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Issue 43: To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.

People are more likely to accept the leadership of those who maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. However, in my view it is somewhat fastidious for us to put such a request on them.   

To begin with, the highest ethical and moral standards themselves are variable in different areas and different times. As a British writer said: “morality is the custom of one’s country, cannibalism is moral in a cannibal country.” Condition in China is a good example to illustrate the ideal. As we know, China is a big country with 56 nations and different nations have distinct customs. In this case, something that is considered moral in certain nations would be not conformed to moral standards of another nation. Besides, the ethical and moral standards are changed with society developing. For instance, at the beginning of the country being established, Chinese people value the merit of frugality, leaders were venerable for they also led frugal lives like their populace. But now, with the development of economy in China, most people agree that as a leader who contribute so much to his\her field and sometimes stand for the whole country should enjoy a live with much higher material level than the common people. Therefore, form those instances, we can see that it is unfairly for us to request the public offical to maintain the highest ethical and moral standards all the time when the standards themselves can’t keep consistent.   
Another point we should considered is just like what the American president Benjamin Franklin once said : “ In almost every face and every person, they may discover fine feathers and defects, good and bad quanlities.” Undeniable, the public official, no matter what job he\she takes, President or Prime Minister, is a common person who can never achieve perfect in every aspect. Moreover, problems in ethic and morality are concerned more with one’ private live rather than public affairs which have wider influence on people around. Even if as a public offical, one has the right to chose the way he\she likes to live as long as his\her behaviors would not bring about negative effect to the society.
In addition, what is the most important quality we expect a public offical to possess? The highest ethical and moral standards or the ability to gover a country, to bring about stable social condition, to promote rapid progress of economy? Obviously, almost all people’ answer is the latter. A public offical whose main duty is to manage a department or a country needn’t take pains to become the personification of ethic and morality of the public. many other people are more suitable than public officals to take the task such as teachers, clerks and philosophers. However, for pubic officals, who play a different role in the society, What they should always remind thenmselves is to bring the greatest benefit to the country and its people. For instance, in order to protect the interests of the country, governors sometimes launch wars. As a result, they are surely considered as going against the moral standards by people who suffer from wars. However, we can’t deny they are eligible leaders of the country and do good for most people in the country.
Admittedly, a public offical has great influence on the common people and it is necessary for them to maintain a higher ethic and morality standards to gain the esteem and work much more efficiently. However, the public also should never treat public officals with a tolerant heart.

lyra339UID：137464

呵呵，这是我贴的第二篇，现在都不敢记时间，大家帮我看看能有几分，没有关系，什么样的打击我都能承受。谢谢！

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Issue 43: To be an effective leader, a public official must maintain the highest ethical and moral standards.

People are more likely to accept the leadership of those who maintain the highest ethical and moral standards. However, in my view it is somewhat fastidious for us to put such a request on them.
恩，这种开头我喜欢。观点一下就清楚了。

To begin with, the highest ethical and moral standards themselves are variable in different areas and different times. As a British writer said: “morality is the custom of one’s country, cannibalism is moral in a cannibal country.” Condition in China is a good example to illustrate the ideal. As we know, China is a big country with 56 nations and different nations have distinct customs. In this case, something that is considered moral in certain nations would be not conformed to moral standards of another nation. Besides, the ethical and moral standards are changed with society's developing. For instance, at the beginning of the country being established, Chinese people value the merit of frugality, leaders were venerable for they also led frugal lives like their populace. But now, with the development of economy in China, most people agree that as a leader who contribute so much to his\her field and sometimes stand for the whole country should enjoy a live with much higher material level than the common people. Therefore, form those instances, we can see that it is unfairly for us to request the public offical to maintain the highest ethical and moral standards all the time when the standards themselves can’t keep consistent.
本段观点好的，谈到道德标准的问题。不同的民族、社会有不同的标准。不过，感觉举的例子不很恰当。

Another point we should consideredshould后面怎么用过去式？！这种错误以后请自己先更正！ is just like what the American president Benjamin Franklin once said : “ In almost every face and every person, they may discover fine feathers and defects, good and bad quanlities.” Undeniable, the public official, no matter what job he\she takes, President or Prime Minister, is a common person who can never achieve perfect in every aspect. Moreover, problems in ethic and morality are concerned more with one’ private live rather than public affairs which have wider influence on people around. Even if as a public offical, one has the right to chose the way he\she likes to live as long as his\her behaviors would not bring about negative effect to the society.
这段观点也不错，领导者也是普通人。论述不错。


In addition, what is the most important quality we expect a public offical to possess? The highest ethical and moral standards or the ability to gover a country, to bring about stable social condition, to promote rapid progress of economy? Obviously, almost all people’ answer is the latter. A public offical whose main duty is to manage a department or a country needn’t take pains to become the personification of ethic and morality of the public. many other people are more suitable than public officals to take the task such as teachers, clerks and philosophers. However, for pubic officals, who play a different role in the society, What they should always remind thenmselves is to bring the greatest benefit to the country and its people. For instance, in order to protect the interests of the country, governors sometimes launch wars. As a result, they are surely considered as going against the moral standards by people who suffer from wars. However, we can’t deny they are eligible leaders of the country and do good for most people in the country.
谈到对于领导者最重要的是什么。可以算是升华，不错的。

Admittedly, a public offical has great influence on the common people and it is necessary for them to maintain a higher ethic and morality standards to gain the esteem and work much more efficiently. However, the public also should never treat public officals with a tolerant heart.

总的来说，你的文章还是相当不错的。观点论述什么都很好，而且驾御语言的能力也不错。
以后也多帮别的同学看看。加油

lyra339UID：137464

谢谢，我自己感觉语言还是不行，老是觉得想到的话表达不出来，而且句子与句子之间的连接很不顺。哎，我十月的g， 八月的T，不知道来的及不？

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初看了一眼，有个毛病
China is a big country with 56 nations （应该是nationalities）and different nations have distinct customs. In this