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[经验] 和trees一个月突击八月T [复制链接]

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发表于 2003-8-18 16:13:19 |只看该作者

我也写了这篇,不过跟你观点相反

可是现在机房不开门,明天贴吧!
感觉你的开头不好,题目问你哪个最重要,你就变成了哪个是来源,显然两个都是来源,应该强调的是importance,可是你似乎写了很多你prefer的,尤其总结的时候,是否有点偏题?
另外,拼写小错误不少,不知道你平时手写是否如此,比如I 变成T,absorbing变成aborbing,呵呵
不过,你们的语言都比我的好多了,汗!

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发表于 2003-8-18 16:56:24 |只看该作者
谢谢, mawerick,是因为打字太匆忙了,打错了,你的好几篇文章我都看的,我总觉得你的文章条理非常清晰,我也想不出能给你提什么意见,总之感觉很舒服
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发表于 2003-8-18 17:06:20 |只看该作者
我自己看了一遍,哈,是偏题了,还好不是考试,哈,谢谢
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发表于 2003-8-18 18:03:40 |只看该作者

Re: 终于喘了口气

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[B]听力从10个变到了4个
语法从5个变到了3个

怎么还是这么差 [/B]



我疯了。都好不知足。我只要能有一次这样。我就大玩一天!
汝不可因惰而随心所睡!汝不可移志而半途而废!汝不可因苦而哭天抹泪!汝不可求闲而叫苦喊累!汝不可因难而节节后退!汝不可因败而万念俱灰!坚持到底!

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发表于 2003-8-18 18:07:19 |只看该作者
哎。真正疯了的原因是。。。来。GC,我当笑话讲给你~老师今天留了一个1万字的论文下周1交,而且下周1有一门不好好看1周会死人的考试。。。哈哈哈,好好笑吧

大家复习的都不错,希望所有的人都能说“我肯定能行””小菜~“这样对别人也是个激励~
汝不可因惰而随心所睡!汝不可移志而半途而废!汝不可因苦而哭天抹泪!汝不可求闲而叫苦喊累!汝不可因难而节节后退!汝不可因败而万念俱灰!坚持到底!

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发表于 2003-8-18 18:25:39 |只看该作者
?怎么现在学校还考试啊??
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发表于 2003-8-18 18:31:21 |只看该作者
我打算周5好好准备一下这次考试
平常都没有看啊
该听一下听力了

Sex is better than jogging
you needn't special shoes.

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发表于 2003-8-18 18:51:30 |只看该作者
最初由 红蝎子 发布
[B]我打算周5好好准备一下这次考试
平常都没有看啊
该听一下听力了 [/B]



!!大牛,
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发表于 2003-8-18 21:13:33 |只看该作者
to gt:
还不都是SA。。。的功劳

to 蝎子
呀呀,一定要听哦。你也8月呀?不过蝎子小天使很棒的~加油呢!
汝不可因惰而随心所睡!汝不可移志而半途而废!汝不可因苦而哭天抹泪!汝不可求闲而叫苦喊累!汝不可因难而节节后退!汝不可因败而万念俱灰!坚持到底!

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发表于 2003-8-18 22:04:16 |只看该作者
我快被打击晕了,今天总共错了25个题目,我已经没有语言了。时好时坏的状态,让我简直不知所措,唉!!!!!!!!!!!
NND!变态ETS,发泄……
有很多时候,我觉得自己生活在很多假象里,外表热热闹闹,红红火火,其实里面一团糟。

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发表于 2003-8-18 22:12:42 |只看该作者
所有的努力不会白费的。鼓励楼上!
红眼袭人 闲来无事 拨琴弄舞

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发表于 2003-8-19 09:30:58 |只看该作者

我又来贴了!(呵呵,别笑我厚脸皮)

Should university students be required to attend classes? Or should going to classes be optional for them? Some people agree with the former, while others agree with the latter. If I should answer this question, I will choose the latter. The reasons are below.

First, allowing students to attend classes optionally makes study efficient. As a class consists of many students, uniform education would not be appropriate for everyone. But allowing university students go to classes optionally gives them the freedom to choose the most efficient and appropriate studying form for them. For example, I found some teacher’s lessons do not fit me, some are even boring, as we are not required to attend classes, I make my own plan to make my study more efficient. In the final exams I can also get high scores. But if we are required to attend classes, I will have to spend more time with less efficiency.

Second, allowing students to attend classes optionally can relieve the disadvantage of too much specialization. Most people have realized that too much specialization is a fault of current university education. If students are not required to attend classes, they can participate in various movements, they can study what they take interests in, they can do a lot of other things that are much meaningful for them. After all, not everything can be learned in classes, especially in the prescribed cirruculums, and master knowledge in various fields will do no harm to the youth.

