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everyday41UID: 2885297

7月23日
6/19/2010
Do youagree with the following statement? If you need to discuss upsetting orcontroversial problems with others, using e-mail/text messaging is better thanusing telephone/voice-messaging.

This happens in our daily lives: If people hold different opinions upon a topic when they are talking, they are likely to insist on their points of view by offering specific examples and jusificiable reasons. But, some issues are not that easy to figure them out, and people may find it difficult to persuade others. Thus,conversations may develop from peaceful ones into bitter quarrels, and sometimes may end up unhappily for everyone.

Under such circumstances, written messages can be a better alternative for communication than direct conversations. It is obvious that people will pay more attention towhat they type or write than what they say, for they can think it through when they deliver their idea to others, instead of simply being driven by their implusion.
Take myself as an example, I have a good friend who are always interested in chatting with me over some issues. At first, we enjoy the fun of sharing distinct thoughts, but sometimes our opinions can be so different that we become angry at each other and even have a fight at times, which clearly does harm to our relationship. Later on, we are aware of the disadvantages and we deal with them by writing e-mailsto each other. Now, when our opinions diverge during our conversation, instead of simply yelling at each other, we choose to move on to another issue and when we get home,we think over the other one's opinions and write down our own thoughts in an e-mail and send it. Guess what? No more displeasure, and we have a more effective way of communication.

We cannot deny that telephone/voice messaging can draw people closer and keep intimate relationships in our daily lives, but when our problems are controversial and are possible to lead to unpleasant results, I think it is wise for us to choose written messages as the tool of communication.


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ilhrxUID: 2759939

done

羊小咩89UID: 2848665

改好了。。^_^
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