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本帖最后由 liuyuan1990 于 2010-12-16 16:27 编辑


 From   my   perspective, I do strongly support that investing in the recreational  facilities  is much  more essential for the government. In other words, physical  exercises , just like ,swimming and  playing basketball ,are more needed for the  contemporary  citizens to  improve  their health condition .Additionally, the life  pressure  of modern  individuals is increasingly great.  It  is  a  practical way to relax their bodies and ease their minds to  go to  use  the  recreational   facilities.  Last, the money used to set recreational  facilities is relatively less than that the construction of  art museums and concert halls need.
  To begin with, the  recreational  facilities can afford  residents excellent public exercise  places. In current society , there  really  stands  a great deal of  places for exercising. Regrettably, most of them are clubs,  which  are not public and free. To enhance the health  condition of the  majority  citizens, spending  money on  more  recreational  facilities  is  undoubtedly  crucial for the government. Especially, it is provide for the  children  who  are growing  with  loading the future of the nation. And they really need  some recreational  facilities , which are near their  communities, to exercise conveniently  and frequently.
  Meanwhile, in the contemporary world ,  considerable individuals live  under great psychological pressure. There are diverse competitions in their workplaces or educational places. Most of them are overworking ,and  students always have to stay up to complete their homework. Therefore, the recreational facilities nearby  are excellent places for most of them to relax and revive. Although, the art museum and concert halls can afford  citizens relaxing mind  places, they can not strengthen their bodies at the same time.
   At last, generally speaking, building the art museum and concert halls may expense the same money as setting recreational facilities for the government . After the invest in setting recreational facilities ,it seems that they just need to check and fix them regularly .On the contrary ,however, the government have to invest much more money in inviting the artists ,singers and bands after building the art museums and concert halls .Thus, the government can spent money on education or other areas, if they choose to invest in the recreational facilities.
   Considering the arguments stated above , I am inclined to support that it is more important for the government to spend money on recreational facilities. Apparently, setting recreational facilities is  accepted and admitted universally  by most citizens .And it can be  beneficial for the government and the citizens both. So, if the government want to invest for the citizens , it is wise and significant to invest in recreational facilities .

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发表于 2010-12-15 19:06:52 |只看该作者
我不知道怎么回事,粘贴过来就成这样了,怎么弄也弄不好,太丢人了,但是我很想让大家改作文,所以就这样吧,我很郁闷。。。

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发表于 2010-12-16 12:28:32 |只看该作者
2# liuyuan1990

你是在word上复制过来的吧,你先把他复制到txt文本上,然后再从txt文本中复制到这上面来就可以了

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发表于 2010-12-16 13:08:23 |只看该作者
改好了。
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3# madfrog4227    好了,謝謝~~~

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