issue29 Public figures

song123456UID: 133578

issue 29 Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy.

The private lives of famous public figures always attract much attention from the public and the mass media. In fact, it is really hard to separate their private lives completely from their public affairs. So as the speaker asserts, when public figures decide to seek a public role, they have no reason to hope to keep all their privacy from the public.

First of all, it is by notices of the public people that public figures make a name for themselves. Therefore, people's interests in their own lives are important for them to gain their reputation and to success. The more attention is paid to them, the more affairs about them are reported, in turn, the better are they known. For example, David Beckham, one of the most famous football players, have become fairly well known because of his good skills in football game but at least equally because of his private life, especially his beautiful and famous wife. It is also very common to see advertisement about some candidate that he never smokes and always help others to in politics present a healthy and caring image. So for the public figures, private affairs are also a indivisible part of his career.

However, sometimes this divulgence of personal life will bring negative effects and even disaster to them. It is easy to understand that people are not willing to vote for an politician who lives a voluptuary life. An well known disaster is the death of Diana in a traffic incident, the famous princess of England, is believed to be relevant to the some correspondents following her to discover her private life.

Furthermore, personal lives, in turn, can sway the way of life of their adherents because many people would like to imitate behaviors of their idols. For instance, during 2002 FIFA Worldcup, after the football star Ronaldo got a new hairstyle, his numerous fans soon got them a same hairstyle. And also many famous actors and sport stars have become ambassador of various charity funds to appeal people to care for those who need our help.

No matter what is the result, positive or negative, it is inevitable for a public figure to lose some of his or her privacy. Considering the great role public figures play in our society and great effects on lifestyles of masses, we should require them to control their behaviors and lead a more healthier way of life among the public for it is their responsibility to be promising paragons before their adherents.

In sum, since there is no escape that people are interested in private lives of public figures, it is of no use for them to complain. What they should do is to regiment their lives on the behalf of both themselves and the public.

harrison_baiUID: 142136

我最近也刚写完同样题目，不妨帮你看看

文章基本还算通顺，例子也比较丰富，但这些例子在表达上感觉不是特别有说服力，你可以把例子中你主要要论证的在写清楚一些。

其次第三段 第二句话跟后一句话没什么太大联系，头一句说政治家的品行问题，后一句说公众人物的隐私问题，我觉得这属于两个方面。

附上我的一篇，欢迎指教

Public figures have never received so more attention from mass media as today. A public figure is always known to people though the media as TV, newspaper or broadcast for the most extraordinary thing he/she has ever done, but after a period of time, people are willing to get to know all his life not merely public life but even private life. Therefore for public figures seek public role, they should accept the fact that they will lose at least some of their privacy.

First it is really necessary to report the total life of the public figures including both public life and private life for the need of people, they cannot separate from each other. As a public figure is always recognized through his special achievements, but despite these admirable achievements, what is mostly important thing for us curious about is how he/she achieved it why he/she chose this not other occupations and stuck to it firmly to the end. The answers for these questions can be obtained from his/her belief, way of life, hobbies and what he/she has experienced which are all related to his/her private life. From these two aspects of life we can understand that he/she is just a truely commonplace but with some extraordinary nature and special experience, so private life can be regard as another way to understand the public figures that have relationship with the public life.

Secondly, to some extent, the more attention a public figure private life gains, the more famous he/she will be. It is not means a public figure should lose all his/her private life to all the people for the goal of popularity, which is unfair to he/she and impossible, but meets the need of a small number of vulgar men. It is truth that from the news of their public life, it will give us a more kind and gentle profile which will be necessary to understand and adore them.

Of course, as a popular star, to be famous is not always equal to in high repute, a public figure's reputation sometime is caused by some bad news rather than good news. It is human nature that he/her is an ordinary person who makes mistaken as the others, despite of this a large amount of bad reports about he/her is rumor which was fabricated basing on some unrelated facts. This news damage his/her reputation disturb his/her life, make he/she feels displacement mentally. So they should to keep their privacy adequately for himself/herself. More or less they have to sacrifice part of their privacy, but when their rights are violated, legal tools should be employed to protect it. On the other hand, we should have a positive psychology concentrating more about their public life, not merely their love affairs, scandal or so on.

