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占座 十分钟前刚看见此贴并入群+12.29+今天刚写一篇独立写作


Do you prefer live in a place or several places


We live in the world and need a lot of facilities such as
schools to accept knowledge, hospitals to get diseases treated, and houses
to live in. When given choices to pick up the above from one place
or different places, people may give different reasons based on individual
value systems. For me, staying in a same place is unique because it is particularly geared toward benefiting the following.

The first reason comes to mind is that staying in one place can be
convenient since you don't have to exert yourself too much
to familiar with the new environment. In the town or city that
we grown up, we almost know profoundly all the surroundings. In this way, it is easy for us to pick up school equipped with modern
facilities, stores of which the dishes are more delicious as well as
supermarket that always discount a lot and owning goods that are bloody cheap``` What happens above when we live in a same place and can't
know about it anymore.


Besides above, durability is of great a issue for me. Moving a lot indeed can
broaden my horizon, but also bring a lot of changes, which always company
with the sense of insecurity. A same place oppositely promise me an
insurance of the future. I can basically know how I'll look like after
five or ten years under certain as well as unchanged circumstance.
I don't have to worry about loosing my house or my job readily, either. The
security from living in one place ensure a delightful and peaceful daily life.

Another opinion matters is that family members can be taken care
of when they live together in a same place. Imagine the situation
that all the family members separated from eachother in different
places-- husbands and wives, parents and children, as well as cousins
and sisters. The consequences of moving a lot of individual is the
lose of love from our own family. We 'll suffer a lot from it. Since
the distance and time difference, family members can not accompany with
eachother when sick or emotional depression. After a long time, relationship
may fade.

From above, we can draw a conclusion that advantages like colorful lives may appear through moving a lot. But We human indeed need peaceful lives with the sense of security as well as the imitate relationship. So I firmly convinced that live in a same place is a brilliant choice.
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本帖最后由 一派 于 2011-12-30 01:24 编辑

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12.30 独立写作

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occupy a seat for independent task  12.30
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1月2日  独立   https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1324798-1-1.html
力求两个月二战飞跃

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本帖最后由 danteksj 于 2012-1-1 15:56 编辑

1月2 独立
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1月2日  独立   https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1324508&pid=1775635865&page=1&extra=
坚持就是胜利~!!!

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本帖最后由 lzlzy123321 于 2012-1-4 03:12 编辑

1月2 独立 占座

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PS: 昨天寄托抽风了吗??我在加州上不了。
什么让我一直努力至今?  神。

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1月2日,独立,(求好心人也帮我修改下第一次写的^_^)
https://bbs.gter.net/viewthre ... xtra=#pid1775636756
口语帖https://bbs.gter.net/forum.ph ... =1390223&extra=
听写贴[url=https://bbs.gter.net/forum.php?mod=viewthread&t

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1月3日,独立https://bbs.gter.net/viewthread.php?tid=1319163&page=1&extra=#pid1775591215
不问过去,不想将来。

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1月3日独立占座
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