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发表于 2011-10-18 16:54:18 |只看该作者
我发现你17号好像贴错题目了?

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发表于 2011-10-18 18:53:22 |只看该作者
Teenagers' lives are different from their parents. With fast developing of technology, teenagers can do lots of things than past. Does it mean they are more independent than their parents? In my opinion, this question should be viewed from different aspects to give a conclusion.
It is undeniable that technology gives teenagers more convenience than before. With the Internet, teenagers can learn variety of knowledge by themselves. By contrast, in the past, the knowledge which concerned with classes mainly came from their teachers and there were still a large amount of knowledge which needed to ask their parents to get the answer. For instance, when teenagers wanted to travel to a new city to have a vacation, they had to consult their parents about the route and the hotel information in the past. But now, this information can be easily found on the Internet. They will get accurate information about which bus or train should they take, which hotel is cheap and comfortable to live and so on. So they can begin traveling all by themselves. From this point, I believe, teenagers are more independent.
Though I have mentioned so many(没有SO MANY啊) benefits that technology leads to teenagers independent than their parents, it doesn't mean that teenagers nowadays are independent in every aspect(上文就论证了一点,这么说不合适吧). Comparing to the past, we can see people are richer. It means teenagers today do not need to earn money to support themselves. They depend on their family’s wealth. Using travel as an example(表达方式有问题,这和后半句不能放在一个句子里), they do not need to collect money from their jobs for years to have a travel. They just ask their parents to pay for the travel. The lacking of job experience may result in later contact with society. The society experience is very important for their work. Because of lacking it, they have to turn to their parent for help. In this aspect which includes money and experience of society, I think teenagers are more depend on their parents than before.
In summary, modern society with high developed technology gives teenagers independence on getting knowledge and information, however, parents who are richer than before also make teenagers depend on them.
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发表于 2011-10-18 23:31:22 |只看该作者
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明天考,加油!!!

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