siguakiss的作文贴，为嘛没人看？是不是写的太烂了

siguakissUID: 3158498

Which one is more essential, speaking or writing? That is a good question. It is hard for me to convince any people that which one is more important. It depends on the people’s standard or which skill is more important in their mind.
No matter whom you are or what your profession is, it is hard to avoid that we may need to writing. Writing is now becoming one of the most important skills in our daily lives. For example, if you want to apply a small but beautiful university，and the school is famous for her high quality of education. So you must write an essay to impart the school officer who you are, what you hope to study in the school, why you want to apply this university and even how nice you are. It is no doubt that the school will accept you as their freshman this year if you hand in a perfect essay.
On the other hand, speaking also has a magical use in our work. Try to imagine, when you are preparing for an international corporation's interview. And the job is nearly created for you. It is easy to assume that you will desire earning this job as well as working for this international corporation. However, you can not help but face a drastic competition with some excellent people. What will help you win this competition? It must be your wonderful Speaking skill. To draw the interviewer's attention deeply the most useful and convenient method is that apply your perfect speaking skill. After a series of amazing speaking, no one can ignore your presence and you will finally get this ideal job. In addition, good speaking skill will be helpful in our daily life either. Just like some friends around me, there always one or two of them do well communication. Result from their good speaking skill they are always treated as the brilliant star any time as well as any situation.
All in all, people who are weak in writing may think writing is more essential but others do not think so. The same as a coin have two sides. Someone likes this side while the other people prefer another side. If you ask me which side is more important？ I do not know either.

prqeabcdUID: 2636608

1.essential一般不用比较级
2.背景介绍不充分, speaking or writing? 应用在哪个方面?
3.托福作文永远不要选折中观点
4.很多低级语法错误(whom you are, need to writing)
5.essay是你现在写的...叫议论文....给学校写申请的叫statement

题目问你你觉得哪个更重要, 你的答案是你不知道....

这样的文章大概能拿到18-20分

siguakissUID: 3158498

2# prqeabcd 哎，知道自己水平很一般，就是不知道怎么提高......

siguakissUID: 3158498

Do you think advertising improves our life?
There is no denying the fact that for the time being a great deal of advertising, especially the advertising one which satisfies our daily needs, is more likely to be welcomed. Although some people may disagree with my opinion while advertising has improved our life indeed.
First of all, some people who hold the attitude about advertising does not benefit our life believes that advertising always attempt to cheat customers. As they sometimes may buy the goods does not as useful or tasteful as the advertiser claimed. And therefore they draw a conclusion that advertising does not deserve our trust. There may be one or two defects about advertising, however, in my view, the mainly function of advertising could lead us to make our life better.
Advertising helps us gain more information about the price of goods. For example, now I am living in a small but warm house in Cincinnati Ohio Unite states and I read the fresh advertising which is sent by the supermarket everyday due to I have no a wealth of money to pay for the high price of goods here. This advertising instructs me which goods is cutting down its price and when I should set out to have a shopping to make sure I can buy the most fresh fruits and vegetables. Since I have this advertising my life quality has turned better, moreover, my live fee also is decreased.
Another benefit is base on the fact that no matter what we demand,  I think it easy for us to find the fresh information about our need. If, for example, you are intending to buy a new car, nevertheless, you have no idea about which car is fitted on you, what brand adapts you or which price standard is more ideal. According to the advertising you will know all about this——what style this year people more prefer, what price standard the expert think is more valuable and even which new function or technology the car has applied. With the information accumulates, you must be finding the best one in your mind and buy it decisively.
All in all, advertising assist us to improve our life. It not only saves your money, but gives you first hand information. Why not treating advertising as a kind of resource? Better using, better life.
虽然写的很烂，希望有人能指点，一天一篇- -

jyr08UID: 2686520

建议不要全文都是用长句，托福作文毕竟不是GRE，简短些的句子更有助于清楚地表达你的意思。尤其是开头，特别绕，貌似还有语法错误。

siguakissUID: 3158498

5# jyr08
又见好人，谢谢指点

siguakissUID: 3158498

There is no denying the fact that for the time being, a great deal of source of information comes into our life and we could hardly know who to believe or whose words are true. There are too many reasons for me to respond me opinion and I will select some of them to share with you.
Although many people believe that: with a long study and experience, we will have enough ability to make sure whether the person's words are true or not. In addition, we will realize the fact more distinctly by using tools such as internet or media. Nevertheless, there are a large number of things people even export may not have sufficient ability to explain clearly, and we will be more puzzled by different kind of standpoint.
Just like ghost, what do you think you ghost? Some people claimed that they had met ghost in the past few years. What's more, some supporters said they could even talk with ghost. Contrary with this view, other people argue that these people who claim ghost really exists are cheating people. In the end, none of them can provide any powerful evidence to convince people their theory is true..
Another reason is base on the fact that the more sources of information bring more possible. For instance, Laden( I am not sure if I type the right name) who planed the 9.11 Terrorist Attack had disappeared from people's view from a few years. In the past years a lot of organizations claimed that they had killed Laden and required American government send the reward to them as quickly as possible. But there is no doubt that Laden still lived till American military killed him.
Just like a Chinese old saying goes: if there is no picture-like evidence, there may be no truth. Moreover, with the developing of photoshop technology, ghost has appeared in the photos for many times and we can find many the video which recorded the Laden's dead. Nowadays, I am afraid it difficult for us to explore the truth, because truth has already been hided by a wealth of story.
为嘛没人指点啊，大家都很忙么- -