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发表于 2011-5-10 22:54:38 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览
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发表于 2011-5-11 22:06:19 |只看该作者
With the booming of the economy,the government have a multitute of money to build art museums,music performance center as well as recreational facilities.Some people think that the government should spend more money on building art museums and music performance center,but I don’t agree.
First,only by doing a lot of exercise can we relax ourselves and release the pressure which brought from the study and work.Instead of studying or working all the time,we take some exercise and we will later study better or work in a more efficient way.More importantly,exercise will give us a happy mood,which will probally lead to good grades.And It will revesely make us more happy and have more energy to study.Large companies,such as IBM,Microsoft ang GE will not only build art museums,music performance center but also build palygrouds or swimming pool.
On the other hand,exercise gives us a strong body to defend disease.Strong body to a person is as ink to a pen.Seldom do people notice the fact that strong body is the basic of success.When I was young,I got sick easily which influenced my grades and body.After I got in love with basketball,I played it every day and result in a strong body now.I’m full of energy every day.Not only did it saved a lot of money to buy medicine but also it gave me encourage to overcome problems and diseases.
Undeniably,no longer can we ignore the fact that building recreational facilities is important.Although,building are museums and performance center has contributed a lot to the social world.Building  recreational facilities provides the same impottant thing-----health.From what has been discussed above,we could safety draw the conclusion that build art museums,music performance center is as important as building recreational facilities.

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发表于 2011-5-12 12:45:14 |只看该作者
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发表于 2011-5-12 17:08:44 |只看该作者

不错!

本帖最后由 keaishu 于 2011-5-12 17:18 编辑

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发表于 2011-5-13 22:50:12 |只看该作者
While the rhythm of people’s living is speeding up, a lot of changes have taken place in ordinary people’s mind.More and more people want to go outside to find a job rather than stay at home.I approve that people who go outside are more successful and happier than the other way around.
   For one thing,going outside will broaden our eyes.Cities,especially big cities provide us with a lot of opportunities for finding a job.By going out side,we can easily find a job which fit for us and we can gain a multitute of working experience.More importantly,armed with this king of working experience,we can enhance our critical thinking skill,analytical skill ,logical thinking skill and working skill,to name but a few.After that we can get a superb chance to open our own companies and finally succeed.
For the other thing,there are a sufficient of recreation facilities in cities.We could spend our leisure time going shopping,eating delicious food from different countries or going to the bar to relax with our friends.Thus making a lot of friends and communicating with others.Eventualy can we strengthen our abilities to work more efficient,which result in more profit in fund.If Edward Gibbon didn’t go outside but stay in village,he would not be so successful in the end.
Undeniably,there also some advantages for staying in the village.The environment is less pollution in village.However from what has been discussed about we could easily draw conclusion that people who go outside are more successul and happier than people who stay in village.

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发表于 2011-5-14 08:33:13 |只看该作者
5.13 独立 改好了

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