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[优秀习作] issue96 一篇艺术评论家的,大家帮看看! [复制链接]

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96"Although, critics who write about the arts tend to deny the existence of any objective standards for evaluating works of art, they have a responsibility to establish standards by which works of art can be judged."

Although evaluating works of art is seldom an objective job, critics should take the responsibility to make the proper standards, this is to say, to strive to make correct judgment according to their experience and objective principles, and as a consequence, making the evaluation more possibly objective and publicizing artists' works.

There is no denying that critics can seldom keep an even-handed role in assessing the value of artistic works. First of all, usually, critics of works of art and their creators are from different periods, this means that critics can not know the background on which artists made the works, their attitudes and thoughts to arts and to the society, their moods and feelings, etc., so when evaluating them, they have to make many assumptions, adding their own understanding and points of view, therefore some subjective ideas unavoidably and imperceptibly immerse into their evaluation work; Secondly, even if they attempt to evaluate the contemporary artistic works, being lack of the latest standards to keep up with the increasingly changeable tendency of art mainstream, it is also difficult for critics to conduct disinterested and objective assessment. Thirdly, critics, a kind of social existence like all of us, can hardly eschew the exterior impacts, especially for the profits and authority. Enticements of money and coercion of high-power are the primary reason of their departure from their jobs. Consequently, just like a saying goes, nothing is objective, nor is the evaluation of arts.

However, are the evaluating jobs of critics are meaningless in light of the above statement? They are definitely not. It is the critics who help artists to truly realize the value of their works. Artists must be very appreciated when someone give their works a high appraisement; even if those comments are hypercritical and strict, do people learn most from those whose perspectives are different and even controversial from them? Literally, they do. What's more important, it is also the critics who make their creations popular, and therefore bring with them honor and even huge awards. Without them, how can one know masterpieces such as Mona Lisa of Vinci, Sunflower of Van Gogh, and David of Michelangelo? Without them, how can them win the popularity in their times or in their posthumous times?

Admittedly, like many critics in Van Gogh’s times who could rarely comprehend the inherent implications of his works, especially for his abstract ones, today's critics also confront with similar problems. Thus, critics are accountable to institute proper standards to objectively assess the value of artistic creations to the most extent. Not only should they establish them based on their accumulated knowledge and experience concerning arts' criticism--by researching the history of former artists and communicating with contemporary artists, but they also should make these standards ever-developing so as to follow the fashionable trends of art creations. Only doing this, can evaluation most objectively reflect their inherent value, and reappear what artists want to express.

In summary, although evaluating of works of arts can not be made entirely objectively due to the limitations of time, standards and critics themselves, it is still necessary for them to endeavor to work out optimum assessment standards for artistic works in order to truly reflect their inner value, and to make the public's appreciation possible.
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96"Although, critics who write about the arts tend to deny the existence of any objective standards for evaluating works of art, they have a responsibility to establish standards by which works of art can be judged."
我记得以前那个菜虫宝宝写过这个题目!
Although evaluating works of art is seldom an objective job, critics should take the responsibility to make the proper standards,(加个as possible as they can 如何?) this is to say, to strive to make correct(感觉应该用appropriate 或proper更合适点,因为你也不承认所谓可观的观点) judgment according to their experience and objective principles, and as a consequence, making the evaluation more possibly objective and publicizing artists' works. 很好,观点鲜明!

There is no denying that critics can seldom keep an even-handed role in assessing the value of artistic works. First of all, usually, critics of works of art (artworks)and their creators(authors) are from(come from) different periods, this(which) means that critics can not know the background on which artists made the works, their attitudes and thoughts to arts and to the society, their moods and feelings, etc., so when evaluating them, they have to make many assumptions, adding their own understanding and points of view, therefore some subjective ideas unavoidably and imperceptibly immerse into their evaluation work;(这句话有点乱!我觉得写简单点更好!) Secondly, even if they attempt to evaluate the contemporary artistic works, being lack of the latest standards to keep up with the increasingly changeable tendency of art mainstream, it is also difficult for critics to conduct disinterested and objective assessment. Thirdly, critics, a kind of social existence like all of us(直接点,just like all of us), can hardly eschew the exterior impacts, especially (the temptation of)for the profits and authority. Enticements of money and coercion of high-power are the primary reason of (for)their departure from their jobs(responsibilities吧!). Consequently, just like a saying goes, nothing is objective, nor is the evaluation of arts. 这段是让步!

However, are the evaluating jobs of critics are(多余的吧!) meaningless in light of the above statement? It is definitely not. It is the critics that help artists to truly realize the value of their works. Artists must be very appreciated when someone give their works a high appraisement; even if those comments are hypercritical and strict, does people learn most from those whose perspectives are different and even controversial from them? Literally, it is(they do). What's more important, it is also the critics that make their creations popular, and therefore bring with them honor and even huge awards. Without them, how can one know masterpieces such as Mona Lisa of Vinci, Sunflower of Van Gogh, and David of Michelangelo? Without them, how can them win the popularity in their times or in their posthumous times? 这段主要谈的是评论家的作用,而不是评论标准,有点跑题了!

