跪求二战作文复习方法。。。

liuyang57440201UID: 2834897

谢谢指点，能提点建议吗？针对我这种情况怎么能让作文拿到5.5呢？谢谢 9# EmilyS

liuyang57440201UID: 2834897

没有背模板，可能还是语法错误太多吧，哎，都不知道怎么办好了 8# giggsdiy

电大的UID: 2946979

按一战的方式，稍微改正即可以了啊

liuyang57440201UID: 2834897

关键是我只能找我的作文的很少一部分错误，比如单复数，修饰等一下基本错误，那些搭配的错误我找不出来，还那样写的话不知道作文还是有很多错误呢，不知道有什么方法能尽可能的减少文章中的错误了
比如

本帖最后由 EmilyS 于 2010-10-20 22:50 编辑 基本语法问题太多把分数拉下来了。比如第二段 Undoubtedly, it can not (cannot) be denied the fact that advertising plays a pivotal role in spreading out information. Nowadays, there are many different kinds of advertisings(advertisings是什么？！advertisements吧。。。), which can expand our outlook (outlook...是前景，未来那种感觉。。。这里用view就可以了。。。) and enable us to learn more knowledge from them (enable an application...建议用allow us. 还有from them就不用了。依稀记得them不能指代which的。). Furthermore, under the guidance of advertisings (同理，advertising/advertisements), we can choose the most suitable goods for us. Advertisings tend to include all informations 不可数名词 about goods, which can help us to know more about our demands. In addition, the widespread use of advertising has promoted the development of many companies. It’s manifest that the more people know about the (an) item, the more people would buy it. ( the more people want to buy it/the more people would want to buy it/the more people would pay for it)

我自己能找出的错误只有cannot information  know about the (an) item 别的要我找的话我自己都看不出来的 13# 电大的

luuxiUID: 2947832

lz可以把自己的作文打到电脑里,用word,word自动有纠错功能,可能高级错误word看不出来,但是最最基本的错误word还是可以纠正的!

67169619UID: 2320695

lz写作都不按作文要求去做，得分肯定不会高。
从写作思维习惯上看，lz似乎很少学到英文这种语言的写作表达习惯。

纯属个人意见，并非有心打击lz:L

liuyang57440201UID: 2834897

没关系的，大家都是提意见嘛  呵呵 不过我英语确实很水啊，也不知道英语的写作习惯到底怎么学呀？ 16# 67169619