In all, public figures are not only live in screens or newspaper, they have common sensations as we and the individual rights the laws granted, we and our media should keep a balanced between public life and private life when talking with them, which is benefit for all of us.

blake_wangUID: 9871

harrison_bai's argument:
1, a well-presented argument.
2, your conclusion is inconsitent with your former viewpoints supported by examples.

ken0405UID: 124994

issue 29 Public figures such as actors, politicians, and athletes should expect people to be interested in their private lives. When they seek a public role, they should expect that they will lose at least some of their privacy.

The private lives of famous public figures always attract much attention from the public and the mass media. In fact, it is really hard to separate their private lives completely from their public affairs. So as the speaker asserts, when public figures decide to seek a public role, they have no reason to hope to keep all their privacy from the public.简单明了，好！

First of all, it is by notices of the public people that public figures make a name for themselves. Therefore, people's interests in their own lives are important for them to gain their reputation and to success.（有逻辑关系吗，引起人们注意就要牺牲个人生活？） The more attention is paid to them, the more affairs about them are reported, in turn, the better are they known. For example, David Beckham,（diana也是一个好例子） one of the most famous football players, have become fairly well known because of his good skills in football game but at least equally because of his private life, especially his beautiful and famous wife. It is also very common to see advertisement about some candidate that he never smokes and always help others to in politics present a healthy and caring image. So for the public figures, private affairs are also a indivisible part of his career.分析的不错，就是前面改进一下会好点的。

However, sometimes this divulgence of personal life will bring negative effects and even disaster to them. It is easy to understand that people are not willing to vote for an politician who lives a voluptuary life. An well known disaster is the death of Diana in a traffic incident, the famous princess of England, is believed to be relevant to the some correspondents following her to discover her private life.（好，但是是不是单薄了点？）

Furthermore, personal lives, in turn, can sway the way of life of their adherents because many people would like to imitate behaviors of their idols. For instance, during 2002 FIFA Worldcup, after the football star Ronaldo got a new hairstyle, his numerous fans soon got them a same hairstyle. And also many famous actors and sport stars have become ambassador of various charity funds to appeal people to care for those who need our help.（不错，例子）

No matter what is the result, positive or negative, it is inevitable for a public figure to lose some of his or her privacy. Considering the great role public figures play in our society and great effects on lifestyles of masses, we should require them to control their behaviors and lead a more healthier way of life among the public for it is their responsibility to be promising paragons before their adherents.9最后的这段有点中国人的思维哟，解决办法，不好，它只是叫你分析原因啊）

In sum, since there is no escape that people are interested in private lives of public figures（我觉得这是一个好分析点，了解别人的秘密是human nature嘛，但你没有分析原因，只说了结果）, it is of no use for them to complain. What they should do is to regiment their lives on the behalf of both themselves and the public.
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IKAOUID: 136036

第2段不错，不过相比起来后面2段分析略显单薄，总感觉是一笔带过的感觉，ken0405说的对，倒数第2段没有必要

song123456UID: 133578

thanks a lot, 我做了一些改动
The private lives of famous public figures always attract much attention from the public and the mass media. In fact, it is really hard to separate their private lives completely from their public affairs. So as the speaker asserts, when public figures decide to seek a public role, they have no reason to hope to keep all their privacy from the public.简单明了，好！

