“风雨与共”第一天（12.15）ARGUMENT By 【4】千寻

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     The following appeared in a memorandum from a dean at Omega University. “Fifteen years ago, Omega University implemented a new procedure that encouraged students to evaluate the teaching effectiveness of all their professors. Since that time, Omega professors have begun to assign higher grades in their classes, and overall student grade averages at Omega have risen by thirty percent. Potential employers apparently believe the grades at Omega are inflated; this would explain why Omega graduates have not been as successful at getting jobs as have graduates from nearby Alpha University. To enable its graduates to secure better jobs, Omega University should now terminate student evaluation of professors."

1. It is unfair to define the rising average grade as an apocryphal phenomenon which due to the evaluating reformation[positive: the improvement of professor’s personal quality, cycle].

2.The arguer also draws a false analogy between the two universities in their graduates’ employment and use it to support as a disadvantage of evaluation system.[the subject diversion ]

3. Termination the evaluation mechanism cannot be the absolutely useful/functional action to promote the job hunting situation[intrinsic reason: interview skills, views of job selecting, the course’s practicability ].








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    The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette. “The population of Balmer Island increases to 100,000 duing the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by each of the island's six moped and bicycle rental companies from 50 per day to 30 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council is sure to attain the 50 percent reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year in the neighboring island of Torseau, when Torseau's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals."



1.    1. The arguer fails to mention about the severity about the accidents relating mopeds in BL which is essential to judge the suggestion’s necessity.[ the misunderstanding caused by the increasing population
the casualties caused by moped]

2.    2. the arguer dues all the accidents’ responsibility to the rental company and the number of renting moped, while, this is absent of logical reference.[personal owning moped and other kinds of vehicles/ roads condition /driver’s qualification /local communication bureau’s micro-control]

3.    3. An unreasonable analogy is cited by the arguer to draw a hasty generalization that BL can reduce the moped accident just through reducing the rented moped.[the difference between two places/ the various potential reasons of accident ]







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   The following appeared in an editorial in the Mason City newspaper. “At present, Mason City residents seldom use the nearby Mason River for any kind of recreational activity, even though surveys of the region's residents consistently rank water sports (swimming, fishing, and boating) as a favorite form of recreation. Since there have been complaints about the quality of the water in the river, residents must be avoiding the river because they think that it is not clean enough. But that situation is about to change: the agency responsible for rivers in our region has announced plans to clean up Mason River. Therefore, recreational use of the river is likely to increase, so the Mason City council will need to increase its budget for improvements to the publicly owned lands along the Mason River."

1. The arguer dues all the possibility of MR’s seldom usage to the river’s clarity, which is unreasonable. [the surrounding environment condition(traffic, pollution ,geographical factor
,special zone)
]

2. The plan of cleaning MR cannot make sure the people’s increasing visiting to MR
[the efficiency and execution /effect and force
plan is not convincing enough/ whether suitable for water sports( dangerous, the recreation’s activities may be fixed) ]

3.The arguer draws a hasty generation about increasing the related budget.
[the present situation ,]