Admittedly, like many critics in Van Gogh’s times who could rarely comprehend the inherent implications of his works, especially for his abstract ones, today's critics also confront with similar problems. Thus, critics are accountable to(for doing) institute proper standards to objectively assess the value of artistic creations to the most extent. Not only should they establish them based on their accumulated knowledge and experience concerning arts' criticism--by researching the history of former artists and communicating with contemporary artists, but they also should make these standards ever-developing so as to follow the fashionable trends of art creations. Only doing this, can evaluation most objectively reflect their inherent value, and reappear what artists want to express. 没看明白什么意思。

In summary, although evaluating of works of arts can not be made entirely objectively due to the limitations of time, standards and critics themselves, it is still necessary for them(them是谁,不要过多使用代词!)to endeavor to work out optimum assessment standards for artistic works in order to truly reflect their(their 又是指代谁?) inner value, and to make the public's appreciation possible。

我觉得你对这个题目的思考并不成熟,理由不够充分,没多少说服力。不过,文章结构还是比较清楚的!
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谢谢happyman 细致的批改!全部接受!
是啊! 我觉得我对issue题目的思考就是很浅薄,深入不下去!
不知你是如何提高这一点的?
还有,你对这个issue 是如何理解的?
critics 的终极任务是什么?我说的是反映艺术作品的内在价值,以及使大众更多的了解它们。

补充一点思路,可能说有时候critics 的标准会阻碍艺术家的创作(这一点我没有写)。
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发表于 2003-7-15 00:58:24 |只看该作者
这个问题俺也觉得棘手,不过我觉得持反对态度更容易上手!以前那个chaichongbaobao写过这个题目,她举的理由好像很不错!

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发表于 2003-7-15 05:26:59 |只看该作者
critics的目的可不可以说是为了发现艺术的不足,从而促使其向更好的方向发展呢?
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发表于 2003-7-15 06:49:41 |只看该作者
there is no possiblity for the critics to set objective stanards in the case of art, considering the unique features of art. If you insist there should be a criterion, it should be aesthetics,. Although intangible as it stands, it could be the only standard to evaluate a piece of art

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发表于 2003-7-15 07:48:36 |只看该作者
楼上的都好牛啊,我怎么也想不了那么深,这下我知道为什么我的作文是3.5了,加油加油啊!

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发表于 2003-7-15 14:44:45 |只看该作者
偶觉得这个题目从驳论的角度来写比较容易入手。
(共同探讨,乐趣无穷。)

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不同意题目观点:
1,critics的作用是指导和帮助大众欣赏艺术作品。“鉴赏”是见仁见智的;艺术评论不必提倡一家之谈,也不应该有什么标准。
2,critics是带着时代烙印的。同一艺术作品在不同时代背景下的鉴赏方法和艺术价值是不同。
3,critics也是分流派的,这是艺术界的特点,不能抹杀,不能统一。art不同于science,感性>理性;science追求标准答案,art的终极目标是free mind。
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发表于 2003-7-15 15:31:29 |只看该作者
看来不用我们动脑筋了,呵呵,bloominglee已想出最好的答案了。

曾经有个philosopher 告诉我,critics is my way of appreciating. 是的,这些人喜欢不落俗套地评价世间事,不是从人们所认为的思维的正面去想问题,而是反面。

happyman你的头像比较unacceptable,那只猪笑得……

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发表于 2003-7-15 16:27:35 |只看该作者
feier,我觉得你的思考角度是好的,但是由于有点过于追求语言的复杂度(用了一些赘词),从而影响了你的表达的清晰度,希望你在这方面改改,要知道并不是所有好文章都是难词的集结。

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发表于 2003-7-15 18:25:31 |只看该作者
blooming_lee,我觉得你把我想表达的但是又表达不出来 的说出来了!鼓掌!
坚持到底!我会改变自己!

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发表于 2003-7-15 18:26:03 |只看该作者
是有那么点
怎么说来着??
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谢谢楼上的各位,
好!按照不同意题目的观点写。
1,critics的作用是指导和帮助大众欣赏艺术作品。“鉴赏”是见仁见智的;艺术评论不必提倡一家之谈,也不应该有什么标准。
2,critics是带着时代烙印的。同一艺术作品在不同时代背景下的鉴赏方法和艺术价值是不同。
3,critics也是分流派的,这是艺术界的特点,不能抹杀,不能统一。art不同于science,感性>理性;science追求标准答案,art的终极目标是free mind。


blooming_lee MM 学什么的?说的真好!
呵呵,越来越发觉汉语的渊博,伟大,优美了。等中国发达了,老外都往咱们这儿跑,咱也创一个China GRE,考死老外!
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发表于 2003-7-15 22:47:54 |只看该作者
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[B]blooming_lee MM 学什么的?说的真好!
呵呵,越来越发觉汉语的渊博,伟大,优美了。等中国发达了,老外都往咱们这儿跑,咱也创一个China GRE,考死老外!以下省略...... [/B]


偶是学生物的。
那个,考死老外~~~~~~~~~~~
哎呀,那真是令人向往!
那时候,偶能去监考就好了。
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呵呵。偶去批作文!
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issue96 一篇艺术评论家的,大家帮看看!
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