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96"Although, critics who write about the arts tend to deny the existence of any objective standards for evaluating works of art, they have a responsibility to establish standards by which works of art can be judged."
我记得以前那个菜虫宝宝写过这个题目!
Although evaluating works of art is seldom an objective job, critics should take the responsibility to make the proper standards,(加个as possible as they can 如何?) this is to say, to strive to make correct(感觉应该用appropriate 或proper更合适点,因为你也不承认所谓可观的观点) judgment according to their experience and objective principles, and as a consequence, making the evaluation more possibly objective and publicizing artists' works. 很好,观点鲜明!
There is no denying that critics can seldom keep an even-handed role in assessing the value of artistic works. First of all, usually, critics of works of art (artworks)and their creators(authors) are from(come from) different periods, this(which) means that critics can not know the background on which artists made the works, their attitudes and thoughts to arts and to the society, their moods and feelings, etc., so when evaluating them, they have to make many assumptions, adding their own understanding and points of view, therefore some subjective ideas unavoidably and imperceptibly immerse into their evaluation work;(这句话有点乱!我觉得写简单点更好!) Secondly, even if they attempt to evaluate the contemporary artistic works, being lack of the latest standards to keep up with the increasingly changeable tendency of art mainstream, it is also difficult for critics to conduct disinterested and objective assessment. Thirdly, critics, a kind of social existence like all of us(直接点,just like all of us), can hardly eschew the exterior impacts, especially (the temptation of)for the profits and authority. Enticements of money and coercion of high-power are the primary reason of (for)their departure from their jobs(responsibilities吧!). Consequently, just like a saying goes, nothing is objective, nor is the evaluation of arts. 这段是让步!
However, are the evaluating jobs of critics are(多余的吧!) meaningless in light of the above statement? It is definitely not. It is the critics that help artists to truly realize the value of their works. Artists must be very appreciated when someone give their works a high appraisement; even if those comments are hypercritical and strict, does people learn most from those whose perspectives are different and even controversial from them? Literally, it is(they do). What's more important, it is also the critics that make their creations popular, and therefore bring with them honor and even huge awards. Without them, how can one know masterpieces such as Mona Lisa of Vinci, Sunflower of Van Gogh, and David of Michelangelo? Without them, how can them win the popularity in their times or in their posthumous times? 这段主要谈的是评论家的作用,而不是评论标准,有点跑题了!
Admittedly, like many critics in Van Gogh’s times who could rarely comprehend the inherent implications of his works, especially for his abstract ones, today's critics also confront with similar problems. Thus, critics are accountable to(for doing) institute proper standards to objectively assess the value of artistic creations to the most extent. Not only should they establish them based on their accumulated knowledge and experience concerning arts' criticism--by researching the history of former artists and communicating with contemporary artists, but they also should make these standards ever-developing so as to follow the fashionable trends of art creations. Only doing this, can evaluation most objectively reflect their inherent value, and reappear what artists want to express. 没看明白什么意思。
In summary, although evaluating of works of arts can not be made entirely objectively due to the limitations of time, standards and critics themselves, it is still necessary for them(them是谁,不要过多使用代词!)to endeavor to work out optimum assessment standards for artistic works in order to truly reflect their(their 又是指代谁?) inner value, and to make the public's appreciation possible。
我觉得你对这个题目的思考并不成熟,理由不够充分,没多少说服力。不过,文章结构还是比较清楚的!
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