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发表于 2011-8-13 17:53:14 |只看该作者 |倒序浏览

本帖最后由 callmec 于 2011-8-15 23:07 编辑

8.13 独立写作

额第一次写，囧了

Do you agree or disagree: Improving school is the most important factor for developing of a country.

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沙发

发表于 2011-8-13 22:12:06 |只看该作者

you are showing a good management of english language,
most words are used in a appropriate way.
but on the earth,the people who attend TOFEL should write a kind of article which brings out the author's opinion clearly.
obviously,i dont see yours clearly in this position.
remember all the stuff that you exemplify are in order to support your position.
if they arent, plz dump them whether they are good-looking or not.

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板凳

发表于 2011-8-13 22:40:15 |只看该作者

额原来作文不能有中立立场……好吧我刚知道……囧

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地板

发表于 2011-8-14 12:54:37 |只看该作者

你好!谢谢你给我提的意见!不过，咱们不是一组的!是横排为一组互改!
刚才拜读了你的文章，写得确实很好，呵呵!
我觉得作者表达的是反对立场而不是中立。

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发表于 2011-8-15 19:26:49 |只看该作者

8.13 改
楼主把帖子弄在word里吧，这里google能直接搜到

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本帖最后由 callmec 于 2011-8-15 23:44 编辑

8.15习作Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:
The effective leader tries to make others feel they have been part of a decision.

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