新手第一篇argue，刚写了几段。第14题，恳请拍砖

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arguement 14题，有点弱哈，求大神们不要给面子，谢谢。

In this memo, the owner of Green Thumb Gardening Center conclude that GC can increase their profits by greatly expanding the variety of vegetable seed they stock for gardeners this spring for the reasons below:1 there is evidence that consumers find more and more interest in growing vegetables themselves; 2 a nantional survey conducted last month indicated that many consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in suoermarkets;3 a gardening magazine has sold out at the stand three months in a row. However, I find his argument weak, as the three points below.
  Firstly, if the interest of growing vegetables is truely increase, GT may also need to compete with other gardening centers. If GT want to increase their profits only by expanding the variety of vegetable seeds, without proper ads or other actions, the consumers may be attract by the other gardening centers which low down their price of seeds.
  Secondly, a national survey cannot tell that the local consumers were dissatisfied with the quality of fresh vegetables available in supermarkets. The local consumers may be not interested in vegetables at all, or the local fresh vegetables from the supermarkets is good. there is another situation that the consumers can buy vegetable from markets other than supermarkets.
  What's more, the evidenve that the gardening magazine has sold out in a row cannot help to convince the owner's argument. A single stand cannot explain how the magazine is sold in the whole area nearby GT. Maybe the consumers are interested in the gift presented by this magazine, or the stand decrease the number of this magazine when he buy them.