JCF作文贴（独立+综合）

jcf2008UID: 2681015

TPO 7
The reading concludes that the US wood companies will not choose the ecocertified label. The reading demonstrate the announcement from the following three points, the attitudes the Americans have towards the advertisement, the price to have ecocertified label and the domestic consumers. However, even though the author concedes that, it dose not mean that the reading is reliable and convincing. In the lecture, the professor refutes what proves in the reading with more details and knowledge.

Firstly, the reading reminds its readers that the Americans do not trust the general advertisement, pay little attention to the ecocertified labels.  However, the fact is that the Americans do not treat all the advertisement the same.  In contrast, the professor claims that the consumers prefer independent and self-produced products. That means they will appreciate the ecocertified labels of the wood companies.

Again, the reading assets that certified wood will cost more money which will decrease people's interest to buy those labeled goods. It is not based on the fact that people will consider the price alone, only when the prices between two goods are dramatically different. With the dissimilar with the statement made in the passage, the professor claims that the consumers are still more likely to have those goods with more environment friendly labeled goods, even the goods may have a 5% higher price.

Finally, the reading rediculously assets that the US wood companies have no need to pursue the ecocertified labels if those companies' major custmers are not international. While the author fails to take the international competition into account. If the native companies ceased to catch up, they will definately lose their market in the country to the international competitors.

Consequently, the professor rationally challenges the author with all three points mentioned in the reading.

alohasallyUID: 2860276

我们同一个小组的  你的独立还没上传吗？？

jackieydanUID: 3182030

jcf你好，你的綜合我已改完，稍稍有點晚不好意思啊。。。不到位的地方，我們多做交流啊。。
等待著你對我TPO·7的修改哦。。https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1309557-1-1.html

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2# alohasally
哦 要独立和综合一起交吗？我只写了综合呀！对不起了

jcf2008UID: 2681015

3# jackieydan
谢谢小兔君~ 对于这篇integrity 感觉有些无力。绕得慌。多谢指点~ 最近电脑出了点问题，所以更贴有些慢~ 见谅

jcf2008UID: 2681015

oct. 14's assignment

The best way to improve the quality ofeducation is to increase teacher’s salaries.


As the society is developing increasinglyfast and accomplishing into perfect, education of students also comes into thepublic's concerns. In order to improve the quality of education, the public andgovernment all purposed some suggestions. Some advise that the governmentshould raise the teachers' salary into a higher level, believing that it is thebest way; others, on the other hand, argue that the states should put otherthings more about teaching into the first place, such as the new teaching facilities,students' benefits and teachers' teaching methods. In my opinion, I agree withthe second group of people.


First of all, the new teaching facilitiesshould be equipped to catch up the trends. It is undeniable that advances inscience and technology have brought advantages into people's life from everyaspect. And teaching is not an exception. The slides relive teachers' labor ofwriting with chocks on the blackboard; videos help understanding some physicsand geometry principles getting easier for students; the network and remoteeducation makes students in all over the world having chance accessing to thebest education sourse into possible. It is obviouse that the advances ofscience and technology play great roles in
improving the education quality.


Secondly, people's concern about students'benefits will also affects the process of the education development. Puttingthe students' benefits into priory rather than the benefits of principals' orthe schools' can help the school set more democratic rules and principles forstudents' growing. A school worries about whether its students need moreopportunities of having interesting courses to learn what they want, need more practiceon some particular subjects to get higher scores, and need more activities toenjoy pleasant school life. The school will attract better performed students, bettereducated experienced teachers and more competitive funds from the society.Having those sources will help promote the teaching quality.


Finally, teachers’ teaching methodsdirectly influence the quality of education by inducing students’ ability andinterests towards studying. Good teachers use closely related examples andjokes keeps their class in an atmosphere of joy and bring students interestabout the subject. Take my high school’s chemistry teacher, Mr. Li, as an example.Mr. Li is a successful teacher, won the respect not only from his students butalso his colleges; he usually uses funny but suitable metaphors and doggerelsto illustrate us some chemistry principles. Those doggerels helped us fingeringout many exercises and are kept in my mind even now. From Mr. Li’s instance, wecan find the government and schools can have more training programs forteachers, including the experienced ones, to inform them some more practicaland useful teaching skills and trends in education.


In conclusion, enhancing the schoolteachers’ teaching ability, purchasing latest teaching apparatus, and holdingtraining programs for teachers will help improve the quality of education more efficiently,perhaps more economical, than merely raising the teachers’ salaries. So that isthe reason why I dispute the inexpedient proposal that increasing the paymentof teachers will be the best way to lead to the advancement of education.

houyulinUID: 2961779

改好了 1014 jcf(revised by hyl).doc (20.5 KB, 下载次数: 3)

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6# jcf2008 ~欢迎回改~https://bbs.gter.net/thread-1309117-1-1.html

qqlddUID: 2594915

咦。。你的综合呢。。

bill5865UID: 3109557

改好了，欢迎回改

jcf2008UID: 2681015

10.18 independent writing



In the past two hundred years, the scienceand technology has revolved people's life, making live a healthier and convenientlife into possible. Among those findings and advances in science andtechnology, the majority were funded by the government. And the supports fromthe states are increasingly growing recently. People's attitudes towardsfunding on all scientific researches vary. Some, from the pragmatism aspect,suggest that the government should spend more money on researches which havemore practical uses. Another group of tax payer states that it is necessary tofund on all scientific researches, regardless of their practical uses. As ascientific student, I cannot agree with the later view any more. I willillustrate my points as follows.


