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TOPIC: ISSUE130 - "How children are socialized today determines the destiny of society. Unfortunately, we have not yet learned how to raise children who can help bring about a better society."
WORDS: 419          TIME: 00:45:00          DATE: 2011/1/22 17:07:38

          Facing a lot of obstacles in the process of developing a perfect society,people gradually realized that the main reason is the education of our children.In order to create a peaceful and happy future,we need to revelutionlize the education system to meet the demand of the era.
          There are many problems existing in the recent education system.For instance,as is known to all ,the enroll rate of universities is now very low,which means only a few numble of students can have the chance to go to a college.It is reported that around 26 million infants were born in 1990,and the total numble of students which can go to campus in 2008 is only 6 million.Suppossing that only 25% students can be educated,after a few years,when it comes to the time these kids regularing the country,what will happen since the governer is of little knowledgy?
           Luckily,it seems that in recent years,many universities begin to enroll more students according to the government's policies.But does it works or does these kind of actions really do benefit of students?I guess not to some extent.We can find many news report in tvs or on the net which expose some bad facets of colleges.Such as the steps of enrolling more students are just for more money.I admit that this action partly will solve the problem of low enrolling rate,and increase the morality of out nation,but we still need to notice the bad facets,only then can we really solve the problem.
           Finally,thanks to many practical policies,there are still a numble of students who get the opportunity to go to campus,however,do they really learn some useful knowledge?Or are they happy about what they have learnt?With the economy developing faster and faster in today's world,students will face more challenges and a more competitive society when they graduate.And probably just because of this,teachers seem only care about the knowledge itself,so in their daily class,they only emphasize the points to memorize,but not create,and what's worse,they may think that it is good enough if a student can solve a problem,so it is unnecessary for students to know why and how.Such things are common enough in today's education system,and I am afraid that this may destroy students'creativity.
           As the old saying goes,students are the sun of tommorrow,the nation's future is decided by the next generation.Therefore,governments need to take serious steps to revolutionlize the recent education system,investing more money in the education field,establishing more practical laws to regulate universities,and so on.Nontheless,I am still convinced that if we cooperate together,we will have a wonderful future soon!