First of all, it is by notices of the public people that public figures make a name for themselves. Therefore, people's interests in their own lives are important for them to gain their reputation and to success.(改为attention to their private lives from the populace can help public figures gain their rreputation and fulfill success because, after all, it is by notices of public people that public figrues make a name for themselves)（有逻辑关系吗，引起人们注意就要牺牲个人生活？） The more attention is paid to them, the more affairs about them are reported, in turn, the better are they known. For example, David Beckham,（diana也是一个好例子） one of the most famous football players, have become fairly well known because of his good skills in football game but at least equally because of his private life, especially his beautiful and famous wife. It is also very common to see advertisement about some candidate that he never smokes and always help others to in politics present a healthy and caring image. So for the public figures, private affairs are also a indivisible part of his career.分析的不错，就是前面改进一下会好点的。

However, sometimes this divulgence of personal life will bring negative effects and even disaster to them. A sorrowful example is the disaster of death of Diana in a traffic incident, the famous princess of England, which is believed to be relevant to the some correspondents following her in order to discover her private life. in the area of politics, it is easy to understand that people are not willing to vote for an politician whose life is considered to be a voluptuary life. (all these indicate that public reputation is a double-edged sword for public figures).（好，但是是不是单薄了点？）

Furthermore, personal lives, in turn, can sway the way of life of their adherents because many people would like to imitate behaviors of their idols. For instance, during 2002 FIFA Worldcup, after the football star Ronaldo got a new hairstyle, his numerous fans soon got them a same hairstyle. And also many famous actors and sport stars have become ambassador of various charity funds to appeal people to care for those who need our help. (accidentally or purposefully, public figures are putting strong effects on the masses by their own private behavior and way of life.)（不错，例子）

In sum, since there is no escape that people are interested in private lives of public figures due to the curiosity of people（我觉得这是一个好分析点，了解别人的秘密是human nature嘛，但你没有分析原因，只说了结果）, it is of no use for them to complain. What they should do is to regiment their lives on the behalf of both themselves and the public.

song123456UID: 133578

不好意思，我实在很菜，你的思维深度要比我强多了
Public figures have never received so more attention from mass media as today. A public figure is always known to people though the media as TV, newspaper or broadcast for the most extraordinary thing he/she has ever done, but after a period of time, people are willing to get to know all his life not merely public life but even private life. Therefore for public figures seek public role, they should accept the fact that they will lose at least some of their privacy.

First it is really necessary to report the total life of the public figures including both public life and private life for the need of people, they cannot separate from each other. As a public figure is always recognized through his special achievements, but despite these admirable achievements, what is mostly important thing for us curious about is how he/she achieved it why he/she chose this not other occupations and stuck to it firmly to the end. The answers for these questions can be obtained from his/her belief, way of life, hobbies and what he/she has experienced which are all related to his/her private life. From these two aspects of life we can understand that he/she is just a truely commonplace but with some extraordinary nature and special experience, so private life can be regard as another way to understand the public figures that have relationship with the public life.

Secondly, to some extent, the more attention a public figure private life gains, the more famous he/she will be. It is not means a public figure should lose all his/her private life to all the people for the goal of popularity, which is unfair to he/she and impossible, but meets the need of a small number of vulgar men. It is truth that from the news of their public life, it will give us a more kind and gentle profile which will be necessary to understand and adore them.（这一段我总觉得有点模糊，是承上一段写的，表示to be well known,  但这里的让步是否恰当？）

Of course, as a popular star, to be famous is not always equal to in high repute, a public figure's reputation sometime is caused by some bad news rather than good news. It is human nature that he/her is an ordinary person who makes mistaken as the others, despite of this a large amount of bad reports about he/her is rumor which was fabricated basing on some unrelated facts. This news damage his/her reputation disturb his/her life, make he/she feels displacement mentally. So they should to keep their privacy adequately for himself/herself. More or less they have to sacrifice part of their privacy, but when their rights are violated, legal tools should be employed to protect it. On the other hand, we should have a positive psychology concentrating more about their public life, not merely their love affairs, scandal or so on.

In all, public figures are not only live in screens or newspaper, they have common sensations as we and the individual rights the laws granted, we and our media should keep a balanced between public life and private life when talking with them, which is benefit for all of us.（这篇文章好像不是要达到一个balance）

GcanadaUID: 118286

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