Daily Writing (asking for advice~)

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还有20天就考试了。从今天起把前几天写得文章再认真修改一遍，顺便传到GTER上希望各位大牛小牛们帮忙修改修改提提意见:)谢谢大家的帮助哈~
今天写得是一片机经上的~
For successful development of a country, should a government focus its budget more on very young children education rather than on universities?

In recent years, our government is facing a dilemma in choosing the prior investment. Whether the government should focus its budget on very young children rather than on universities has been discussed frequently as a primary problem in the orientation of a nation’s education. Though the statement may has its merit in some fields, in most cases any simple conclusion to this question can be arbitrary and of no sense.
Admittedly, basic education, as the social standpoint, is essential to a nation. By providing all children with fundamental skills and knowledge, basic education helps ensure that our children grow up into reasonably informed, productive members of society. What’s more, young children education guarantees core values are impaired upon which the society depends to thrive, and even survive—values such as tolerance of others with different viewpoints, and respect for other.
Nevertheless, in terms of science, the pivotal element for a country’s successful development, university education becomes crucial and calls for a larger budget. Highly specialized knowledge in modern society makes it impossible to succeed in any professional field for students without experience of advanced education. After obtaining a specific of college degree together with certain knowledge level, the contribution of university graduates could in fact prove more potent than it seems. So when we are analyzing data and trying to find out the benefits of basic education by using productivity software, when we are appealing for more attention on fundamental education on the Internet, we shouldn’t ignore the fact that the scientific fruit we are enjoying must be attributed to superior education in universities.
In conclusion, the correctness of statement depends on the realm that is discussed. So the characteristics of the nation’s social current situation and its expected effect should be taken into account for a more rational decision. In the final analysis, the relationship between university and basic education is like that of a house and its foundation. We should pay attention to both of them as well as the proportion of each.