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发表于 2011-8-24 08:27:22 |显示全部楼层

Do printed books bring greater influence to people's lives than television? In my view, there are many books lying in the bookshelf covered with dust; while, many people stay in the front of televisions and enjoy their lives. The answer is obvious since television has already been in people’s vision. Therefore, I claim that printed books have less effect on the society.

Actually, printed books are formerly used and regarded as the most traditional way for people to record information and acquire knowledge. Though printed books still have an undeniable position in people's lives, its influence is far less significant than television considering the current development of television industry. （这段我觉得可以放到倒数第二段去）

One reason is that the interesting television programs are more popular and convenient for people to gain information. As we all know, TV is a complex system composed of numerous channels and various kinds of programs, such as economic, politic, military, art, technology. Just moving one finger and clicking the remote-control, you can get your favorite channel. Immersing in the favorite TV shows, nobody would ask why people always forget to pick up a book. Consequently, this popularity of television is great effect on people’s lives.

Another strong factor is that the dramatic television change people’s behaviors and habits easier than books in modern time. Being aware of it or not, individual’s behaviors are effected by television. For example, when people go to the super market, it is more likely for them to choose the products which are frequently advertised in television. In addition, as television provides people the opportunity to share the event or experiences, it plays an important role in communicating process with each other. So many buzzwords will be popular in a short time. While, printed books has less effect on people’s life.（以上两个例子都是阐述电视对人的影响大于书，而题目是论证电视和书对社会的影响哪个大。所以，也许换个例子，或者把对人的影响与对社会的影响之间联系起来，会好一点）

In conclusion, owing to the popularity of television and kinds of television programs, television industry provide more information and change our living styles, while printed books gradually lost its former role in disseminating knowledge and information.

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发表于 2011-8-24 11:19:30 |显示全部楼层

8月23日ML10.03.1
Books have more influence on society than television.

Do printed books bring greater influence to people's lives than television? In my view, there are many books lying in the bookshelf covered with dust; while, many people stay in the front of televisions and enjoy their lives. The answer is obvious since television has already been in people’s vision. （进入人们视线?）Therefore, I claim that printed books have less effect on the society.

Actually, printed books are formerly used and regarded as the most traditional way for people to record information and acquire knowledge. Though printed books still have an undeniable position in people's lives, its influence is far less significant than television considering the current development of television industry. 这段写得好，既点到books的好处，也表明自己的观点！

One reason is that the interesting television programs are more popular and convenient for people to gain information. As we all know, TV is a complex system composed of numerous channels and various kinds of programs, such as economic, politic, military, art, technology. Just moving one finger and clicking the remote-control, you can get your favorite channel. Immersing in the favorite TV shows, nobody would ask why people always forget to pick up a book. Consequently, this popularity of television is great effect on people’s lives.

Another strong factor is that the dramatic television change people’s behaviors and habits easier than books in modern time. Being aware of it or not, individual’s behaviors are effected by television. For example, when people go to the super market, it is more likely for them to choose the products which are frequently advertised in television. In addition, as television provides people the opportunity to share the event or experiences, it plays an important role in communicating process with each other. So many buzzwords will be popular in a short time. While, printed books has less effect on people’s life.

In conclusion, owing to the popularity of television and kinds of television programs, television industry provide more information and change our living styles, while printed books gradually lost its former role in disseminating knowledge and information.
很好的文章，找不到毛病，破题立意，段落分析都很好！

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