<Daily writing 作文特训小组>——qqldd(10.20考)的作文贴，新加入

qqlddUID: 2594915

不知道 就这么加入有没有问题。。。

10.13为什么我觉得好难写。。。不计时也没写好。。。
10.14 超了5min。。
TPO11想撞死，看原文也不知道怎么写。。好像每个反驳点就一点似的

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10月5日 20100925NADo you think that young people in today are less dependent on their parentsthan in the past

Things are changing in recent years. Youpeople's life is so different comparing to their parents. With more and more convenienceto access more information, young people more independent than their parents.However, parents are richer than past, they can support young people in manyaspects. From this point of view, young people are more dependent on theirparents.

Young people are independent today becausethey can know lots of things by themselves without parents' help. For example,with Internet and GPS, teenagers can travel to anywhere independent. In thepast, teenagers had to get help from their parents. Because they know nothingabout the new city. They don't know how to get there and where can they accommodatethere. So they need to get advices from their parents. But now, they can knowwhich train to take, where they can buy a ticket and how much money they needin a trip. They can also book a hotel by the Internet. With GPS, they willnever get lost in a new city. But in the past, they have to ask their parentsfirst and then explore by themselves.

However, in some aspects, young people arenot that independent. In the past, teenagers' parents do not have so muchmoney. Parents can not support them. I take travel as an example. When they want to travel, they have to make money bythemselves. They may work in local or on the way they travel to. Now teenagersare very fortune. They can get all the money they need from their parents. Suchas money of ticket, hotel and so on. They have less chance to make money bythemselves which is very important for them to be independent.

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10 月6日 20100821NA
Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? There is never a reason for people to be rude (impolite) to another person. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

When people disagree with others or there are some misunderstandings between those two people, they may be rude to each other. However, I don't think it's a good behavior. I believe that every problem can be solved. To be impolite to others is irrational.

If a person is rude, he cannot solve the problem easily. Instead, the problem will become more and more serious. Imagine that when a person talk to you very loud or use some dirty words, you will not talk to him patiently. You will turn back and don't meet this person again. For instance, Last summer, I dated with my girlfriend. However, she was late for nearly a hour. I was very angry. I didn't ask her about the reason. I shouted at her and we quarreled. After that, we didn't call each other and didn't meet for a week. One day, I knew that she had a meeting before we dated and the meeting didn't end on time. I knew I misunderstand her. If I did not shout at her and would listen to her, all this would not happen.

What's more, even if it is the other people's fault, we shouldn't be rude to him. Everyone don't like attitude like rude. This will not help others to correct his fault. For example, in my high school, one of my classmates broke up one glass of a window. The monitor was very angry. He said to my classmate unfriendly: fix the window or go away. My classmate thought that although it was his fault, he shouldn't be treated as this. So he didn't go to class for several days. After he back to class, he never talk to my monitor again. What if the monitor talked to my classmate politely, the incident will be solved and their friendship will not break.

In summary, to be polite is very important in any situation. It will help us eliminate fault and misunderstanding.

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10月7日 20100320NA Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? Since most people can solve their problems by themselves or with the help from their families, the help from government is often not necessary. Use specific reasons to support your answer.

Nowadays, daily life is simpler and easier than before. When citizens want to travel, they just search the route and hotel information on the Internet. With the convenience access to Information, they can learn how to fix their car, how to exercise their body to be healthier. However, the government's power cannot be ignored also. I think, althought people's ability increase, the help from government is also necessary.

The help of government is all around us. The road is constructed by government. It connects city to city, country to country. Though we can travel anywhere by ourselves, don't forget every road, every bridge and every oil station is built by government. Also, with the help of government, laws are created and polices help to execute laws. If someone steals your money, you have to get help by police to deal with this accident. What's more, although you know how to exercise your body, you have to go to the park which is also built by government. The government supplies all the things you need in your daily life.

Government is built to solve the problem of a group people, not individual. Everyday, a lot of people travel from America to French by air. Without government's help, taking plane is just a dream. More importantly, diseases like flu and AIDS are eliminated mainly by government. It supplies a large mount of money to research institutes and hospitals. Government makes contributions to enhance quality of everyone's life. Individuals cannot solve these problem by themselves.

With the development of society, the international communication is more and more frequency. Government’s power emerges. Government can help you going to another country if their government has a good relationship with yours. Otherwise, you may have difficulty. When you travel to another country, your security is ensured by your government.

In summary, government is important to everyone in modern society. Although we can sovle many problems by ourselves, government help is necessary too.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statements? There is never a reason for people to be rude (impolite) to another person. Use specific reasons to support your answer.


