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96. People have different ways of escaping the stress and difficulites of modern life. Some read; some exercise; others work in their gardens. What do you think are the best ways of reducing stress? Use specific details and examples in your answer.
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Actually in this contemporlary society, people are fruaght with various kinds of stresses and difficulites which, to some extent, cause some inconvenience to people's lives and work. Thus, it is of vital importance for them to take some measures to escape or soften the stress or the difficulities. Under this circumstances, different people would take different methods to soften the stress or escape the difficulties: some might read some materials they prefer, some may do some excerise, while others would do some graden work. Honestly speaking, every method has its advantages on eascaping the stress or the difficulties. However, in my opinion, I really prefer to do some excersise which I contend is the best way to reduce stress.
For the first point, to do exercise is a good way for us to keep the boring things which cause the stress or difficulty to us far away from our mind. For example, when Jim, a student in a college campus, feels bad for the recent study and he is full of stress in his heart. At this moment, to play basketball without any consideration about the study is a good way to relax himself. After fully relaxing, he can adapt himself to enhance his study on his disadvantages. To be honest, Jim would feel better after whole relaxing to the stress in front of him. Thus, to do exercise can benefit us when we relaxe during the process of physical exercise.
Secondly, to do exercise can promote us to enhance our physical conditions. It is well-known that physical exercise can improve individual's physical health. According to some survey, some people, who always do some sports, would share a relative long and healthy life than those without any sports in their lives. Therefore, to do exercise is beneficial to one's physical health.
To sum up, no matter whatever the stress or the difficulties are, people could find their ways to reduce the stress. In addition, I prefer to do some exercise to relax myself when I confront the stress or difficulities.

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Do you agree or not with following statement: most people solve their important problems by themselves or with the help from their families; the help from government is not necessary.

In our daily lives, different people always confront various kinds of difficulties. When confronted with such important problems, some people who hold the idea that any help form the government is unnecessary would solve the problems by themselves or ask some help form their families. However, in my opinion, I can not agree with the idea because I believe that although to solve the problems by oneself is of vital importance, we still make proficient use of the help from the society.

To start with, I agree that one should have his ability to solve the problems individually. For example, in our daily lives, we should have the ability to take care of ourselves, such as we should learn to cook, wash our clothes and have friends with others, which are the indispensable part of our daily lives. To cook and wash clothes is to maintain we can have basic ability to live on, while to have friends with others is to make our lives more colorful and also another way to have a nice future because some friends would help us a lot. Thus, to solve problems by oneself or one’s family is important.

However, to obtain the help from society plays a crucial role in one’s growth. There is no denied that the ability of one individual is finite. On the contrary, the society have huge force to promote us in our business or daily lives. For example, it is the society that have the ability to gather the money to build the highway which would benefit our transportation. We can imagine that it is quite difficult for one or his family to collect the money to build the highway. Thus, we should make use of help from society properly because that help would promote our success a lot.

In sum, I can not agree with the author’s idea that one should solve the problems by himself or with the help from his family without any help from the society. On the contrary, from my own prospective, it is a good idea to enhance one’s ability to solve the problems and at the same time fully absorb the help from the society to deal with his own affairs.

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Actually in this contemporlary(contemporary) society, people are fruaght(fraught) with various kinds of stresses and difficulites which, to some extent, cause some inconvenience to people's lives(life) and work(这句话你想表达什么？which 起什么作用？). Thus, it is of vital（去掉） importance for them to take some measures to escape or soften the stress or the difficulities. Under this circumstances, different people would take different methods to soften the stress or escape the difficulties: some might read some materials they prefer, some may do some excerise, while others would do some graden work. Honestly speaking, every method has its advantages on eascaping the stress or the difficulties. However, in my opinion, I really prefer to do some excersise which I contend is the best way to reduce stress.) y: |+ e; I0 r# C
For the first point, to do exercise is a good way for us to keep the boring things which cause the stress or difficulty to us far away from our mind. For example, when Jim, a student in a college campus, feels bad for the recent study and he is full of stress in his heart. At this moment, to play basketball without any consideration about the study is a good way to relax himself. After fully relaxing, he can adapt himself to enhance his study on his disadvantages. To be honest, Jim would feel better after whole relaxing to the stress in front of him. Thus, to do exercise can benefit us when we relaxe during the process of physical exercise.
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To sum up, no matter whatever the stress or the difficulties are, people could find their ways to reduce the stress. In addition, I prefer to do some exercise to relax myself when I confront the stress or difficulities.
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