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4.30 作文：which is better, doing work by machine or doing work by hand?

In recent 100 years,scientists invented many machines for different use. It indeed changed every aspect of our life. Bying using machine, we are liberated from many simple but time consuming work , then we have more time to involve us in other meaningful work. However,handwork is irreplaceable in some occasions in which machine work is less creative than handwork. In my opinion , it's rather superficial to say that which is better.


First of all, doing work by machine is much more efficient than by hand especially when you take a simple,mechanical work . The invention of many machines are for the purpose of saving people from such work. For example, machine is popular used in textile industry. Imagine the work situation without a sewing machine, workers have to pick up needles and threads by hands to sew clothes which is obviously much slower than doing work by machine.


What's more,doing work by machine can make your work more accurate than by hand. For instance,when people write some reports , there are always some spelling mistakes when writing by hand. While if you use a computer , it can point out your mistakes , even can amend some spelling errors directly.
Also it makes revising more convenient because you just need to copy, cut or paste some words or sentences which avoid hand-writing mistakes for you.


However, doing work by machine should not always be advocated especially in the field of art. It indeed can produce more products by using a machine. But it is no doubt that the most remarkable works of art are all made by hands because they are more flexible and creative than works of art which are made by machine. In addition, handcraft is part of history, culture which should be taught generation by generation.


In conclusion, it’s hard to say whether doing work by machine is better than doing work by hand .

我觉得写的好的一篇：
Q:
Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
A:
I definitely prefer using machines to do work. Using machines has a lot of advantages which hand works do not have. Using machines is obviously much faster than using hand. And also, it is more accurate and convenient. Nowadays, people cannot live without using machines.

First of all, using machines is much faster than hand works. For instance, there is no doubt to use machines is the best way to make products, such as cars. In my country, there are a lot of factories to make cars. There are no factories do not use machines. Machines are one of great invention for people and these machines make all works amazingly faster.

Secondly, using machine is more accurate than hand works. For example, when people calculate some mathematics problems, some people might make mistakes. If you let computers calculate something, they never make any mistakes. Of course, calculating is one of the work of computer, therefore we should use the function as much as possible.

Finally, using machine is more convenient than hand work. If you use machines, you can get more time, rather than doing yourself. Only you have to do is pushing the button and then starting machines. Meanwhile, you can do other things, because you do not need to be there where the machines are working. It is very convenient. You can also feel comfortable as well as convenient.

To sum up, I believe using machines is much better than using hand to do work. Machine is obviously much faster, more accurate, and more convenient. For these reasons, I prefer using machines than doing work by hand.(268)
范文优点：
1.
观点明确，逻辑清楚
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Which is better, 为什么better呢，因为有种种优点，这些优点一一铺开，形成段落，很有条理
3.
说话直接。。。每段第一句说明优点 然后再举例
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举例 也是为了对比，例子很贴切好懂






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