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本帖最后由 liuyuan1990 于 2010-12-19 17:10 编辑

       In my opinion, I do agree that most of the advertisements make their products appear better than they really are. In the   contemporary world, advertisements have become an essential part  of  the products consumption.
I cannot imagine a product can be known by most of consumers and  sold  well without a delicate advertisement. However, the majority of  advertisements  indeed  exaggerate  what the products really are and  a great deal of consumers feel cheated by the advertisements.
       Most manufactures want to make their  products  known by the common individuals ,so that they will create an amazing market and then the companies can profit from it  .For this reason, they ask someone who really can make the advertisement more attractive and inviting. We can easily know this by  watching  television or surfing the internet ,where are  full of these kind of advertisements.
       In addition, a great deal of companies will make fabulous and perfect advertisement when their products first come to the market. To impress all the consumers , they believe they must do the job very well ,because the first impression is significant. If this step can be done successfully, they can go far and smooth afterward.
       In the meantime, there  really  exists  some advertisements ,whose descriptions about their products are true  and convincing. Most of these products  were  began  to sell  several years ago ,which have a good reputation and excellent consumption. Nevertheless, it seems that these kind of products are really hard to see , because if a product is famous enough ,the company hardly need an advertisement to propagate its products unless it has some new products .
     We  can  easily  conclude from the reasons stated above that most of the advertisements make products appear better than they really are. I believe this can be understood and admitted by most people because the impressions  on  their  products  from  consumers are really very important.      


今天写的很快,我自己也觉得写的不好,求拍砖~  

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发表于 2010-12-19 18:03:15 |显示全部楼层
       In my opinion, I do agree that most of the advertisements make their products appear better than they really are. In the   contemporary world, advertisements have become an essential part  of   ...
liuyuan1990 发表于 2010-12-19 17:09

已修改。感觉看着挺矛盾。⊙﹏⊙b汗

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