds, Sometimes, our friends could help us resolve our emotional problem, and also regain our self-confidence. In the process, we can also improve our social skills, such as communicating skill, so that we will know when we need to change our communicating techniques to be sure other people can grasp our ideas, which does good to our future when we are hunting for a job.

Besides, we can also make a call to our parents since most of people studying or working far away from home. The parents will tell us their life experience, like how to deal with the difficult problem, and encourage us to perform excellent at school or company. After that, we will have more motivation than pressure to work harder in order to give our parents a better life.

Due to the above statement, the way of relieve stress is varies, we can stay alone as well as talk to others. No matter which one people select, the suitable one is the best one.

0317UID: 2770329

改楼上。

As we all know, an increasing number of people, under so much pressure at work, have been deeply depressed in recent year, so people should find an appropriate way to relieve stress. Some people prefer staying alone to relax, but others do not. I concede that spending time alone is one of the ways to relieve stress, while talking with falimies and friends is also a wise choice when we relax ourselves(if we want to relax ourselves).

$ `-There is no denying that spending time alone can help us relax. For the reason that it provides us a quite environment and helps us escape from outside world and think freely.(you have no main sentence.) I can back up this point by myself. When feeling tired about the heavy work at school, I often go to the coffee bar alone, listening to light music, relaxing my mind and forgetting the complex work. After that, I also have a greater efficiency on study and make the job better.

However, saying that spending time by oneself is the best way to relieve stress is an overstatement, because other ways play no less or even greater role in relaxing ourselves. For instance, we can speak pressure out to our friends instead of keeping the things in our minds, Sometimes, our friends could help us resolve our emotional problem, and also regain our self-confidence. In the process, we can also improve our social skills, such as communicating skill, so that we will know when we need to change our communicating techniques to be sure other people can grasp our ideas, which does good to our future when we are hunting for a job.

Besides, we can also make a call to our parents since most of people studying or working far away from home. The parents will tell us their life experience, like how to deal with the difficult problem, and encourage us to perform excellent at school or company. After that, we will have more motivation than pressure to work harder in order to give our parents a better life.

Due to the above statement, the way of relieve stress is various, we can stay alone as well as talk to others. No matter which one people select, the suitable one is the best one.

1.       1.In my opinion, you need to focus on your topic the best, give your reasons why staying alone is not the best way to relieve stress. Yes, you can give an alternative, but you need to make clear the advantages and emphasize it’s the best way, even only for part of people like you refer in the last paragraph.

2.       2.I think it would be better if you add more details to the sentences. Ex. the difficult problem such as you are afraid to give a presentation in public.

3.       3.There are a few mistakes in your essay such as a/an,you need to avoid it.

norraUID: 2782571

我的修改，见笑了。

haoannaUID: 2582245

语法很好啊。

顺水飘扬UID: 2715101

09.01.17 NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Advertising is the most important cause of unhealthy eating habits.

Advertise plays tremendous role in our daily life. Much information we know are always from advertise, like varies kinds of foods, some are good for us but others are not. I concede that the advertising is an essential reason for our unhealthy eating habits, but it is exaggerated to say that advertising is the most important reason, because there are other elements that can not be neglected.

There is no denying that some advertises have introduced us many junk foods. Like KFC, the food pictures which show us on TV make peoples feel it is either delicious or nutritious, but actually is not. And it also uses some toys to attract children to buy their food. As a result, if you eat KFC frequently, you'll be fat and even may cause other diseases. However, it is an overstatement to assert that the advertisement is the only reason since the following two reasons exists.

One of these factors is books or magazines. In some books, we are also informed that we should lose weight, because it is said that "The less weight, the more healthy" and show us an incorrect concept, that is, thin is equal to beautiful. Due to the fact that everyone wants to be more beautiful, they eat less than three times even only one times a day. Owing to that they have not enough energy to support their body, they don't want to do any other things and even have no concentration on class. After few days, most of them feel bad and do not have to eat more and regain their weight.

What is more, heavy workload keeps people from getting meals regularly, which is considered as one of the unhealthy eating habits. As we all know, an increasing number of people, under some much pressure at work, have been deeply depressed recent year, so they almost have irregular lifetime. Take a businessman for example, he has to work at least 8 hours a day to fulfill his task. Consequently, he usually have little time for lunch and no chance to sit around table with his family for dinner. Day by day, it cause the bad eating habits.

To sum up, it is inappropriate to reckon that advertising is the most important factor for the unhealthy eating habits, other factors are also crucial for it. In order to improve our health, we should make a wise choice when we select food and books, meanwhile, we should have a regular time to enjoy the life.