First of all, there is no scientificresearch totally useless. Human beings have evolved for thousands of years. Andwhat pushes beings and our society to improve is the researches made byscientists or researchers. It is the numerous researchers' works that build thementions, produce the juicy fruit and moves the mobiles. Now we all agree thatthose inventions or findings I mentioned above are of great meaning; while atthat time, those works were regarded as a waste of time and money. We claimsome researches that are of no practical use because we do not have a big viewand do cannot evenly estimate its value in the future.


Take the hybrid rice for example. Hybridrice in China means much more than a kind of results of technology. It savesmillions of people's life in China. Back to my grandpa's childhood, there arevery few people can enjoy a nice meal. Hardly can they get rid of thestarvation, because of the limited rice that the limited land can produce.Professor Yuan, an agriculturist in China, busy much time on hybriding domesticrice with their relatives, found one kind
of his works produces much higher amount of rice than others. Thefascinating rice was called "the super rice", which feed the billionpeople now. If the government did not paid professor Yuan for his rice, the bigcountry may still suffers from starvation. From this instance, it is clear thatthe once useless research may bring people about some unexpected surprises; andthanks to those surprises, the society can keep its rate of developing for somany years.


Moreover, in my opinion, doing research isnot merely about improving the society; it is also a pattern to fulfillpeople's interests about the incredible nature. When talking about the intentof scientists who spend their whole life digging the answers from the nature,the most common reply is that "I was just curious about this." That'swhy it is also said that it's the curiosity pushes the humans to walk, to thinkand to thrive. Newton's curiosity about why apples fall down to the earth notto the moon drives humans' exploration to the universe comes into true. It alsosent the satellites into space, started the lineless communication and made ourworld becoming smaller.


To sum up, people should draw a rationalconclusion about all the researches, no matter whether they have uses or not atthe moment. Nobody can be sure that the futures of the promising invents arebright; while others will stay in the dark.

水晶灵514UID: 2901237

10月18修改
In the past two hundred years, the science and technology has revolved people's life, making live a healthier and convenient life (into去掉) possible. Among those findings and advances in science and technology, the majority were funded by the government. And the supports from the states are increasingly growing recently. People's attitudes towards funding on all scientific researches (are)vary. Some, from the pragmatism aspect, suggest that the government should spend more money on researches which have more practical uses. Another group of tax payer states that it is necessary to fund on all scientific researches, regardless of their practical uses. As a scientific student, I cannot agree with the later view any more. I will illustrate my points as follows.
First of all, there is no scientific research totally useless. Human beings have evolved for thousands of years. And what pushes beings and our society to improve is the researches made by scientists or researchers. It is the numerous researchers' works that build the mentions, produce the juicy fruit and moves the mobiles. Now we all agree that those inventions or findings I mentioned above are of great meaning; while at that（the same） time, those works were regarded as a waste of time and money. We claim some researches that are of no practical use because we do not have a big view(foresight) and do cannot evenly estimate its value in the future.
Take the hybrid rice for example. Hybrid rice in China means much more than a kind of results of technology. It saves millions of people's life(lives) in China. Back to my grandpa's childhood, there are very few people can enjoy a nice meal. Hardly can they get rid of the starvation, because of the limited rice that the limited land can produce. Professor Yuan, an agriculturist in China, busy much time on hybriding domestic rice with their relatives, found one kind of his works produces much higher amount of rice than others. The fascinating rice was called "the super rice", which feed the billion people now. If the government did not paid professor Yuan for his rice, the big country may still suffers from starvation. From this instance, it is clear that the once useless research may bring people about some unexpected surprises; and thanks to those surprises, the society can keep its rate of developing for so many years.0 K. n5 R! V4 x# Y2 F)
Moreover, in my opinion, doing research is not merely about improving the society; it is also a pattern to fulfill people's interests about the incredible nature. When talking about the intent of scientists who spend their whole life digging the answers from the nature, the most common reply is that "I was just curious about this." That's why it is also said that it's the curiosity pushes the humans to walk, to think and to thrive. Newton's curiosity about why apples fall down to the earth not to the moon drives humans' exploration to the universe comes into true. It also sent the satellites into space, started the lineless communication and made our world becoming smaller.
To sum up, people should draw a rational conclusion about all the researches, no matter whether they have uses or not at the moment. Nobody can be sure that the futures(去掉S) of the promising invents are（is） bright; while others will stay in the dark.

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10-18  我本来是修改你的综合来着   jcf-alohasally.doc (31.5 KB, 下载次数: 1)

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13# alohasally
谢谢批评。结构内容上确实不太好。