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发表于 2011-3-11 13:22:42 |只看该作者
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Only movies that can teach us something about real life worth watching.090911
Hundreds years after the movie generate, it undergo a tremendous change, gradually become a complicated art form. Movie exist do not just for teaching people about the real life, but also have other values. So, I don’t agree that only movies that can teach us something about real life worth watching.
From the angle of team of movie makers, each motion picture has their own spirit they want to emphasis or express, not just teach people about real life. Along with the computer technique developed and social developed, it divided many parts of jobs, different categories, movie evolved very complicated. For example, some commercial movie, the makers just want to transit the information about the fashion or car, or charming actors, beautiful shots, like the movie <the devil wears prada >, <the holidays>. And, some movie give us fascinate original soundtracks, like the movie<1900>, <the music and the lyrics>. You cannot say these movies do not worth to watch. They are really attractive and have their own art values.举一个具体的例子比这样罗列可能效果更好)

For the audience, watching a movie is not just for learning something, sometimes, a quite large numbers of people watch movie for some particular actors or for relaxing, moreover some people just see particular kind of movies. People watch movie for their own aims. For me, I am a fun of Johnny depp and Edward Norton, I have seen all the movies they attended, like Johnny depp’s, even traced to 80’s. So watching movies just for the actor or director I love, never consider learning something, but if can, it’s nice but not important. On the other hand, a newspaper survey shows most people watching movie just for relax, getting some fun or killing time when two persons just fall in love.(不太恰当) Especially under high stress society, between(删)
learning and watching movie, it doesn’t seem to have any closely related.
On the other hand, many methods we can use to learn knowledge in this information society, watching movie is not the best way. It is not the main point since movie have been invented, in the early age of movie developed, it normally shows to people many continuous pictures about landscapes around the world. Learning something is not the essence of motion pictures.
In one word, movie brings us lots of fun, let people get close to each other and relax, teaching us something is nice, but if not, it doesn’t matter!








It’s more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and performance center than to build recreational facilities(such as swimming pool. playground)  090919na
Art museums and recreational facilities are the necessary part of urban planning. None of them can absent in a city. However, due to the city conditions which I live, I agree that it is more important for the government to spend money to build art museums and performance center than to build recreational facilities.
To begin with, the museum and performance centre promote citizen’s spiritual life and bring more profit to the city. If a city doesn’t have a relatively perfect museum, it will like a person lost his soul. For museum, it recreate the city’s figure and give people a place for tracing the history, while deepening the sense of belonging of their citizen. On the other hand, built a excellent performance center can attract more artists to come and hold concerts, also offer more chances for citizen to contact the art form they like. Of course, it will bring much profit for government and job opportunities, promote the city economic.
More important, it offers a proper place for school to teach their class. A increasing number of schools begin to pay attention on the social class education. Teaching knowledge to their students about the history or environment where they live in, and the city development, it would be a important task for education system. If a city can build more different type of museums, like art museum, science museum, history museum, nature museum, it would be promote the education quality and help to increase students’ interests of study at the same time.(论据稍显不足,举几个实际例证更好)

On the other hand, nowadays, city planners and landscape architects have designed enough places for people work out. Almost any of theevery residential and neighborhood area in Asia, like Singapore, China and Japan, all plan two to three recreational spaces for people do sport. But, for most young people, they prefer to work out in the personal clue.
In conclusion, according to the city development, we already have enough recreational areas, but built more special and diverse subjects museum are we need.

整体结构不错,多注意一些细节和词语会更好,加油




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发表于 2011-3-11 17:47:28 |只看该作者
311 综合 tpo18
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