作文. 根据机经写的2.21.求狂拍..谢谢各位高手了先...

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With the rapid development of technology.The earth became an huge "global village".People lived around the world seems more closely than many years ago.we can easier go abroad than before.such as we can set up from America to Spanish in few hours by airplane.take a comparison with Christopher Columbus who across the Atlantic in a few months,how unbelievable the change took place.Those variations conduct us present the extension requirement of resource of foreign country.
There are different kinds of ways which provide the information to us,such as news and magazine,TV programs,Internet and traveled by ourselves.It generally speaking,the news papers and magazine are effect medium use to acquire knowledge of the foreign country.However,in my opinion,I agree with it partly.By the advanced technique,more and more people accommodate to gain the informations via the internet which is more comprehensive and efficient.Compare with the news papers and magazine,the multiple expressions,for example,the 3D images of the natural scenery ,the video which contains the daily life.Those materials are recorded in the foreign country.It can provide an visible and vivid impression and recognition.In addition,the connection between the relevant topics offered by the handy search bar also render better utilization for us to absorb the flourish knowledge.
Whereas,the news papers and magazines used to focus on a certain region or a stable aspect of the foreign country.such as "National Geographic"which all focus in the geography.And,if we want to be told about some fashion informations.It will be similar with a blank notebook.After above,The obvious conclusion can be drawn,the news papers and magazines have limitation of the contents and it may directly affect us to meet our need of learning the foreign country and put an constraint of
expanding our horizon.
In a sum,news paper and magazines is a good tool for us to get familiar with the overseas but we are surely
convinced that it is not a best choice.We can use lots kinds method to gain more informations and learning the foreign country from all sides.The most feasible path undoubted is the combination of different method mentioned above.the more mode we choose,the more closely we approach to the realistic foreign country.

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，呆会又时间我试着改改你的吧

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With the rapid development of technology.The earth became an huge "global village".People lived around the world seems more closely than many years ago.we can easier go abroad than before.such as we can set up from America to Spanish in few hours by airplane.take a comparison with Christopher Columbus who across the Atlantic in a few months,how unbelievable the change took place.Those variations conduct us present the extension requirement of resource of foreign country. //世界变化快和需要了解国外似乎关系不大吧 There are different kinds of ways which provide the information to us,such as news and magazine,TV programs,Internet and traveled(traveling) by ourselves.It generally speaking(generally speaking),the news papers(newspapers) and magazine are effect medium use (used) to acquire knowledge of the foreign country.However,in my opinion,I agree with it partly(应该在前面强调他是最好的方法，才能接部分同意吧,直接这样写就否认了他们是有效获取信息的手段,但后文的结论还是承认了他们是一种获取信息的手段).By the advanced technique(technology?),more and more people accommodate to gain the(删) informations via the(删) internet which is more comprehensive(comprehensible) and efficient.Compare with the news papers(newspapers) and magazine(s),the multiple expressions,for example,the 3D images of the natural scenery ,the video which contains the daily life(句子不通,compare后面没结果).Those materials are recorded in the foreign country.It can provide an visible and vivid impression and recognition.In addition,the connection between the relevant topics offered by the handy search bar also render better utilization for us to absorb the flourish knowledge. //从compare with后面的不太通，都应该改改吧 Whereas,(逗号变空格吧)the news(newspapers) papers and magazines used to(usually) focus on a certain region or a stable(limited) aspect of the foreign country.such as "National Geographic"which all focus in(on) the geography.And,if we want to be told about some fashion informations.It will be similar with a blank notebook.After above(没应该出现与region对应的句子,前面的national geographic应该写国家的局限吧),The obvious conclusion can be drawn,the news papers and magazines have limitation of the contents and it may directly affect us to meet our need of learning the foreign country and put an constraint of expanding our horizon. In a sum,news paper(newspapers) and magazines is(are?) a good tool for us to get familiar with the overseas but we are surely convinced that it is not a best choice(逻辑上不太对，是你在说服别人).We can use lots kinds (of) method to gain more informations and learning the foreign country from all sides(all sides和lot method是不是重复了).The most feasible path undoubted is the combination of(The most feasible path, undoubtedly, should be the combination of) different method mentioned above.the more mode we choose,the more closely we approach to the realistic foreign country. //结论有些突兀： 1、因为变化快所以需要了解国外。 2、报纸没网络生动。 3、报纸又局限性。 4、综上，应该综合各种方法。 第2段明确指出了travel,tv后文是不是应该提及呢。这样组织会不会好一些:报纸又局限，局限的内容没网络、电视生动，没旅游那么xx，但总又些优点。。综上，各种方法有自己独特的优点，所以要综合使用。