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发表于 2010-12-13 16:34:50 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 mingpj 于 2010-12-13 16:37 编辑

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better to hold a big party and invite many people to come than a small party where only a few close friends and family members are invited.

Holding a parting is quite crucial for nowadays people to have a relaxation. There maybe exist many reasons for people to have a party, such as just for loose themselves after a heavy work, celebrate the festival, purely for fun and communication with friends and so forth. Because of some limitation, it is unnecessary to hold a big party. So here comes to a question about whether it is better to hold a big party and invite many people to come than a small party where only a few close friends and family members are invited. From my own perspective, I tend to agree with the point that a small party, only a few close friends and family members, is available.


Nowadays, people are under the higher pressure than ever before from their company which intend to promote their profit. Intend to shift their pressure, they would like to take a party or many other things for relax.

To some extension, to hold a big party to invite many people from different occupations, definitely can broad our view, acquire more friends who have common interest with you, and may help your careers. For example, to invite your boss comes to your party will definitely benefit your future promotion in that all the people of company eager to make friends with boss. But, if you with purpose of relax yourself to hold a party, you must be sad and more to tired of the some preparation of the party. For example, to hold a party must prepare your comers sufficient food and drink, all of these will take numerous time in the market, and after all the people came, to be a host you must provide a nice service and prefect impression which is good for your social work. So let’s account how many work you must do before the big party, and never to mention after party you must to deal with the “battlefield”.


Compared with the big party, to hold a related small party, only limited in the scope of your friend and families, do good for your finance and also you can get closer with your family and friends. It is no sense to deny that small can save more money for other urgency under the background of global economic crises. Furthermore, people come to the party are your family and friends who are familiar with each other so that you need not social with them. In fact, they can effectively release your pressure by chatting with them. Moreover, they will help you to clear your “battlefield”, which is more easily to handle compared with the big party. To some extension, paying more attention to their family is crucial for nowadays people. Spending more time with family and a few close friends is ideal way to relax themselves and recharge for their future challenge.


In sum, if you want to have a really relaxation and enjoy the time with your families after heavy work, to hold a small party is your best choice.

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发表于 2010-12-13 16:42:22 |显示全部楼层
PS 我不知道怎么把 WORD文档传上来~~只好这样了了~~~

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发表于 2010-12-13 23:53:01 |显示全部楼层
楼主我的等级也不够发不了附件,你给我你的邮箱我发给你吧

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发表于 2010-12-14 09:20:55 |显示全部楼层
3# adj-remy
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发表于 2010-12-14 15:33:20 |显示全部楼层
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发表于 2010-12-14 23:44:57 |显示全部楼层
12.14 独立作文
mingpj 发表于 2010-12-14 15:33


12.14 独立完成修改,记得帮我也看看哦

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发表于 2010-12-15 14:10:02 |显示全部楼层
不好意思啊,我一般晚上10点就回去了,然后可能修改作文有点迟了。

我看了你的独立,感觉第一段很好啊,是我学习的地方。我刚开始写,不知道该如何展开,而且idea也较少


*修改见附件

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发表于 2010-12-15 15:29:29 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 mingpj 于 2010-12-15 22:24 编辑

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发表于 2010-12-15 23:29:47 |显示全部楼层
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mingpj 发表于 2010-12-15 15:29

已修改好~附件如下:

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We created our own thorns, and never stopped to count the cost.

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发表于 2010-12-16 15:11:31 |显示全部楼层
本帖最后由 mingpj 于 2010-12-16 15:25 编辑

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发表于 2010-12-16 15:32:25 |显示全部楼层
-v- omg mingpj isdiligent.  hang on!
腓3:13 14. 忘記背后,努力麵前.嚮着標桿直跑.

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发表于 2010-12-16 17:55:20 |显示全部楼层
:$ 11# 大笨狒

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发表于 2010-12-16 18:54:09 |显示全部楼层
写得好,学习ing
另:你给我改的作文好像传错了,和
xiongcan818同学的一模一样
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发表于 2010-12-16 23:24:14 |显示全部楼层
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mingpj 发表于 2010-12-16 15:11

你在10楼,大家都回复到第二个版面去了,怪不得joy把你漏了~
呵呵 以后晚点点发作文 可能安全点~
改好了,附件

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发表于 2010-12-17 13:40:31 |显示全部楼层
10# mingpj

算是我的错误 弥补一下 给你改了~ 会不会改的不够仔细呢,。。

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