Some people may argue that if the students are given the freedom to attend classes, many of them will play games other than study. But remember they are university students rather than primary or middle school students, they are responsible for their behavior. They know what they need, they know what they have to do. For example, in my university, although students are not required to attend classes, at least 80 percent of the students always attend classes. So we do not have to worry about this problem.

To sum up, I think university students should be given the freedom to attend classes optionally. For it is efficient, it will relieve the disadvantage of too much specialization, and worries are not necessary.

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发表于 2003-8-19 10:05:25 |只看该作者

又来,呵呵

Some people prefer to live in a small town, while others prefer to live in a big city. Small towns or big cities, which is better to live? If I were asked this question, my answer is definitely the latter, that is, big cities are better for people to live in. The reasons are below.

First, as I am fond of reading books, sometimes called “book worm”, big cities are more attractive for me. There are many large book stores in big cities. I like book stores, where I can find a variety of books and of almost any kind, where I can get the latest book immediately after they have been published. There are also large scale second-hand book markets in big cities, where I can find old books I have been longing for a long time. And, furthermore, large libraries hold millions of books located in big cities. Even some foreign books can be found there. But in small towns, there are not many book stores and libraries, and the number of books can be found there are much less compared to those of the big cities. For me, living in such a environment is rather boring.

Second, lives in big cities are fascinating and convenient. I can enjoy plenty of opportunities to experience various new things, new thoughts, strange people, various events and so on. Most big cities have efficient and convenient transportations, which can save us a lot of time and money when we want to go out. Meanwhile, lives in small towns are relatively ordinary, that is, with less inspiration and passion. And, because the transportation is not convenient enough, you have to spend a lot of time on the way if you want to go somewhere.

Some people may argue that small towns offer better natural environments, namely, fresh air, clean water, and green forests. But big cities can also offer good natural environment. For example, Changchun, a big city in northeast China, 37 percent of whose area is covered by forest and grass, is called “the city of forest”. Living in Changchun, people also have clean water, fresh air, and green forests.

So, in a nut shell, big cities are better than small towns to live in, for the large book stores and libraries, for the fascinating live and convenient transportation. I prefer to live in big cities.

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发表于 2003-8-19 10:30:56 |只看该作者

这个不是很满意,大家提点意见好么?

Who is the best teacher? The answer can be various: books and computers, friends and colleagues, teaches in schools, and so on. But if I were asked this question, my answer is the parents. I think parents are definitely the best teachers for the specific reasons below.

First, compared with computers and books, parents are intimate, which is a crucial attribute of good teachers. Sure, computers and books are informative, they contain large amount of knowledge and information, even far beyond any individual have. But they are not good teachers. Computers and books lack intimacy, which means learning form them is not interactive, it is only a one-way transmission. You can not tell them what you feel, what you have difficulties in, what you do not understand. Learning from computers and books can be rather insipid, especially after you have studied for a long time. Compared with them, parents are intimate, you can communicate with them, making learning lively and interesting. Thus parents are better teachers than computers and books.

Second, compared with friends and colleagues, parents have much more experience. Experience is precious and helpful, suggestions and guidance based on experience can help us avoid mistakes and troubles, and finish our tasks efficiently. Experience depends on the time one has lived largely. Since most of our friends and colleagues are of the same age as us, parents’ suggestion and guidance, based on much more experience, are thus much more valuable than our theirs. Don’t you think parents are better teachers than friends and colleagues?

Compared with teachers in schools, parents are more familiar with us, which means they can give us the most urgent and appropriate help and knowledge we need. Teachers in schools are in charge of a whole class, while parents only need to take care of their own children, thus parents are more helpful than teachers in schools.

Furthermore, compared with other teachers, only parents will surely teach us all they know, give us all they have, without any conservation. Isn’t it suggests that parents are better than them?

In a sum, I think parents are best teachers, for their intimacy, their experience, their familiarization with us, and their unselfishness.

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发表于 2003-8-19 11:16:14 |只看该作者

另外问个问题,大家给个意见

关于那个books or experience, which is the more important konwledge source的essay
我本来写了一篇长一点的,借鉴哈耶克哲学思想的东东,可是可能太复杂,太哲学化了?
我自己都没有把握,也许写托福作文不用这么认真,简单一点好吧!

trees,本来,我写中文很较真的,如果要我写中文比较两个东西那个更好,我肯定要首先定义"好"这个概念的,否则没法讨论.
你上次说maybe there are other reason causing the increasing,我就有不同看法,如果有其他的原因,那也说明在这样的circumastance下面,telephone and email是better的choice,总之还是better,不是么?
可是这样太较真可能不好吧?你觉得呢?

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