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发表于 2010-10-12 20:50:12 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
Do you agree or disagree with that students will not use the printed books anymore?


In this Internet-based age, a great number of people are likely to work with the computer instead of the pen and paper.There is no doubt that with the time lapsing,the computer will totally replace the pen and paper.So I deeply believe that the printed books of students will disappear in the future because of the high teconology.


The first reason I agree with it is that the printed books bring students lot of health trouble.Take myself for example.When I was 7,I had to carry a heavy bag which accommodates five or even six books,each weigh 5 to 6 hundred gram,on my back to go to school.In other words,I went to school with 3 to 4 kilogram stuff on my back.That was really a rough work for me and it hurt my waist which afflicts me even nowadays.And Li Ming,my best friend who likes reading books than anyone else I have ever seen,hurt his vision because of reading printed books at night.Nowadays,he can just wear the glass on his nose to appreciate this wonderful world and unluckily,the glass caused some nose problems to him a few days ago.


The other disadvantage of using printed books is that the production of printed books will cost a lot of trees by which we can reduce the rate of floods happening.In the 1998,came a horrible disaster.A flood came to China and deprived of thousands of lives,caused countless cost.If,back then,the students hadn’t used printed books,the factory would not cut down trees to product printed books and the trees would perhaps prevent the flood or reduce the damage it caused.


In conclusion,nowadays students can use computer to replace the use of printed books.And in the future there is no doubt that the printed books will leave the stage of history gradually.Instead, teachers and students will use computers to replace the use of printed books.
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发表于 2010-10-12 20:50:59 |只看该作者
第一次写TOEFL作文 肯定很多不好的地方 不要客气啊 狠拍

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发表于 2010-11-12 23:05:21 |只看该作者
若改得不好,见谅。

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ouyangzizi@yahoo.cn 人人:287796809 16er。求战友。

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发表于 2010-11-16 18:34:45 |只看该作者
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发表于 2010-11-18 21:23:56 |只看该作者
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发表于 2010-11-19 18:08:09 |只看该作者
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发表于 2010-11-23 15:49:55 |只看该作者
For example, we perhaps could not keep in touch with the old friends and with the time elapses,
前面是keep in touch, and 连接with time elapes 不太通。 感觉是不是可以along with time elapsing

If we move to some new city or (some多余) new country, we could adjust ourselves to the new environment and make a group of new friends who may be totally different from the old ones

cities?  countries?

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