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发表于 2010-12-24 18:07:41
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12.23 整理
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原文:
For Better or Worse
21世纪启示录
提示:
21世纪已到来。你认为这100年里会有什么变化呢?写一篇至少120个单词的文章,说明你的看法。
The 21st century is a time of innovations and challenges. With an oil shortage looming on the horizon, scientists are now exploring alternative energy sources to replace fossil fuels. Once their efforts are successful, conflicts over oil will be a thing of the past. In addition, genetic engineering will be widely applied in both medicine and agriculture. Although this new technology has incited controversy, fear will gradually dissipate as the public becomes more accepting of it.
While humans make advances in some areas, they are always threatening the existence of natural resources. As agriculture encroaches upon woodlands, plants and animals die out in droves due to loss of habitats. The ozone layer, vital for our survival, is being depleted at an alarming rate. Efforts to salvage nature will be fruitless as long as the economy is put first. Will the 21st century be the summit of scientific achievement as well as the doom of mankind? Only time will tell.
21世纪是创新与挑战的时代。由于石油危机逐渐逼近,科学家现正寻找能取代石化燃料的能源。一旦成功,石油引起的冲突将不复存在。此外,基因工程将在医学和农业广泛应用。虽然这种新科技引发争议,待大众的接受度提高后,恐惧的心理将逐渐消失。
人类虽然在某些方面有所进展,却也不断地威胁天然资源的保存。随着农业侵入林地,大批动植物因失去栖息地而灭绝。攸关人类生存的臭氧层,其耗竭的速度令人担忧。只要经济被摆在第一位,再怎么抢救大自然都没有用。21世纪是否会是科技成就的颠峰,以及人类的大限?只有时间才能证明。
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引导句:21世纪是创新与挑战的时代。
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发展句:各种科技不断进步,因而威胁许多动植物的生存,以及造成臭氧层被破坏。
3.
结论句:只有时间才能证明以上预测是否正确。
音频整理:
备注:Karon用英文解析时,我会把它们记下来,因为一个是英英同义转换能力,一个是可以学习口语。还有赖老师和Karon经常会引申开将一些表达和用法,我也记下来了。最后我模仿了第一段。再笔记的后面。
这篇文章我觉得从句型角度和内容角度都是很好的。内容也可以用到托福作文里,关于环境,创新与挑战等等。SAT作文里也可用~ 嗯。
我听的时候就录下来了。在附件里。我的笔记里有些是直接听写Karon的话所以就没管标点符号对不对。谅解~
1. get married时用:for richer or poorer, for better or worse, we will stay/stick together
in a larger meaning 广义上 表示in good conditions or in bad conditions
through thick and thin=no matter what it means
2. 启示录
Revelations----the book of Revelations
(一定要加s)
赖世雄说:第一段讲“未来发生什么样的事情,是好是坏都不清楚”
Karon :it would certainly be both, because it is always a way we works out.
开始讲文章,赖世雄说这是篇上乘的文章,Karon说这篇有点难,所以先start by learning the vocabularies and the idioms
学不好也别沮丧~
3.注意21st发音
is hard to 【meet the challenges】
all the old systems need to be renovated
renovation 革新innovation创新
4. oil shortage
当两个名词放在一起,第二个名词读的时候无重音
好短语to loom means to appear and be threatening
it's not here yet but it's getting closer
表示还有点距离但时间也快来临了
dandan造句: With the deadline of application looming on the horizon, students are particularly busy.
explore=look into=try out
alternative=sth. different from what we were using now right now, we are using electricity, oil, actually the main thing they are thinking of is oil.A lot of electricity comes from oil,originally.
Soon we will not have enough oil, there is an oil shortage that's getting closer,and scientists are now discussing, they are looking into/ trying out all kinds of different kinds of energy sources as we can use instead of fossil fuels that is petroleum.
学结构:looming分词,修饰oil shortage
=oil shortage approaching
petrol(英)=gasoline(美)
fossil fuels 化石燃料,namely petroleum. (石油)
5. this sentence is assuming that we are
going to be able to solve the problem,but on the other hand we have to solve the problem,because someday we will not have oil, we must come up with another answer.
6. after they have found some replacement for fossil fuels, then we will no longer fight over oil.
conflict=a fight
we will not be able to use oil as an excuse for waging war,it will be a thing of the past(sth. that happens before the history but cannot happen anymore)
to wage wars on/against.. country发动战争
have conflicts/qurral/disagreements over... 因...
7. apply to/ in.. 应用
8. to incite 煽动
to dissipate means to slowly disappear
controversy is simliar to conflict or sth that people feel very strongly about and don't agree over.
the public becomes more accepting of it= they think it is OK and allow it to go on.
In spite of this disagreement, people will slowly not be afraid of it anymore, because they will see the benefits of it. eg. maybe we will no longer have sth like hemophilia,which is 血友病(不能轻易碰撞)
gradually=step by step/ little by little
to be accepting of sth..更为接纳
9. While =though
to come into being=to come into existence.(重要!)
The first radio came into existence about
100 years ago.
10.(常用)in droves=in a large number
eg.my hair is coming out in droves头发大把大把地掉下来
as=when
to encroach upon 固定用法:
侵犯
11. vital=extremely important
if we don't have it, we cannot live. (vital不能随便用,只能是重要到没它就不能活下去了)
In order for us to keep living, we have to have an intact ozone layer.
intact完整的
deplete=destroy/use up
at an alarming rate
eg. crime is increasing at an alarming rate in this area.
托福作文开头介绍背景时常常能用到:...发展速度越来越快,以后就可以用... develops at an alarming rate.
12. salvage nature= save /protect nature.
your efforts will be fruitless=doomed 注定失败的= in vain
Karon: Here is a major problem that I just think about every country has faced on the ...and that is when you are trying to become wealthy,then you sometimes forget about some really important things like nature, so as long as you only care about money, you care about economic success, then you are
never going to
make much progress trying to save nature, your efforts will come to nothing/fail.
13..... So the 21 th could be two things: we achieve a lot of things and science but we also meet our own end.
summit 高峰
doom灭亡=meet our end
重要用法:doomed没戏的(后面一定是放坏的事)
he is doomed to failure/fail
Such a hard working man is bound to succeed.
be bound to 后面可跟坏的或者好的事。
我仿写了第一段:
The 21st century is a time of studying abroad. With the deadline of application looming on the horizon, students are particularly busy selecting schools and writing essays. Once their efforts are successful, conflicts over the feasibility of studying abroad will be a thing of the past. In addition, the experience and statistics will be widely applied to the application next year. Athough this new tide has incited controversy , misgivings will be gradually dissipate as the public becomes more accepting of it. 有兴趣的同学可以仿写第二段,很多用法都很不错~ |
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