When people disagree with others or there are some misunderstandings between those two people, they may be rude to each other. However, I don't think it's a good behavior. I believe that every problem can be solved. To be impolite to others is irrational. 0 s) l3 ?% z1 h3 L- N& s

If a person is rude, he cannot solve （the ）problem easily. Instead, the problem will become more and more serious. Imagine that when a person talk to you very loud or use some dirty words, you will not be able to talk to him patiently. You may will turn back and (wont' be willing to ) don't meet this person again. For instance, Last summer, I dated with my girlfriend. However, she was late for nearly a hour. I was very angry. I didn't ask her about the reason. I shouted at her and we quarreled. After that, we didn't call each other and didn't meet for a week. One day, I knew that she had a meeting before we dated and the meeting didn't end on time. I knew I misunderstand her. If I did not shout at her and would listen (listened ) to her, all this would not happen.2

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What's more, even if it is (the ) other people's fault, we shouldn't be rude to him. Everyone don't like attitude like rude (being treated in rude attitude). This will not help others to correct his fault. For example, in my high school, one of my classmates broke up one glass of a window. The monitor was very angry. He said to my classmate unfriendly: fix the window or go away. My classmate thought that although it was his fault, he shouldn't be treated as this. So he didn't go to class for several days. After he back to class, he never talk to my monitor again. What if the monitor talked to my classmate politely, the incident will be solved and their friendship will not break.& z, c' H; a3 r* s3 m7 u5 u8 `' F3 t

In summary, to be polite is very important in any situation. It will help us eliminate fault and misunderstanding.

加油~~~

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我们昨天是一个小组的，我的木有时间写了。。。不好意思 你的我会尽快批改然后上传的

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10月8日 20100312NA Agree or disagree? If children want to do well in school, parents should limit the hours of watching TV programs or movies

Children's lives in modern society are more colorful than before. A century before, there are no televisions, no films and no Internet. A child will play outside or study in class or in home at that time. But now, everything becomes different. After class, children have a lot of choice to spend their time. They may stay at not study but watch TV and movies all the day. I think this is bad for their performance in school.

When a child spends too much time on movie, they will spend less time on their study. Use my personal experience as an example. When I was in high school, there is a very attractive TV program on 10 p.m. When I back home, I will finish my homework as quick as I can in order to save time for TV. The program usually ends in late mid-night. So I have less time to sleep. And the next day, I feel asleep all the day. What's more, because of I use less time on my homework, there are numbers of errors on my homework. Finally, I get only C on my final examination. My parents notice this. The next term, I am limited to watch TV. My performance gets higher again.

The movie also has some other bad aspects on study. If children addict to movie, they will discuss with each other all the time. They discuss popular stars. They will buy poster and magazines about the stars and read them on class. All their time are surrounded with the topic of stars. What's more, they will think about the plot of the movie on their class. This is hard to notice by the teacher. The teacher only finds that the child's mind is beyond the class but not know reason. When they study in class, they may draw the person on movie. All in all, the children will be distracted by the movie.

In summary, it is good for their study if parents put some limits on children of watching TV or movie. They will know that movie is not the main part of their life and focus more on their study.

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6# yuanruicong 了解没事~写好再回这贴也可以~

糖果cathyUID: 3054739

我马上帮你改昨天那篇哈 今天比较忙 没上线

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继续加油哈~

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jackieydanUID: 3182030

你好，你1011的獨立我已改好。。。
期待著你的回批，希望我們共同進步哦！https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1309557-1-1.html

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修改好了 很好

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虽然不是同组的，但帮你改了，就顺便传给你了，呵呵

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上传不了附件,删除的部分是蓝色粗体表示的


10月12日 20100522NA Do youagree or disagree with the following statement? Working at home using computersor telephones is better than working in the office.


The development of technology is at a greatsurprising speed. Comparing to twenty years before, people had to come to theoffice to finish their jobs(这里好像没有比较,所以可以直接说Twenty years ago). However, today's jobs are mainly depending(depend) on computers andtelephones. Does that mean we can work at home instead of in the office? Ithink the answer is no.(个人感觉,这里的问题和回答有点偏题)

Some people may think that working at homewill save a lot of time which spends on in bus. However, working at homemay waste more time. Office is the place for working. People willconcentrate on their jobs without any disturbances. If you working at home, youmay want to eat something, read some magazines and play computer games. Butthings are different when you in office. Workmates in office actually make a regulation regulations on each other. Bydoing things which unrelated with thework, you may worry about others' opinionson you. For instance, in my own experience, if I do not go to my lab, I willwaste all day in my dormitory playing with classmates or reading novels.
Even if you can concentrate yourself onworking at home, the inconvenience of Internet and telephone is also a problemthat makes you inefficient. Tasks are probably very complex which everyone onlydoes part of it them. Thus, people in differentpart of the a task need to communicate. It is veryefficient to talk to your workmates face by to
face. On the contrast(On the contrary),by Internet or telephones, problems may not
be that easy todescribe so that you will pay much more time on solving a problem. Use my ownexperience as an example. As I major in software engineering, I often solvesoftware problems for others. However, software problems are very hard toidentify. It may occur in my computer but not in others. Though Internet isoften used to solve problems, it does not that help.(这两句话有点没看懂) The most convenienceway to solve the problem is that I come to problematic computer and solve it by hand.
In summary, though computers and telephoneshelpsus a lot in our jobs. It is cannot replace the conventional way that wework in office for high efficiency.(high efficiency 这个搭配有点奇怪)
建议你写作文的时候能够用上一些连接词来串联你的论点,最简单的就是first,second这些了,可以清楚表明你的论点.用多了就会形成自己的一套连接词了.可以加强一下词汇,这篇文章中大部分都还是比较简单的词汇.