求好心人给我改下作文

rubyhobbyUID: 3109847

Some people prefer to spend most of their time alone. Others like to be with friends most of time. Do you prefer to spend your time alone or with friends? Use specific reasons to support your answer.


Here, I would like to give the friend a definition according to my own experiences and understanding. Friends are those people who are obliging to offer help without reserve when you are in trouble, accompany you to pass through the hardship regardless of emergent events to them, divide happiness to give you a part. Based on this, friends are not followers. Therefore, staying with your friends most of your time is not possible and necessary.
To begin with, we are all different from anyone just as there are not two leaves which have the same shape exactly. Consequently, this determines that everyone has his own schedule and various things to tackle with. Take my daily life for example. Although my friend has take the same classes and lives in the same dormitary with me, we don’t get up at the same time and have breakfast together. For me, I prefer to do some reading in the library before breakfast. However, going for breadfast directly is my friend’s habit. As a result, the situation makes a decision for me not to comply with my friend’habits or this will disrupt my own schedule and has detrimental effect on my study.
What’s more, it is staying alone most of time that renders me accessible to indepent thinking about problems and concentration on research in mechanical engineering. As for me, for instance, walking alone in the campus, I can consider what I plan to pursue in my life and how I can obtain it by efforts. It is during this time that I have made my mind to persist my PHD study aboard. Maybe I have to give up something valuable, yet, I acclaim to never regret about this resolution. By contrast, with friends, we always chat together about some interesting phenomenon and information that is meaningless and not beneficial when the precious time has passes away.
Though I argue to spend time alone most of time, it doesn’t mean that we should go to the extreme of never staying with friends. Getting along with friends sometimes is also significant .
In sum, how to spend most of time depends on different people on different situations. We can’t conclude absolutely that which one outweights the other. Nevertheless, I maintain that I would like and will continue to spend most of my time alone.




对自己的作文超级没信心，故上传一篇，望各位能指点下，呵呵，先谢谢啦！

kaooUID: 3145702

Here, I would like to give the friend a definition according to my own experiences and understanding. Friends are those people who are obliging to offer help without reserve when you are in trouble, accompany you to pass through the hardship regardless of emergent events to them, divide happiness to give you a part. Based on this, friends are not followers. Therefore, staying with your friends most of your time is not possible and necessary.的朋友是什么做出解释，很好
To begin with, we are all different from anyone just as there are not two leaves which have the same shape exactly. Consequently, this determines that everyone has his own schedule and various things to tackle with. Take my daily life for example. Although my friend has take the same classes and lives in the same dormitary with me, we don’t get up at the same time and have breakfast together. For me, I prefer to do some reading in the library before breakfast. However, going for breadfast directly is my friend’s habit. As a result, the situation makes a decision for me not to comply with my friend’habits or this will disrupt my own schedule and has detrimental effect on my study.先用自己的例子解释
What’s more, it is staying alone most of time that renders me accessible to indepent thinking about problems and concentration on research in mechanical engineering. As for me, for instance, walking alone in the campus, I can consider what I plan to pursue in my life and how I can obtain it by efforts. It is during this time that I have made my mind to persist my PHD study aboard. Maybe I have to give up something valuable, yet, I acclaim to never regret about this resolution. By contrast, with friends, we always chat together about some interesting phenomenon and information that is meaningless and not beneficial when the precious time has passes away.用自己的例子说明要一个人思考跟朋友的无重要谈论
Though I argue to spend time alone most of time, it doesn’t mean that we should go to the extreme of never staying with friends. Getting along with friends sometimes is also significant .
In sum, how to spend most of time depends on different people on different situations. We can’t conclude absolutely that which one outweights the other. Nevertheless, I maintain that I would like and will continue to spend most of my time alone. 用自己的经历作为例子说明不同性格人有不同朋友需要。
很好完全答了题目的要求。
希望能你能对我的作文评价一下，到此为止还没有人对我评一下

rubyhobbyUID: 3109847

谢谢了，我发错了版块……能不能给个你的作文的链接！

咖啡盐UID: 2973669

汗....这是托福作文吧...我帮你移过去吧