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11月12日作文Doyou agree or disagree with the following statement?

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?

Some people think children should study and play, other people think children should help with household chores.

When asked which way is better to raise their children, many parents say they would choose to let children study and play rather than get children involved with household chores. For household chores are under no circumstances beneficial activities for children to develop their IQ and EQ. Nevertheless, now this idea is being questioned and people in an increasing number begin to realize that it is unhealthy for children to be denied access to doing chores. I, if asked, definitely approve with their voice. And my reasons are as following:


On one hand, compared with a childhood being rife with solely study and play, the one with more chances to learn various skills such as cooking, labeling stuff, and doing laundry is more likely to cultivate a child’s integrated capacity and reduce his dependence on parents. One striking example of a student going to extreme it’s that a neighbor of mine who used to be so successful in academic work as to be accepted to Qinghua University, the best of the best universities in China, it was the first time she left home to a remote university, she, however, turned out to be completely inadequate to do any laundries and clean her own room, being lack of the ability of taking care of herself in daily life, she was sent back home. This tragedy result in her mother’s handling all chores for her to let her spend nearly all the time on study.


On the other hand, doing chores not only tone children’s body and cultivate their capacity of taking care of themselves, but also help reduce their parents’ pressure in a great extend and what’s equally important, by sharing chores with family members, children have a better understanding of how painstakingly their parents have been taking care of them. And a harmonious atmosphere in the family, consequently, rises. Evidence for this theory is now being provided by education experts who conducted a survey recently, the survey demonstrates that children who engage in helping parents doing chores together tend to have gentler character and be more active to communicate with parents, in contradistinction, children who spend time solely on study and play rather than on sharing chores with the families tend to be easier to be irritated and have wider generation gap with their parents.


There is no denying the fact that getting children involved in doing household chores in some extend distract them from study and decrease their playing time, the brilliant academic work children get by full time studying or great fun and joy when playing games, for example, pales in comparison with the capacity of cooking, repairing broken stuff and cleaning his own room, which may someday contribute directly to whether they could stand on their own foot if being apart from their parents.

All in all, through what’ve been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the best education for all-round development is not merely letting children study and play, doing household chores is also an integral part of well-rounded development for children, which not only reduce their dependence on parents and develop their capacity of taking care of themselves, but also help reduce their parents’ pressure and increase the family connection.

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第一次写托福作文，有很多不足的，希望高手们多多指出缺陷。。。辛苦了。。。等级不高没能发附件，只能麻烦你们复制到你们的WORD文档里面再给我改了，谢谢

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11月17日作文 还是没升够级别。。。先发到这里吧
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
Younger school children should be required to study art and music in addition to math language, science and history.


Perhaps no issue in this world is as significance to children as education. For a child who is undergoing physical and psychological growth, the courses designed by school become increasingly phenomenal. Despite various responses people may have on the topic regarding whether students should be required to learn additional courses such as art and music. I, given the chance, prefer to endorse that studying art and music in addition to basic compulsory courses should have primary consideration.

First and foremost, art and music are integral parts of human life, which not only mold a man’s personality but progress his development as well. For younger school children, developing well-round capacity necessitates the study of all kinds of subjects. Imagine, a child being forced to study solely math language, science and history, may wind up losing the ability of appreciating all the beauties in life. Thus, it is definitely unilateral to be blind to the contribution of fundamental courses such as art and music.

Furthermore, courses of art and music provide young students with relaxation as well as recreation. And they play a vital role in keeping a balance between intensive studies and cultivating creativity. A recent survey conducted by educational experts, unfortunately, illustrates the fact that children in younger school tend to be expected to focus more energy on math and science study. But some interviews on children show that the majority of young students have favorable association with courses such as art and music, apart from science and mathematics.

There is no denying the fact that there are inevitably the limitations of spending extra expenses on instrument and teacher resources required for art and music courses. Art and music, nevertheless, to students’ intellectual studies are what accelerators to the car. It has been proved by scientists that art and music sometimes make a smarter student. Further evidence comes from the experience of Einstein. Einstein, a mathematical genius, did not create the theory of relativity until he got the inspiration from wandering his fingers on a piano. This striking example well demonstrates that music not only trigger a man’s inspiration but develop creativity as well.

From what’ve been discussed above, we can safely draw the conclusion that the role that art and music course play in a younger school for children are dispensable. For all the positive influences on students include the establishment of cultivating a student’s appreciation of beauty, the development of creativity, the fun and entertainment which help keep a balance between the study and recreation, and what’s equally important, inspiring potential capacity in individuals.

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你的作文~！

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4# bananaslice

谢谢修改
那些问题我会注意的！
辛苦了

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希望大家给点论点方面的指导和建议
我总想不出来好的论点
要命……

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改好了，请查收

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我觉得LZ的论点很好额。

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11.26 独立写作 revised

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改作文

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11.27独立
辛苦了
谢谢修改

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11.26 综合 改好了

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改好了，请查收

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我印象中voice确实有意见的意思，采纳意见似乎用adopt one's idea/ brain/suggestion之类的，一般都是listen to one's voice吧，个人觉得不是所有的“采纳”都和“意见”可以搭
effectiveness和efficiency我一直都当效率用的，我认为一样啊，呵呵
其实我也超时的，现在好点，但还是超个5,6分钟的，强迫自己吧，没有更好的办法了